[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2017 7:33 am Title: She Speaks but Doesn't Listen...and He Mouths Off
Looks like the weasel may finally get what he deserves.
Great chapter.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2017 7:33 am Title: She Speaks but Doesn't Listen...and He Mouths Off
Looks like the weasel may finally get what he deserves.
Great chapter.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2017 3:15 am Title: She Speaks but Doesn't Listen...and He Mouths Off
Okay, Jenny still doesn't get it. Just who is her father? Did Michael do something with Brian? So many questions. Can't wait to find out the answers.
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2017 12:38 am Title: She Speaks but Doesn't Listen...and He Mouths Off
Are we sure she isn't related to Michael because she has his personality down pat???
Mel might want to seriously consider that DNA test!
Jenny plans to ruin the cotillion for everyone cause she can't get her way, I kinda want to see her do it, just for Lindsay and Jenny to have a front row seat to the Hell all the parents who paid for their child to be presented to take it out of their hides with a dull spoon.
Not to mention what Jennifer and Nya in front of everyone way before the crowd got a piece.
Lindsay taught Jenny to play in an adults world but never taught her about the consequences from people who with a phone call or a few choice words can destroy everything you hold dear and leave you in the cold forever.
Jennifer will handle Jenny accordingly for her age but it will still be adult punishment for the spoiled brat.
Mel making Jenny stand in the corner while she, Jennifer and Nya discuss cotillion business is funny.
Michael is going to understand the meaning of "Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Cold, But Destruction Deserves A Hot Feast, Chilled Champagne and a Captive Audience <evil grin>
Ted is going for Michael's very small balls and he is going to squeeze until there nothing left lol
Are they going to tell Brian, Justin, Jennifer, Nya and Deb??
Short but very informative chapter :)
Date: Nov 23, 2017 12:27 am Title: She Speaks but Doesn't Listen...and He Mouths Off
This story just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait until the ceiling falls in on Jenny, Lindsay & Michael. Thanks for the update before Thanksgiving. Got me away from cooking for a while. A good evening to you.
Date: Nov 22, 2017 6:03 am Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 2
One of the best slapdowns ever. You answered one Michael question but left so many more. Evil!
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2017 5:27 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 2
So Michael is not Jenny's father?
She learned to be a whiny brat by watching him huh?
Michael tried to roofie Brian?!?!?!?! Thank Goodness Justin saw what happened and saved Brian!
Gus and Kemi learning to fight would be a good thing for them later.
Michael is such a Moron!
Does Mason clean the offices and who is Jenny's father?
Mel is going to rip Michael apart when she finds out, then Brian is smash his precious toys to dust!!!
Jenny got what she wanted Gus is at Britin but she is still out in the cold and has to all her chores and Gus's, plus she doesn't get access to Gus's room.
Michael is itching to tell everyone Jenny is his daughter.
Lindsay didn't know what Michael was up to????
I hope Reed tells Blake so everyone can know the truth.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 4:48 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 2
The proficiency at boxing was a surprise! Could very well come in handy for the kids once they learn.
Wow!! I can't believe what Michael did and tried to do! Michael seems to be up the creek without a paddle. When people find out....man alive. there's not a rick he could crawl under that they won't find him. To say that shit will hit the fan is an understatement. Will Hudson come clean? MAson is going to have to as well. Them Michael finds out that Jenny isn't his like he assumed.LMAO! He's making all these plans for his toys to be left to Jenny....LOL!!
Jenny's well thought out plans to get Gus to live at Briton didn'texactly go as planned! hehehe. Not only will she not be able to have access to his room she now has his chores to do. BWAHAHAHA! While I could hope that doing some chores and learning to take pride in those accomplishments, I get the feeling that she's not going to partake of that lesson. She has a looooooooooooooooong way to go. It will be interesting to see if she even ever gets there.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2017 4:43 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 2
Brilliant my friend...thanku for update.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:59 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 2
Poor poor little Jenny, the world is so unfair!
Michael and his collectibles! He will be buried with them.
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:31 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 1
Great chapter ..thank u.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:21 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 2
Boxing & martial arts...something I think everyone should learn. So 'shit for brains' is in way over his head! No surprise there...did I miss something? When did Michael have 'his friend' roovie Brian & who IS Jenny's father? Do we know?
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:20 pm Title: If I Could Turn Back Time...If I Could Find A Way
Fabulous
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:12 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Loving every chapter...lovely chapter..hot scene in the start...wow.
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:08 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 2
Great chapter all the way around. I'm a little confused, Michael paid for Mel to be insemunated with his sperm but she wasn't? So he's not really Jenny's father? That would explain her behavior if he was. That he paid to roofie Brian is so sick.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 2:07 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 2
Great chapter. Really getting interesting. Amazing how you have given Jenny such a bad attitude like Lindsay. Just love it. And, Mel & Brian bonding is a great plot also. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:31 am Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 1
Finally got my account straightened out. I forgot my penname. DUH! But now I can review & want you to know I love this story and all the stories that you have written. I read them faithfully and your stories grab me from the lst chapter. Keep writing and I will definitely keep reading. Happy Thanksgiving to you.
Date: Nov 20, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 1
What a pest this girl! I love hating her and her "Mommy"!
I don't know if you have a specimen like this in your family or friends' family or neighbor, but it feels like you witnessed that.
My sister was like this sometimes, but fortunately, not this much.
Author's Response:
Ding! Ding! It is indeed the character trait of a family member, sadly she has not grown out if it and has passed it to her children...lovely just lovely.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2017 7:23 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 1
Okay, I thought I was going on another crying jag, but it was short.
Then I just wanted to rip into the two bitches and slap them, HARD.
Great job.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2017 6:56 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 1
Lindsay is using Jenny to outshine Kemi but Jenny is using Lindsay to get everything her greedy heart desires, just like her Mommy taught her too.
Everyone going to Alabama to meet Nya's family is good it gives them a break from Lindsay, Michael and Jenny at least for a little while.
I think it is a good idea for Gus to live with Brian and Justin for the rest of the summer, Gus needs to be free of Jenny's games and Lindsay's spite.
Of course since Gus won't be living with them then that means no support? <evil grin>
Will The Petersons be at the cotillion?
How much longer is Mel going to put up with Lindsay and Jenny?
How much longer before the truth comes out?
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2017 2:39 pm Title: Home Sweet Home...Part 1
The gangs all here as in Alabama? I can't get over how entitled Jenny and Lindsay feel. And how badly they treat Gus.
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2017 7:02 pm Title: If I Could Turn Back Time...If I Could Find A Way
Great chapter.
Very emotional, especially the part about Mel taking care of Brian.
Love this story.
Lorie
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2017 6:04 pm Title: If I Could Turn Back Time...If I Could Find A Way
Lindsay is a pretty, vindictive, conniving Witch and she is raising her evil twin.
Michael is an Idiot with delusions of grandeur he shares with Lindsay and his daughter.
Are we sure Jenny is really related to Mel?
Hell I wonder if Gus is really Lindsay's considering how she treats him?
Lindsay and Michael were all over Melanie when she was pregnant and that makes me wonder if they drugged her or something?
And why did they think Jenny would be there way into Brian's life and money???
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2017 1:36 pm Title: If I Could Turn Back Time...If I Could Find A Way
Love the story of how Mel and Brian got along when Brian had Kemi. Great stuff.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 9:59 am Title: If I Could Turn Back Time...If I Could Find A Way
I always thought that Mel and Brian could get along once Lindsay was out of the equation; they are so alike.
Is Jennifer suspecting that Michael is Jenny's father?