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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2017 1:00 pm Title: Three Lions, A Twitch, A Bitch and Her Wardrobe

Really good chapter.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2017 5:01 am Title: Three Lions, A Twitch, A Bitch and Her Wardrobe

Wow the idiots abound 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2017 4:56 am Title: Three Lions, A Twitch, A Bitch and Her Wardrobe

Gee, I wonder where Gus heard that rumor about Lindsay??

Lindsay might want to get her bags ready because I doubt this will be the last time this rumor floats around.

Michael is out of his mind if he thinks that Brian would give him a nickel much less a penny to open a comic book store.

That is just throwing good hard earned money after bad, Michael couldn't manage the Big Q without stealing so how could he manage a Comic Book Store!!.

Lindsay just won't stop "Appropriating" stuff from her store and she is going to get caught in one of the outfits and like Cinderella it is going to get ripped off her in front of a audience of her lol

I hope Norm has made moves to protect himself and the kids, not surprised Gus wants to move out and Vic finally kicked Michael out.

Time to drop the dead weight!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2017 5:59 pm Title: Missing the Point and Meeting God...oh God!

Once again, amazing recipes and horny bunnies!

Moon, Hero and God: very funny how Moon taught Hero about God and the wiggling. Daddy happy things...

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2017 5:25 am Title: Missing the Point and Meeting God...oh God!

Brian, Justin and delicious food always mean it is going to get Hot, Steamy and Sticky lol

Hero and Moon looking for the God person is funny.

Lindsay has been home for two weeks and she still hasn't apologized?

Bitch Meet Curb, Curb Meet Bitch,  Play nice you two cause your going to be seeing a lot of each other. Then I would change the locks lol

The fact that her boutique and her "Meeting" are more important than apologizing just says she needs to find a new place to live...Quickly!! 

I really can't wait for Lindsay to get hers right between the eyes.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2017 4:39 am Title: Missing the Point and Meeting God...oh God!

I must say, Justin's days training have come to a wonderful ending.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2017 4:28 am Title: Missing the Point and Meeting God...oh God!

Love when Brian & Justin are happy.  Great job. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 10:46 am Title: All About The Legacy, The Reality and So It Begins

I loved the scene with Deb: she seems happy with her new life. Michael has a hard time understanding that.

Moon is so funny, over-reactive as all puppies are.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 1:18 am Title: All About The Legacy, The Reality and So It Begins

Lindsay is in trouble no doubt about it.  Michael thought Mama would back him up and was disappointed to find that she's not going to.  So Eric is straight?  That's good for Molly.  Just what sauce did Justin split?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 1:08 am Title: All About The Legacy, The Reality and So It Begins

Hope Catherine is ready for Lindsay's clinging because it is coming.

Deb telling off Michael and Gilda rapping him on the nose before spanking his Ass as she threw him out is Funny and so what he needed.

Looks like Michael is being left behind by everyone :)

Lindsay is in trouble with her lying and thieving concerning the store too bad she can't be arrested now :(

Justin is having a meltdown in New York and only one Brian Kinney can aide him in his time of need ;)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 12:45 am Title: All About The Legacy, The Reality and So It Begins

The nasties are getting what they deserve.  Love the way the dogs "talk".  So good.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2017 5:17 pm Title: Couplings

Yeah Molly, go for it! "Pussy pirate": where did you find that? Hilarious!

The Captain is losing every member of his crew and the hot guy he was drooling over.



Author's Response:

Pussy pirate was courtsey of my fellow co-author. She had several more where that came from...

Happy reading

MissMerlo

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2017 5:05 pm Title: Dinner is Served...And So Is Something Else

Eric, Heathan and Standley are so funny, hiding from Michael, who still hasn't a clue.

Brian and his foodgasm: with Justin he is going to have many of them as well as the usual ones.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2017 11:41 pm Title: Couplings

Fantastic chapter.  Don't let Lindsay go back home.  She is so undeserving.  Michael is a rotten dweeb.  Like how Molly helps Eric out.

