Date: Nov 18, 2017 6:15 pm Title: In The Cold Light of Day
How dares Lindsay bullying Gus like this, after Jenny ruined his clothes? So happy that Brian then Jennifer put her in her place.
I thought that Jenny's father was anonymous and now Michael says "my daughter". Did Lindsay and Michael have Jenny together without Mel knowing it? That would be the end of the rope for her.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 4:27 am Title: In The Cold Light of Day
I love your stories. Anyway, I wasn't surprised by Michael being Jenny's father. She seems to be the only child he likes. My theory is that the person who keeps calling Michael, is the one who either knows about or who is the one who helped switch the sperm sample. I can kind of figure out why Michael did it, but I haven't quite figured out what is in it for Lindsey. We know that Lindsay has always been greedy, but what would she gain by this? What they did would be illegal, I would think and it could cost her her marriage. Another thing I'm confused about is why have they not confronted Michael? I know they have messed around with his bank account, but I would have wanted to hurt him for what he said about my child. I know they wanted to deal with Lindsay and the money, but Brian is a millionaire and I don't think he was really missing the $16,0000 or $30,000. Anyway, I love, love,love your stories. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 12:35 am Title: In The Cold Light of Day
When did Jenny become Michael's daughter?
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 6:56 pm Title: In The Cold Light of Day
I KNEW IT!!!!!!
I knew Jenny had to be Michael's daughter cause she has too much of his personality and Lindsay's to be Mel's child.
When Mel finds out Michael is dead along with Lindsay, of course instead of death they both should have to pay Mel child support for the last twelve years and perhaps Lindsay and Jenny would enjoy living with Michael???
I am so pissed by Lindsay's behavior towards Gus and Jenny's scheme to get Gus's room that I want to start kicking some Asses!!!
It's bad enough that Brian was paying for Jenny but Michael feels that because Brian is his best friend and wealthy that he support Jenny Forever.
They didn't even ask just took without permission as usual and expects everything to be okay.
This Is Going To Shatter Brian, Mel and Gus.
Mel Is Going TO FRY THEIR ASSES!!!!!!!!!! Hell Everyone is Going to Fry Their Asses!!!!
This could get them jail time I think?
IF MICHAEL AND LINDSAY WANT JENNY TO HAVE A COTILLION THEN THEY SHOULD PAY FOR IT!!!
Oh Man This Is Going To Break Deb's Heart :(
Gretchen, Sophia and Wendy are going to be presented at the Cotillion? Cool :)
Where Do You Come Up With These Wonderful Stories?? <Hugs> :)
Date: Nov 17, 2017 4:14 pm Title: In The Cold Light of Day
Who's calling???????
It's going to take something MAJOR for Jenny to learn what life is really like, rather than what Lindsey is teaching her, if she learns at all. Between Michael and Lindsey, she's getting all the emotional support she's pouting for. They are such an entitled trio.
I get the impression that Jenny and Linsdey are going to cause issues at the cotillion. Bad news for them if they try. Jenn, Justin, and the gang always seem to be a step ahead of them. I am so going to enjoy reading that when you get there! LOL.
Jenny knows how to wrap Lindsey and Michael around her little finger. Those crocodile tears are fooling only them.
Lord help them if they really try to hurt K&K any further.
Miquel....BWAHAHAHAHA!
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 3:12 pm Title: All is Not What it Seems
Loving every chapter...lovely chapter..hot scene in the start...wow.
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 2:04 pm Title: In The Cold Light of Day
You leave us with a cliffy. Lindsay, Jenny and Michael are so rude yet they don't see it. It's nice that Jenny's former friends are getting to go to the ball.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 2:03 pm Title: In The Cold Light of Day
Of course Jenny wants Gus to go live with Brian...what a little witch. Ugh if Jenny, Lindsay & shit for brains had lives of their own, they wouldn't be so distracted by everyone else's.
Date: Nov 15, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Money and Friendships...Here Yesterday Gone Today
While a very large part of me wants them all to go find Michael and beat the ever loving shit out of the little bastard, another part wants his eventual demise to be much more painful than just a physical beating. I want it to be permanant. the end of all relationships with the gang. I want everyone on teh Avenue to find out what a low life evil mother F he really is.
Lindsey has 6!!! SIX bank accounts? On top of that Michael seems to have a hidden one as well. curious how Hudon's brother fits into all of this. who is he? what's his scheme? Ooooooooooooooohhhhh. the tension is mounting! So exciting!
Nya is doing wondrously nasty things to the 2 low lifes! Lindsey is only beginning to feel the hurt all her shenanigans are causing. Mel's in your face, bitch out was fabulous! I'm actually surprised that Lindsey came clean over it.
