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Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 7:36 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

I have to wonder about Catharine's sanity by getting herself involved with Lindsey. I mean really??? She has got to know what she's really like. Ah well....live and learn as they say.

I always enjoy when you bring the animals into the storyline. How they have their own conversations.  Makes it such fun. Smart little things aren't they??

Brain rewarded Justin quite nicely for hsi bravery. ;) Their kisses are so....intimate. Even better they are really opening up to each other. Brain is telling Justin about hsi childhood. Can't be easy for him, but we know that Justin will understand.

that whole scene at Stanley's was hilarious. It's hard to believe Michael's presumption! I mean really...who goes to someone's house and assumes they can just invite themselves to stay. Especially someone like Michael. 

Wonder if Michael is going to take Albert up on his most obvious offer?

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:26 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

 

Love this story, but ewwwww... weasel and sex. Need brain bleach.

~Lorie

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

It seems Albert's pare bedroom won't be free of charge...

The scene with the bags was hilarious; I loved "the entitlement express".

The scenes with Justin and Brian were funny, tender and very emotional; they have a great relationship growing.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 3:12 pm Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

Love this story.  Of course, I love anytime that Michael is an idiot and you are doing a fine job of showing that.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 6:47 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

Oh Michael, I hope you learn a valuable lesson or two.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2017 5:40 am Title: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

Love how the animals are being treated.  Can't get over Michael inviting himself to move in with Stanley.  At least Alberts going to get something out of this. Hehehehe.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Cat's In and Cast Out

Lindsay is being excluded from her family and the committee.

Well done from Moon on her bag!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2017 1:59 pm Title: Cat's In and Cast Out

Nice meeting between the cat and the dogs.  We get new food and no Lindsay at something special.  Good job.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2017 11:09 am Title: Cat's In and Cast Out

What a good chapter.  Love how the dogs communicate.  So funny.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2017 5:12 am Title: Cat's In and Cast Out

You know Lindsay sitting on a box of chocolates won't make her snatch any sweeter lol

Moon is such a good dog!

Gus's cat is such a wonderful addition to The Pack and will love being an 'Honorary Dog' <giggles>

Lindsay is being edged out of a very big social event and she is edging her way out of the family.

And if I we're Lindsay (And Thank Goodness I'm Not!) I would wonder where Catherine is putting her Wondrous Tongue when Lindsay isn't around <shudders> (Sorry I Put That Out There)

The Princess and Prince of Liberty Avenue have good foundations which means they will never be like Lindsay.

So how will Lindsay worm her way in?

 

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Pick Your Battles and Your Paths Wisely

 

Such a beautiful cat. Just want to snuggle it.

~Lorie

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 6:53 pm Title: Pick Your Battles and Your Paths Wisely

WOW! Lindsey certainly got her ass handed to her! Unreal! Effy is a wonder. Great support from the family too. We knos everything is going to go downhill fast for her. Who's going to find out about her and her "friend"?

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 5:45 pm Title: Pick Your Battles and Your Paths Wisely

Lindsay got her Ass handed to her again by Effy and she should be embarrassed that her daughter has so many ugly names to call at the drop of a hat.

Lindsay had no right to slap Norm and I hope someone got a picture of the bruise before the swelling goes down, if the situation had been reversed Lindsay would have runned to the police to have Norman or anyone else arrested.

Catherine is going to wish that she had called someone else for her "Fun" <shudders>

Lindsay thinking she is going to win is like Michael thinking he can come up with a Brilliant foolproof idea.

Norman should talk to a lawyer and get the ball rolling on a divorce before Lindsay does.

The boutique is in Lindsay's name and if she wants the house than put it in her name so she can pay for the mortgage and upkeep.

I am gel neither Brian, Effy or Norman hit Lindsay could she would have milked it for all it was worth.

Michael putting his foot in his mouth again as usual <eye roll> I swear his brain must be on extended vacation with the way his mouth runs.

Gus, Effy and Norman are going to enjoy being away from the Melodious Cuntstain, and getting to know Gus's new cat lol

Fantastic Update :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 2:02 pm Title: Pick Your Battles and Your Paths Wisely

Lindsay is wicked, wicked, wicked.  She lies and thinks she's winning.  Michael embarressed himself.  Now Gus has his own place and is planning to get a pet that is not Brian approved!  Haha.  Nice pic.  I'm sure Effy will love spending time with Gus

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 1:18 pm Title: Pick Your Battles and Your Paths Wisely

Fantastic chapter.  Love the kitty picture.  And, of course, Brian's comment.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 7:12 am Title: Pick Your Battles and Your Paths Wisely

Effy is really feisty and has an amazing list of pet names for her mother!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 6:36 am Title: Burning Bridges, Totally Not Hot and Saying the Word

Hot! Hot! Hot!

Lindsey is going to see a very angry Brian and she might get burnt.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 6:12 am Title: Pick Your Battles and Your Paths Wisely

That is the prettiest pussycat ever, Lindsay not so much.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2017 12:38 am Title: Burning Bridges, Totally Not Hot and Saying the Word

Oh my our naughty boys.  This just keeps getting better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2017 12:23 am Title: Burning Bridges, Totally Not Hot and Saying the Word

Nice to see that Lindsay will not get her way.  Love Norman, he cares about Gus and Effy.  Michael coming downstairs nude!  How awkward.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2017 12:08 am Title: Burning Bridges, Totally Not Hot and Saying the Word

Michael made everyone nauseous with his lack of genitalia no man or woman would desire what little Michael has to offer.

Vic is tired of living with a man-child so he is kicking him out for good.

Whatever Michael plans should be bad for some and funny for others cause he refuses to grow up.

And his twin Lindsay refuse to see that just because they want something doesn't mean they should get it.

Effy was right that Lindsay is only concerned about the money she care less if he lived home, but she doesn't want the support money to stop.

How much of the money was set aside for Gus?

Norm is standing up to Lindsay more and it is good for him to continue cause Lindsay is going to get worse and there is no better in sight :(

Brian and Justin were so Hot I bet everyone felt the heat coming from that apartment lol

Lindsay is going to wish she had moved out cause Sunday is going to be brutal...For Her <evil grin>

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2017 11:51 pm Title: Burning Bridges, Totally Not Hot and Saying the Word

 

Lindsay is nothing but a nasty cunt.

Kiki's comments about the weasel's lack of... anything was HILARIOUS.

The boys are sexy and HOT.

~Lorie



Author's Response:

Oh she gets a wee bit worse...

Happy reading

- MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2017 4:34 am Title: Three Lions, A Twitch, A Bitch and Her Wardrobe

Lindsey didn't understand her last lesson: she's going to lose her family, friends, job and money.

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2017 3:32 pm Title: Three Lions, A Twitch, A Bitch and Her Wardrobe

 

Love this story.

~Lorie

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2017 1:34 pm Title: Three Lions, A Twitch, A Bitch and Her Wardrobe

Lindsay still doesn't get it.  How did Gus manage to find out about her cheating.  Then there is her buying clothing that went to charity.  Norman isn't letting her get away with it is he?

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