Date: Nov 17, 2017 10:32 pm Title: The Gentle Touch, Nooking in the Nook and The Fairy
Babe, after reading this chapter I needed to wipe down the screen of my old trusty laptop. I sprayed my cola all over the screen.
HILARIOUS!!! Mickey the fairy!! Complete with fisnets and tule tutu. Utter slapdown.
A big bravo to Annalise for handing out the slapdown.
I love Justin's new nickname. It really suits him.
XOXO
MeMa
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 6:13 pm Title: The Gentle Touch, Nooking in the Nook and The Fairy
Odette deserves a standing ovation for that Bitch Slap she gave Michael.
Do not want the visual if him in a tutu and fishnet stalking that is just wrong lol
Brandon coming up with Michael's name it was perfect and funny.
So LAFF will be a Soup Kitchen and Michael has a decision to make because Cyril is leaving but Odette is sticking around and she will be in charge.
Anymore problems and he have two women ready to kick his self-entitled Ass up and down Liberty Avenue rofl
I feel so bad for Brandon his Ex was a real jerk with his criticism and it tarnished Brandon's self-esteem concerning sex, that slime ball deserves to have his Ass kicked and his Gay Card taken away ;)
Ben showed Brandon that everything his Ex said was total B.S., but they still have some ways to go to eradicate two years of abuse.
Brian and Justin are taking things slow and yet it is moving quickly, love that they getting to know one another and finding out each other's comfort level.
Every chapter pulls me further and further into this Wonderful Story :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 2:45 pm Title: The Gentle Touch, Nooking in the Nook and The Fairy
Darn I wanted him to walk up and down the Avenue. He hasn't learned a thing. The Studs win again.
Date: Nov 15, 2017 7:17 pm Title: Being Thrifty, Changing Gears and Being Muscled Out
LOL!!! Goodwill shop! Oh that was priceless! Shame that she actually benefited from it, but perhaps it will come around to bite her in the ass at some point. Am interested to see what happens with the audit that Norman has Ted doing. Seems he's no dummy.
Effy is lovely young girl. She's really coming along. She's also a schemeing little minx. I mean that in a good way too. Ben and Brandon and their "goofy smiles" She's quite the little matchmaker. Mind you, neither of them need matching. they seem to be doing quite well on their own.
Michael has a ridiculous amount of self-entitlement. Odette has his number though and certainly brought specific things to cyril's attention. bye bye Mickey! first fired and now, after getting a job back, is summarily demoted and best of all, Odette seems to be his superior!! LOL! Oh how I chuckled at that. Well done!
Love how brian and Justin are taking a slow brew approach to their relationship. Obviously attracted to each other and want to make a go of it, but also getting to know each other. Liked how they just "made out".
Another great update!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Nov 15, 2017 7:04 pm Title: Being Thrifty, Changing Gears and Being Muscled Out
Michael is going to have some fun in the kitchen! And he will have to deal with a woman he despises. I can't wait to read what you are cooking for him.
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2017 6:44 pm Title: Being Thrifty, Changing Gears and Being Muscled Out
Lindsay is going have a new group wanting to kick her flat Ass, though I think someone should kick her Ass for charging $35 for a last season scarf!!
So what will Ted find out that will have Norm ready to kick Lindsay to the curb, is that why he wasn't at the meeting?
Effy is such a sweet Cupid are sure Lindsay is her mother?
Ben and Brandon are getting closer, Brian and Justin are talking relationship and getting.
Michael is so stupid and he should really enjoy being a gopher since he was a lousy assistant manager.
Good for Odette getting promoted and showing Michael how an assistant manager works lol
How long before he is fired again and how much longer is Lindsay's little shop going to be open??
Date: Nov 15, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Being Thrifty, Changing Gears and Being Muscled Out
Michael is so dumb lol!
And Brian the cook is so cute!
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Being Thrifty, Changing Gears and Being Muscled Out
You write the most amazing stories. Love how Lindsay's part went, just when you thing she's got what she deserves she ends up with pre-owned stuff. Who is Effy's dad? Michael also got what he deserved and I love the new assistant manager. Now LAFF might just make it. Brian is soooo in love. Happy that Brandon and Ben have decided to see where this takes them.
Author's Response:
Hiya,
Thank you [blushing]...Norman is Effy's dad. Think I may have confused you a bit. The clothes that the ladies bought into what they thought was a thrift shop were high end and Lindsay decided to keep those for herself, send some of her stock to goodwill and sell the rest of the stuff that the ladies bought in as 'her' but mark them down as pre-owned.
Yes there's more to come with Ben and Brandon...and yes indeed he is!
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 14, 2017 6:29 pm Title: Lessons Taught and Learned - Maybe?
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my goodness. I'm in stitches! what happened with Michael was absolutely hilarious! I was in giggles just reading when he and his little gang of no minds were talking and planning, but when teh dogs chages Michael into the pond...I completely lost it.
The chatterings between teh dogs is a terrific aspect to the story! Loved that and I hope there is lots more of it.
Ben and Brandon. Hmmmm. Poor brandon. glad Ben is there to help cure his insecurities. I can see them being totally hot together. So neat imagining different pairings that what the show did. Love it when writers do that. Normally one wouldn't consider the thought of Ben and brandon together, but I can so see that now.