Gretchen...WOW! Brilliantly said especially for one so young. Hard to believe tha t Jenny is only 12 and just so unbelievably nasty.
Oh I absolutely can't wait for the cotillion! going to be such fun. Well, at least for everyone else. Perhaps not for Lindsey or Jenny. It appears Jennifer may have something devilish up her sleeve as well. Yup...definitely going to be aninteresting night when it comes.
Loving every chapter! Every word of this is fantastic!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2017 7:24 pm Title: Money and Friendships...Here Yesterday Gone Today
I wonder if the reason why Michael is paying this guy is because he might be Jenny's real father?
Or maybe Michael is Jenny's father and this guy knows and is blackmailing Michael cause Michael doesn't want to be forced to pay twelve years of child support??
There is some reason Michael is paying this guy and I wonder how long has it been going on?
Ted upset got me all teary-eyed and I can understand everyone wanting to find Michael so they can rip him apart.
But the money being taken out of his account is much better.
Lindsay hiding thirty grand and still trying to justify it is not surprising, in her eyes she was doing nothing wrong, just putting aside a little mad money, if course if Mel had a secret account she would have Pitched a Bitch for days about keeping secrets.
Jenny really is more Lindsay's and Michael's child then Mel's and that is sad, she has no integrity or understanding of her wrongs.
She just feels that if she wants something she should be entitled to get it and Damn anyone who stands in her way!!
Wendy, Gretchen and Sophia telling off Jenny was so mature and I applaud those three young ladies for standing there ground and telling the truth about Jenny's behavior towards them and walking away from such a toxic friendship.
I hope Gus does stay with Brian, Justin and the Double Ks he needs a long vacation from Lindsay and Jenny. (Maybe Mel should leave and leave Jenny & Lindsay to fend for themselves?? :))
So now that everyone knows the truth what fun are they going to have with Michael? (Will all of Liberty Avenue be able to join in to?)
And Mel about to have with Lindsay and Jenny?? :)
The Cotillion Is Going To Be Memorable!! lol
Keanu Reeves...OMGAWD HOT!!! <fans self> At Any Age!! ;)
Date: Nov 15, 2017 4:27 pm Title: Money and Friendships...Here Yesterday Gone Today
I love the way Mel and Nya are dealing with Wendy.
Poor little Jenny, who lost her friends and will soon have some payback at the cotillion.
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2017 3:49 pm Title: Money and Friendships...Here Yesterday Gone Today
Darn, I was looking forward to Teddy taking Michael out. The trick with the bank is neat. So was Nya being Adrien Perkiss, or if that was the bank who took the call? I'm glad that Jenny's friends told her what they think of her. Is there any hope for Jenny?
Author's Response:
As tempting as that would be, Blake loves his Teddy Bear un-incarcerated! It was indeed Nya who was pretending to be the bank after she found what she found when digging into Lindsay's finances. There may be hope....but it is always darkest before the dawn.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2017 3:12 pm Title: Money and Friendships...Here Yesterday Gone Today
This is freaking awesomeee.
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2017 2:47 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
Fabulous...loving it soo much.
Date: Nov 15, 2017 1:46 pm Title: Money and Friendships...Here Yesterday Gone Today
Is it bad that I want someone, anyone at this point, to beat the shit out of Michael? He needs a serious lesson learned. They set Lindsay up very nicely, well done Nya! I think Ted is her biggest fan!
Date: Nov 14, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
Another amazing chapter! The beginning is hilarious with Brian and Justin teased by the kids and Jennifer.
Then the fun is gone as Kemi relates what Jenny told her.
I really love Mel in this story as she doesn't give any latitude to Jenny and make her accountable for her nasty acts or words.
Brian found a good way to make Jenny "pay" for the disaster she made in Gus' room. He also will get back the money Lindsay stole from him, even if he doesn't need it. I love that Brain asked Jenny to take her gloves off!
Gus, Nya and Ted are ready to punch some nasty pretentious leech!
This quote is fabulous: "it is like wrestling a greased and very angry alligator".
Date: Nov 14, 2017 6:04 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
My heart was breaking over the hurt done by Jenny. (Michael being the initial cultrit) I can't believe she said somethign like that! It's like she has no comprehension of right adn wrong. will she come to learn it in time? I hope she does for her sake. I simply can't envision Mel or anyone else allowing that kind of behaviour to continue. While she will get her punishments as she so deserves, is she really going to remain so selfish and in all honesty, such a dangerous bully? Will the tides turn against her in time for her to learn a lesson early enough in life to be able to change this aspect of her? Midn you....look at Michael. Nothing has changed his personality. Will Jenny follow in teh same kind of footsteps as him?
