Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2017 12:15 pm Title: Tentative Foundations and They Find Out

This is such a great story, but it would be since you wrote it.  It's almost a shame that Michael and Lindsay will try to spoil things, but again it makes for good reading.  Like how ofter you post!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 7:14 pm Title: And This Is...Then They Meet Again

Excellent! Hilarious! So happy Michael got excluded by everyone, included his mother.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 5:52 pm Title: Goodbye and Hello...I said Hello!

Love Craig being the supportive father in this story sorry that he is dead, but at least he died happy lol

Gus met Kendi!

Michael deserves to have his Ass kicked up and down Liberty Avenue and so does Lindsay.

Guess Mel learned going with an anonymous donor wasn't all it was cracked up to be, especially since Brian is paying for everything, so much for being independent <smirks>

Lindsay thought by having another baby with Brian she would have a tighter hold on him, that goodness Brian is smarter than her.

Sounds like Jenny is a handful.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 2:43 pm Title: And This Is...Then They Meet Again

Oh dear lord. Find some quicksand or something for Michael to keep him busy. Grating on my nerves.

Well that's one way of getting everyone to meet. How sweet was it that Justin fainted. Sight of Brian or both girls together or all of the above, yay.

Kenya bigger bitch than Daphne ever was.

However is Mikey to get out of the bathroom? Ha!

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 2:16 pm Title: And This Is...Then They Meet Again

Awww....that last part...got to me..so romantic...amazing chapter...thank u.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 1:11 pm Title: Goodbye and Hello...I said Hello!

Oh...the twist and turns...i love them...superb work...loving it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 10:05 am Title: And This Is...Then They Meet Again

Enjoyable much.  Want to see how the girls get a long with each other and Gus.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 2:07 am Title: Goodbye and Hello...I said Hello!

MMichael's a bigger ass than usual. If I were Justin I would have let Hero at him. Ha! Like Justin would ever have hired him.

I'm confused why Brian was supporting Jenny. Why are the girls moving back? Why did Justin have to move back after Craig died? 

Now, Brian and Justin had a fuckfest weekend. Didn't exchange names? Both got pregnant. Ok but i don't see how the girls would look so much alike that Gus wouldn't know the difference.

I have so many questions because there isn't much explanation as to why.

 

 

Author's Response:

Dear Sophiesmom,

All answers to questions are coming in the next couple of chapters. Although Hero isn’t in this story, I would’ve let him at him too!

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2017 12:48 am Title: All is Not What it Seems

 

As usual, one chapter and I want to throw someone off a tall building in slow motion. Care to guess who I mean?

Great writing as usual.

~Lorie

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Goodbye and Hello...I said Hello!

The brat?! Surely Brian has to have some idea how Michael feels about his daughter? Omg can someone shoot him please? "I can watch tv until you wake up...seriously? Doesn't he have a friggin job? I can tell I'm going to be hating on Michael this whole story. lol 

What is the turnpike? Is that a gymnastic move or something? Craig was a nice guy? Shocking! Is Kenya Kendi's gomother? I thought they had been penpals, wouldn't that makw them the same age? Where's Daphne, no Daph?

Kemi & Kendi...pretty unique names...do they mean something and where do they originate? So Jenny isn't Michael's, thank God! But she's a little bitch huh? lol 

Hahaha poor Gus, getting punched by 'his sister'...'Why do you have my sister's face?' lmao 

Author's Response:

Glo,

A turnpike is a skateboarding trick. There is no Daph in this one but have put some of her personality in Kenya, so you get her but not quite and yes Kenya is her godmother. Kendi means queen and Kemi means beloved, both from Africa, their namings will be explained later...and no Jenny isn’t but there’s also a story with those two too...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2017 1:30 pm Title: Goodbye and Hello...I said Hello!

I don't know how you come up with these stories but this ones a doozy.  Gus is pivotal to this one as he now has 3 sisters.  If you count JR, who sounds to be a terror.  LP Jr is the right name for her.  I wonder who her father really is, as she sounds a lot like Michael.  Going to enjoy the antics of Ted and Emmett as they try to avoid Michael.  Can't wait for Kemi and Kendi to meet face to face.

Reviewer: mcm Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2017 5:36 am Title: Goodbye and Hello...I said Hello!

Yes you rock girl. I just fell in love with the girls 😘

So love the possibility of anti Lindsey. JR better be careful with Kendi after the way she punched Gus. Both of the girls are going to be double trouble once they are united.  

 

~Teresa~

 

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2017 5:19 am Title: All is Not What it Seems

This is an awesome start...amazing banner...and looks interesting story.