[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2017 3:44 am Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out
Fantastic...soo well written...thank u for the update.
Date: Oct 31, 2017 8:01 pm Title: Parenting and Laying Down the Law
I get that they both got pregnant at the same time, but the eggs splitting means nothing. Brian got pregnant from his egg being fertilized by Justin and vice versa. Their eggs never came in contact.
Author's Response:
Thank you for you review. This is an alternative universe and MPREG fic, therefore, anything is possible.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2017 6:58 pm Title: Parenting and Laying Down the Law
Loving this story.
The bitch and the weasel need a reality check. They don't come first in Brian's life and now they are going to be moved even further down. Just what they deserve.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2017 4:42 pm Title: Parenting and Laying Down the Law
Michael doling out parenting advice is funny since he doesn't have any kids and doesn't like them because they take the focus away from him.
Jenny is Lindsay's daughter and that is not a good thing because there is no way Kendi is gonna befriend anyone who hurts her sister or brother. (Mel might want to invest in a safe to store Jenny's phone and iPad)
$385.00 for Trainers that she never wore!?!?!?!?!
I would be beating that amount out of either Lindsay or Jenny's Ass!!
Brian and Justin raised smart, thoughtful children and Lindsay is raising herself to want exactly what she wants and expecting Brian to pay for it.
Michael, Lindsay and Jenny are about to have their eyes opened to the real world.
Brian and Justin are getting closer and now that paternity has been determined, they is nothing and no one stopping them now :)
Jennifer is back in Pittsburgh so let the games begin lol
Date: Oct 31, 2017 3:36 pm Title: Parenting and Laying Down the Law
Omg i love this fic lol Jenny a lil shit hope she changes her ways lol she sounds like Michael very whiney
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2017 1:10 pm Title: Parenting and Laying Down the Law
It's hard to believe that Jenny is Mel's daughter, the way she acts is all Lindsay. I'm liking Mel in this tale. We've gotten to meet Jennifer, that's going to add some more excitement. Now why was Teddy crying?
Author's Response:
Yes our Jennifer is going to have a marvellous time, revenging on Lindsay. Especially when Lindsay finds out how well Justin has done. OUr Teddy was crying because he was so happy for Brian.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 31, 2017 1:02 pm Title: Parenting and Laying Down the Law
Okay boys, let the games begin! Who can make who the horniest the soonest? lol Lindsay & Michael are totally delusional...that's all. Go Jennfier! Cute Teddy, all emotional....awwwwww. So our boys are finally alone together....let the REAL game begin!
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2017 11:50 am Title: Parenting and Laying Down the Law
I absolutely love this story. Kenya is a true Dom and Lindsey better be careful.
Thank you for the update love as always it's a great one 😘💕😆
~Teresa~
Date: Oct 31, 2017 11:03 am Title: Parenting and Laying Down the Law
Amazing chapter on so many levels!
The teasing between Brian and Justin is just sweet torture.
The bashing of Lindsey and Michael is delightful.
For once, Mel shows she has a backbone and she isn't anti-Brian: that's so refreshing. She isn't anti-Lindsey nor anti-Michael, she just highlights what they do/say wrong. As for her children, she is also just fair.
I can't wait for Jenny to try to "charm" Kendi and for Jennifer to prepare Lindsey's welcoming in the WASP's world; I just can't believe she will put her in her place without some public to witness that moment.
Date: Oct 31, 2017 8:05 am Title: Parenting and Laying Down the Law
Very informative. Who does Jenny think she is?
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 9:37 pm Title: You Say Curious We Say Meddlesome...Very Meddlesome
Great chapter. Love this story. Want to hurt a couple of people, AGAIN.
~Lorie
Date: Oct 29, 2017 8:20 pm Title: You Say Curious We Say Meddlesome...Very Meddlesome
Lindsay is a piece of work isn't she?
Date: Oct 29, 2017 4:52 pm Title: You Say Curious We Say Meddlesome...Very Meddlesome
Kemi is a great thinker: she can't stand Michael and dares acting on it. I love that girl!