Michael is in for a WORLD of hurt! OMG...his suffering will be empic if Nya and Ted have anything to do about it, never mind what Brian and Justin will eventually do to him. A part of me thinks I should feel a bit bad about what's going to happen to him eventually, but he spoke out against a child....there is not suffering enough for him in my book. He derserves whatever comes to him. (times 10!!)
Lindsey is in for a rude awakening as well. Her little money hoard has been found out. Is it the only one or does she have an alternate one somewhere hidden? If she does, she bett hold onto it as she won't be getting anything else from Brian I'm sure. He'll be letting Mel handle all the finances fgoing forward I'm sure.
Terrific story. AS always, looking forward to what's going to happen. So may repercussions to occur. Will Jenny and Lindsey still be able to attend the cotillion adn if so, what will happen there? I can't see Lindsey not trying to push herself into specific circles and bringing Jenny along with her. They will lose a lot of they don't change their ways soon. Mind you, I always enjoy reading of Lindsey and Michael's demise!! ;) A part of me hopes that Jenny starts to learn her lessons though without too much damage being done. She is only 12 and is oung enough to turn away from the road she's travelling on. I guess I'll have to wait and see what you have up your sleeves.
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
I don't think Mel covering for Lindsay is a good thing that's always been the problem with Lindsay and Michael, instead of everyone always calling them out on the crap they cover it up.
You can't call them out for one thing and then gloss over when they do something worse.
By not being truthful it gives them leeway to expect everything they do to be easily forgiven.
Plus it has shown Jenny that no matter how big the trouble is it will be pushed aside so as not to upset the natural order.
Michael is not a child and it has been way past time to stop treating him like one.
And if Jenny wants to play in an Adults World then she better be prepared for Adult Consequences along with her favorite Mommy ;)
Date: Nov 14, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
Time to put BUB Jenny in her place. Doing chores isn't enough. There should be no cotillion. She's already lost friends. Better change her ways real fast.
Mel found out about one of Lindsay's back accounts but I'm pretty sure there's another one...somewhere.
Where is Ted off to? Michael? Lindsay? I don't pity either one when he gets done.
Date: Nov 14, 2017 1:23 pm Title: Heaven and Hell
You said Jenny was 12 right? I have to know...how & why in the world was she allowed to go near alcohol? I can't get over it...I could get Lindsey spouting some shit, drunk off her ass but a child?
I can't even address everything else in this chapter, which was awesome by the way. I'm still thinking about the last chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes Jenny is 12 but she's also spoilt, sneaking and attention seeking. She presented herself as being helpful and solicitous and wasn't.
Thansk for the awesomeness comment...but rest assured that the last time she tangles with booze...gets up to more spoilt mischief yes but booze related nope.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 14, 2017 5:46 am Title: Heaven and Hell
Should have let Nya at all of them.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 3:58 am Title: Heaven and Hell
Michael has a death wish. And it will be delivered by Ted of all people.
Please, Please have Lindsey be banned from the cotillion, by Jennifer no less?
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 3:52 am Title: Heaven and Hell
Okay, I'm dying to learn what they plan to do to Michael for saying such horrible things. Exactly what is Ted doing?
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 3:47 am Title: Heaven and Hell
HOLY SHIT!!!
If Jenny wasn't a child I would so want to kick her Ass until the end of time!!!
That the little snotnose would say what she said to Kemi but to also call her a BUB and to intentionally go into Gus's room and repeatedly Toss her cookies on Gus's stuff has me so pissed off.
So Lindsay stole $14,000 From Brian and hid it from Mel and Jenny?
I thought ' No One Keeps Secrets In This Family'??
How much more has she stole from Brian and how many more accounts does Lindsay have?
So why did Michael tell Jenny that he wished Kemi hadn't survived and where did Jenny here someone say "Butt Ugly Bitch' before?
I feel bad for Sophie who didn't deserve to be the butt of Jenny's cruelty.
Looks like Ted is going to beat Nya to beating Michael's Ass (Not That He Has One! lol).
Jenny doing her and Gus's chores is good but that little brat needs the belt, Mel forcing Lindsay to be the Bad Guy will sting, but those two spoiled brats are in for some hurts they will never recover from.
Is Michael paying off a PI?
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Nov 13, 2017 6:02 pm Title: Happy Independence Day and Happy Dancing...for Some
Fireworks!!! Inside and outside! A little K in 9 months? The Kinney kids won't have to wonder if they parents will stay together: the fusion resumed where it stopped last time.
Jenny is going to have a big surprise when she will be a young adult if she deals with problems like she is doing now.