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2017 5:52 pm Title: Couplings

Pussy Pirate! Bwah!

 

Great chapter!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2017 5:03 pm Title: Couplings

Molly is so wicked but it worked to get Michael out and now Molly can have some fun with Eric lol

Lindsay and Catherine make me gag I wonder if Catherine and her friends would be able to continue their games if they were blasted in front of the most influential people in Pittsburgh???

Good for Effy deciding that she doesn't want Lindsay to come back, Effy is putting her happiness and her dad's first instead of trying to placate Lindsay.

Leda now knows to send a decoy list instead of the real one lol

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2017 4:44 pm Title: Dinner is Served...And So Is Something Else

I wish I had been there all  that food sounds delicious and I totally understand Brian stealing from Drew's plate lol


Lindsay is doing a wonderful job of Acting contrite too bad she doesn't feel it.


She only feels bad for getting kicked out and like Norm said if she really felt sorry she would have apologized by now.


I want Lindsay to fall off her cushy pillow so hard that it will leave marks for decades.


By canceling the room doesn't the money revert back to Norm's account??


Michael thinks he is being clever but in actuality he is being slimy and Eric doesn't want that slime oozing all over him lol


Stan and Heath getting together will hopefully make them both too busy for Michael's shenanigans.


 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2017 3:04 pm Title: Dinner is Served...And So Is Something Else

So Norm threw Lindsay out.  About time.  First thing she does, not apologize to her daughter, is muff diving.  Shame, shame.  Michael thinking Eric would be interested in HIM?  So funny.  Love how Molly scotched that.  Justin is a success and Brian will reap the rewards.  

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2017 8:06 am Title: Couplings

Thanks that was great. The only way it could have been better was if it was in front of the gang.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2017 5:53 pm Title: Dinners...well almost

Michael deserves whatever happens to him. Lindsay pretending to not remember, what a laugh.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2017 5:41 pm Title: Dinners...well almost

Brian is very sneaky but he had to know what Lindsay said to Effy and waiting for Justin to finish was too long lol

What Game is Lindsay Playing At???

Does she really think Norm or anyone else is going to buy her act?

So everyone is supposed to believe she had a Rage Blackout and can't remember the hurtful things she said to her husband and daughter?

Bitch Please!!!

Norm kicking her out of his bedroom and into the guest room is a good start but her out if the house picking up her ill gotten gains would be more picture worthy.

So Stan and Eric have the same relationship as Brian and Ben?

And Eric is helping Stan get together with Heathan, while avoiding the clingy grasp of Michael is a good thing for everyone.

Justin yelling about his sex life is funny and a lesson Not to provoke a sleeping tiger lol

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2017 5:00 pm Title: Dinners...well almost

Justin's bellowing about his sex life is hilarious; Brian is really a naughty guy and we love it.

The chocolate cake seems amazing: I just want to eat one big slice!

Is Lindsay this dumb that she is trying to make like her outburst didn't happen or that she was not responsible for it?

I loved how Brian tricked to get the information and was ready to defend "his Princess".

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2017 1:47 pm Title: Dinners...well almost

I'm so glad that all the guys are protective of Effy.  Text messaging can get you in trouble.  Even if they are funny.  Liking Eric.  He's very smart.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2017 6:43 pm Title: Presumptive Wants, Bitchy Truths and Desperate Needs

The Captain is losing all the members of his team and he won't have any room to sleep if he continues bothering everybody.

Lindsay is getting the cold treatment from quite everybody, but she doesn't back off. What does she expect? Thanksgiving?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2017 12:54 am Title: Presumptive Wants, Bitchy Truths and Desperate Needs

Michael is slowly losing his followers.  And what is Lindsay thinking.  I was hoping that Norm would push her out the door and into the street.  How dare she talk to Effy that way!

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