Lindsey is in her bubble, lost in her dreams. The wake-up will be harder.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 4:40 pm Title: You Say Curious We Say Meddlesome...Very Meddlesome
Michael & Lindsay have no idea what boundaries are...assholes! You tell 'em Justin! Papa bear! lol Are we going to get family time for B/J, Gus & the girls anytime soon, without any interruptions? Hope so
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 4:26 pm Title: You Say Curious We Say Meddlesome...Very Meddlesome
Lindsay must be smoking crack if she thinks she is getting close to Justin after that stupid stunt and badmouthing him at the country club years ago.
Even if Justin didn't hear what was said it won't be hard to find out who said.
And if Justin is as rich as she thinks he is then he won't be above not only ruining her but her family aswell if they choose to join in her stupidity.
And Gus would have already told his sisters about Jenny so no way is using Jenny going to work because Mel is going to be pissed.
Lindsay and her jealousy is not surprising just like her grandiose attitude she is going to get squashed and it will be Hilarious!!
So what new idea is Michael going to come up with next?
They don't know what Hell is about to rain all over their heads lol
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 2:11 pm Title: You Say Curious We Say Meddlesome...Very Meddlesome
Sadly Lindsay is living up to, or is it down to, her reputation. First off, the girls are twins so they would have the same birthdays, Michael. Duh! Loving this.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 1:01 pm Title: You Say Curious We Say Meddlesome...Very Meddlesome
There's one very big problem with all of Lindsay's plotting. Jennifer Taylor. Not too mention the stupidity of Michael Novotny.
She's not entitled to shit and I can't wait for her devious plan to blow up in her face.
As for Jenny, as long as she carries that attitude both of the girls will have nothing ti do with her. Much to her and Lindsay's chagrin.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 6:23 am Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out
Fantastic...soo well written...thank u for the update.
Date: Oct 28, 2017 2:46 pm Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out
Ruj people run!! Your world as you know it is about to be infested with weasles and other vermin.
Thank goodness Jen is on her way back. She'll put that skank and skank jr in their places.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2017 2:58 am Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out
I LOVE this story. Please write fast, since I know you're never busy and have absolutely nothing else to do. ;)
~Lorie
Date: Oct 27, 2017 6:44 pm Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out
DNA? Really? Michael should buy some glasses: they look like twins. If he finds a brain, he can buy as well.
The munchers are going to be less than receptive when they will meet Brian. I also hope that they won't meet Justin too soon. They don't need to bully him.
Funny chapters to come, I guess. I can't wait!
Date: Oct 27, 2017 5:55 pm Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out
Oooooooooooooh more interaction with the new family. Learning all about other members, (namely L&M and JR)
I get the impression that JR is going to continue to be a smart ass little brat, but I'm also hoping that she learns a lesson rather quickly. Especially if she wants a relationship with them all. Hopefully she figures out that behaving like a pretentious little brat isn't going to get her far. Lindsey I think is going to find out as well, and JR may not want to receive the same kind of lessons. Who knows.
I'm so excited about this one!. OK....So I get insanely excited about all your stories, but still....
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 27, 2017 4:07 pm Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out
The spider and her pesky ass fly!! NICE!!
Can't wait to see what happens when the kids meet each other. I can so imagine K&K kicking some manners into the haughty Jenny Rebecca. It could be a feast for sore eyes to see that entitled little princess taking down a notch.
I also can't wait for the spider to meet BAB!! I foresee some major ass kicking for the spider as well as her persky ass fly. Let the games begin.
XOXO
MeMa
Date: Oct 27, 2017 3:24 pm Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out
Michael is a friggin idiot but that's a given. And Lindsay is upset? What entitled pricks the two of them!
Glad Nia, Em & teddy are bonding...very nice. Best line: "You just want to watch my ass" This is going to be fun!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2017 2:17 pm Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out
Sounds like Jenny is going to learn a hard lesson just like Michael and Lindsay, perhaps two hard lessons cause no way are Gus, Kendi and Kemi going to let her get away with her continued Lindsay Personality Drama.
Michael isn't even third now and Lindsay might want to start counting her pennies cause Brian is not going to continue to support her and her little mini me.
So as soon as the blood test is confirmed can everyone have at Michael?
I'm sure The Avenue is itching to kick to that flat Ass and his partner in crime? lol
Nya is so going to love meeting Lindsay ;)