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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2017 12:11 am Title: Presumptive Wants, Bitchy Truths and Desperate Needs

Lindsay meant what she said to Effy and that makes it more cruel because I think she resents that Effy has none of her traits, doesn't covet attention, money or constant praise the way her mother does.

Effy has a sweetness and charm that is all her own and that pulls people towards her, but she doesn't abuse it to hurt others, she also isn't naive enough to believe everyone is good, when she sees a wrong she tries to right it so the fallout doesn't effect everyone, just the person/persons who caused it.

I thought Molly was going over to rip Lindsay a new Asshole and Gus would record it for posterity lol

Better that everyone came to cheer Effy up and that Effy knows she has somewhere to run when Lindsay does this to her again (We All Know It Will Happen Again :()

If Lindsay had spoken to my child like that she would be picking up her teeth aswell as her clothes as her literally kicked her Ass out of my house!!!

Tomorrow she will do the simpering voice, the crocodile tears and promise to never do it again <eye roll>

Michael thinks he has actually has a chance with Eric?

Unless he likes whiny, petulant  refuses to progress past fourteen brat with a tiny dick I don't think Eric will be 'Tapping That Ass' anytime soon <shudders>

Looks like the idiots might actually have brains and backbones...Who Knew? <shrugs>

Brian is such a good Distraction and his very good at doling out Distraction Techniques lol

Sublime Chapter :)        

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2017 9:44 pm Title: Let the Head Fucking and Heart Mending Begin

Oh my god those are the cutest puppies ever! And I’m loving the fic too. Hugs Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2017 3:51 pm Title: Footsie and Playing Fast and Loose with the Truth

How embarrassed Lindsey must be! She can hate Brian all she wants, it won't change anything.

Heathan must be so relieved: he won't have Captain dumbass as a free rent roomie and he will have a cook indoor.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2017 7:47 am Title: Footsie and Playing Fast and Loose with the Truth

Please let Eric be straight , but Michael can make a pass, a really bad pass.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2017 4:05 am Title: Footsie and Playing Fast and Loose with the Truth

Oh my, Lindsay stepped in it didn't she.  At least Effy kept it from being worse, though why I don't know.  Michael trying to get close to a Vet?  That is so wrong.  Love the way things turned out.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2017 3:40 am Title: Footsie and Playing Fast and Loose with the Truth

I seriously hope Eric is straight or if he is gay he goes after anyone but Michael.

Lindsay got caught being a thieving cow and she is on notice with Dusty and Tannis.

Norm and Effy will be going over her wardrobe like she is twelve lol

Norman seriously needs to drop the dead weight and finally find happiness.

So how much money was Lindsay stealing from the store and how much was it making??

Brandon and Star are going to be a lot of help to Tyrone and his friends, love Annalise putting them to work to keep them off the streets.

Brian and his 'Special Meal' for Justin is so sweet cause they are getting closer.

Wonderful Chapter :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2017 4:42 pm Title: Mutiny in the Meatheads and Adventures of Nancy Drew Jnr

Mutiny in the MUMs' group: excellent! So funny! I bet Heathan will have a rent free roommate.

Poor Effy, she is in for a big disappointment.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2017 4:25 pm Title: Mutiny in the Meatheads and Adventures of Nancy Drew Jnr

It seems one of the meatheads finally stopped sitting on his brain and grew a backbone.

That just leaves the rest of them to do the same now will that be before or after they are arrested again? lol

Effy is one smart cookie cause she has Lindsay's number and little Nancy Drew is gathering enough evidence to fry Lindsay's flat Ass!! rofl

Looks like Norm is getting ready to clean house and Lindsay is going to be in Big Trouble. :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2017 1:21 pm Title: Mutiny in the Meatheads and Adventures of Nancy Drew Jnr

Between Michael and Lindsay things are diffenately going wrong.  Love the Miss Nancy Drew.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2017 12:26 pm Title: Mutiny in the Meatheads and Adventures of Nancy Drew Jnr

Good chapter. Wondered when Lindsay would get caught in her own trap. You do so well making her attitude what it is. Keep up the good work. Happy Thanksgiving



Author's Response:

Thank you! Happy Thanksgiving to you too!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2017 11:44 am Title: Homecoming

Interesting start.  So is Gus still Brian's?