Well done,
Cheers,
Date: Nov 12, 2017 8:46 pm Title: Lessons Taught and Learned - Maybe?
Hilarious!!
Just hilarious!!
Still hiccoughing from laughing.....
First the dog poo and then the dirty doggy pool?
Nothing more to say......
Off to giggle some more.
XOXO
MeMa
Date: Nov 12, 2017 8:43 pm Title: Lessons Taught and Learned - Maybe?
Absolutely love the talking dogs. Poor Justin, being interrupted by a pet sucks.
Date: Nov 12, 2017 8:25 pm Title: Lessons Taught and Learned - Maybe?
Entire chapter was priceless. The pups talking to each other. Hero charging after Michael then all of them watching his mishap and dive into the water. I'm surprised Vic held in his laughter for as long as he did.
Who was Brandon's last boyfriend? Someone who couldn't be honest enough to just say he didn't like to swallow. Where is Ben's dog? Isn't he getting one? Who is it that owns Blue? Ted and Blake own Oscar?
Brian isn't helping Justin's place survive you idiot. The food and atmosphere plus the people who work there speacks for itself.
Date: Nov 12, 2017 7:36 pm Title: Lessons Taught and Learned - Maybe?
Ha ha ha, Michael chased by the dogs: hilarious!
The tips and tricks from Hero to the other dogs were very funny too.
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Lessons Taught and Learned - Maybe?
So many ways to answer that question. If Michael worked as hard to be a success than to try and entrap Brian, he too could have something. Love all the animals.
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2017 7:22 pm Title: Lessons Taught and Learned - Maybe?
It's cute getting a dog's view of their owners and the lessons they must remember.
I especially liked when Michael got sent into the dog pond, he should really get use to eating Shit since he is one! lol
The twist are going to wish they didn't follow their Captain when they lose everything.
Brian and Justin are moving way past Friends and into hopefully spending the night together? :)
Can't wait to see what new idea the Brain Trust comes up with next? rofl
Date: Nov 11, 2017 11:34 pm Title: Naming the Crew and Taming the Shrew
I don't know how you can come up with such names for the Unfuckables: they are hilarious.
It's great that Emmett is getting back with Drew: they were hot together.
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2017 9:17 pm Title: Naming the Crew and Taming the Shrew
Sadly Lindsay's taking advantage of the kids of YEP. Why is Norman with her? Gus, Hunter and Justin seem to get along fine. Now Emmett and Drew are getting together. Awwww! So sweet.
Date: Nov 11, 2017 5:43 pm Title: Naming the Crew and Taming the Shrew
Lindsay smackdowns are so much fun. Caught in her own web of want.
Gus and Hunter are hysterical together.
Captain Liberty indeed.
When Em mans up, he does it well. Should have thought to brong his overnight things with instead of wasting the time to get them. At least Drew should drive him for more time together.
Date: Nov 11, 2017 6:46 am Title: Reaction and Action
Does Michael think if he ruins their business he will some how get it? He has no money to buy it and no brains to run it.
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2017 5:25 am Title: Naming the Crew and Taming the Shrew
Captain NeverGonnaHappen and his band of NeverGonnaGetLaid are meeting up again huh?
Is there a secret handshake and code word they use when they get ready to meet up? lol
I guess this is what they do when they need to give their hands a rest huh??
Lindsay abusing the help already is not surprising she will use anyone so she can play Lady Muck.
Going to need to keep a close eye on Lindsay cause she will do it again with bullying thrown in too.
Yeah Emmett and Princess Daisy are overnighting at Drew's and Emmett trust Drew!!!
You So make my mouth water with your food choices;)
Date: Nov 10, 2017 9:03 pm Title: Reaction and Action
Really cute.
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2017 7:34 pm Title: Reaction and Action
Everyone jumping in to help these kids is wonderful and proves you can't always judge everyone by other people's covers.
Lindsay only wants to help to make herself look good and that is why it is going to be a Disaster!!
Michael and his Dumbass Brigade are a bunch of Idiots and I can't wait for them to get their comeuppance.
Brian and Justin got scorching on the floor and were about to set off the sprinklers until Moonshine got impatient lol
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Date: Nov 10, 2017 2:17 pm Title: Reaction and Action
Can't believe what an idiot Michael is turning out yo be. Trying to set Justin up like that. Doesn't he realize Molly is so much smarter than him and the rest of the gerk squad?
The benefit was going well until Hunter's flashback. If it di any good it was to get a fire lit and got everyone moving to do something to help.
Lindsay taking an apprentice for her store. Don't you mean slave, peon, workhorse?
Leda and Annalise...heaven. Leda and Dusty fantastic at putting Lindsay in her place. Yay.
Date: Nov 10, 2017 1:51 pm Title: Cock...Oops That Should Be Cook Off
Norm is the best!
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2017 1:37 pm Title: Reaction and Action
The Studs are doing okay, the Buds, there are so many, and the Dud is loosing big time. How he thought he'd get away with things is beyond me. Now the pups are adorable and the Studs can't even get mad at them.