Author's Response:

Hiya,

Yes indeed, he will always be his Sonny Boy no matter which story I write. When he refuses to sign the papers giving up his rights in the series always gets me!

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2017 5:58 pm Title: A Temporary Reprieve and a New Friend

Beautiful puppy! If only they remained like this.

I loved this quote from Hero: "But why is he saying that name again and wiggling like he did in the bedroom? Maybe I should go and see...hopefully, I will see this God person finally..." God is not that far when Heros' daddy is wiggling in his bed!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Talking Trash, Out with the Old and In with the New

Lindsay got caught in her own web! Too bad. 

Did Annalise recognize one of her dresses on Lindsay?

The MUMs are too funny and so dumb! Hilarious how Ben has been dealing with them.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 8:35 pm Title: Squirrelling, Cooking and Dumping

I hope Lindsey's wardrobe will be noticed by someone from a committee, just to out some shame on her.

Effy is feisty: I love that girl. Gus is witty as his father.

 

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 6:58 pm Title: A Temporary Reprieve and a New Friend

 

I cried... a lot, through most of this chapter.

All the stuff with Hero finding the puppy had me crying so much I had to keep stopping.

It was so sweet, hearing the dogs thoughts.

~Lorie

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 6:26 pm Title: A Temporary Reprieve and a New Friend

Yeah Brandon got a puppy and Star got two new daddies and new friends.

This will help to mend some parts of Brandon's heart and Ben can help mend the rest. :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Talking Trash, Out with the Old and In with the New

The Christian Ladies Group are a bunch of hypocrites who hide behind religion to excuse their cheating and continue to act like influential pillars of the community.

Lindsay should fit right in with that group.

Michael and his idiots hot arrested lol

And it looks like he will soon be looking for a new home, perhaps one of the idiots can take him in?

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 5:20 pm Title: A Temporary Reprieve and a New Friend

Awwww!  I love the doggie conversations! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 2:22 pm Title: A Temporary Reprieve and a New Friend

Ben is a fixer?  Love it when the dogs talk.  How nice that they found someone for Brandon doggy wise.  Love the picture of Star, the new pup for Brandon and Ben.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Talking Trash, Out with the Old and In with the New

Ben and Brandon must have missed the picnic.  It was about time the cops got called.  What is Michael going to do about the Master of Wine dinner if he's no longer living with Vic?  Now I admit to being a tad confused about the GLC.  The Christian Lesbians is the group that Lindsay joined?  And Melinda Banks was the one who donated clothing to Lindsay's store?  So Melinda is going to be on the GLC board that tossed Lindsay off?

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 7:43 am Title: A Temporary Reprieve and a New Friend

So sweet.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2017 6:18 pm Title: Squirrelling, Cooking and Dumping

You Go Effy!!!

Love that she is not taking anymore of Lindsay's crap and that she refuses to respond to Edna Fanny.(Even a dog wouldn't respond to that name!!)

Norman needs to get out of this marriage to save his sanity, money and Effy from gluing Lindsay to the wall by her hair lol

So how long before Lindsay's new group wants to strangle her or kick her out for stealing?

Michael and his idiots were doing what in front of Justin and Molly's restaurant?

Did anyone happen to get it on video so everyone can mock them? :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2017 1:24 pm Title: Squirrelling, Cooking and Dumping

What is Lindsay up to?  It was so nice that Effy told her off.  Come on, you have to tell us what Michael did!  Details please.  Looks like Brandon is a chef in the making.  Help for Justin?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2017 10:03 am Title: The Gentle Touch, Nooking in the Nook and The Fairy

Super hot and funny as hell!! Great chapter!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2017 11:44 pm Title: The Gentle Touch, Nooking in the Nook and The Fairy

Poor Michael  such as idiot. That poor tutu being used like that.

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