Date: Oct 26, 2017 4:31 pm Title: Her Aspirational Life...and Here's Effy and Amy
Effy's a hoot!
Can't wait for Brian and Justin (and Hero) to meet!
Date: Oct 26, 2017 3:40 pm Title: Her Aspirational Life...and Here's Effy and Amy
First three chapters read!
Loving Norm for playing his part. He is cleverer than Lindsay suspects. He's playing her for the bitch she.
A bitch that doesn't mind humiliating her daughter and putting her through some serious mental abuse.
Lucky for Effy she has a good friend in her Dad, in Gus, Amy and Brian. And now Ben also.
Mickey? Who the hell does he think he is? Leaching of the good name his mother had. Shame on him. And then mouthing off to Justin? Putting his foot in his mouth on the first meeting? Way to go Mickey! I guess he will soon be putting his other foot in as well, possibly even his leg up to his knee.
Good off brave and lovely Hero to put Mickey in his place and chase him out of the restaurant. Back to your job at the fastfood joint Mickey. THE perfect place for you to be.
And finally: Kocky meeting Blond Blue eyed Bombshell? Bring on the fireworks!!
Ladies you are about to write, in my humble opinion, a masterpece. And I'm hooked already.
Eagerly awaiting the next update.
XOXO
MeMa
Date: Oct 26, 2017 2:12 pm Title: Her Aspirational Life...and Here's Effy and Amy
Thrilled by Norm. He has Lindsay's number and surprisingly I don't think she knows it. Lindsay is a nasty snob.
You didn't say how old Amy was that there'd be any age difference between the girls. Doesn't matter though. Pity Leda wasn't there. Please tell me she'll be popping in once and a while. Mel can come for a visit.
Love jow Gus interacts with Lindsay. Like she's a gnat just there to be a pest.
So Justin spied his man and his man spied him. Brian and Hero, going to take alot of persuasion to make that work. I don't think Ben would mind if it doesn't. Ha!
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2017 10:20 am Title: Her Aspirational Life...and Here's Effy and Amy
Loving Norman. This story gets better and better every chapter.
Date: Oct 26, 2017 6:33 am Title: Her Aspirational Life...and Here's Effy and Amy
I truly adore the new characters! I only read Norm's first sentence and almost peed myself. I seriously have to find a way to handle him without hurting my abs(yeah sure..but they have to be somewhere) too much from laughing. Effy is really cool (Ed na-Fanny, seriously? That name is TORTURE lol) as well as Amy. Lindsay is such an annoying cunt again..I mean..WTF being such a shit to her own daughter..does she want her to get an eating disorder? Bitch!
Anyway.. can't wait for the next chapter! You seriously Rock! Much love Babe! 😘
Date: Oct 26, 2017 6:32 am Title: Her Aspirational Life...and Here's Effy and Amy
How sweet.
Date: Oct 26, 2017 1:11 am Title: Homecoming...Part 2
What a stupid ass. Surprised the big Q didn't have him arrested for thiefth.
Hero can stay with Justin? Can't wait for him and Brian to meet. Have a feeling Kocky and Bucky are going to be fighting over him.
Bring on Friday.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:59 pm Title: Homecoming...Part 2
At least Justin has an Ass!!
What an idiot!!!!
Has no one ever told him you don't go to a job interview and start bossing people around, just bee you have an over inflated ego that you have not earned.
Riding on Deb's coattails does not mean you have the right to behave like a self-entitled moron!
So Ben and Brian are best friends, Lindsay is cast out of Waspland and is not Brian's best friend, and Michael is not his best friend either and is just a thorn in everyone's side.
Molly and Justin own the diner?
Loving This So Far :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:13 pm Title: Homecoming...Part 2
While michael is a complete and utter ass...that scene was a riot! While I felt a bit bad for Justin's stress levels, the rest of me, the bigger part was laughing my ass off at the prospect of Michael figuring out who Justin is.
Oh this story is going to be fun I can tell already. I can also see some angsty parts what with Justins anxiety. I'm sure Brian will be a terrific salve for him, ;)
So who is Ben going to hook up with in this? Hmmmmmmmmm....
Looking forward to what you 2 have up your sleeve for this one. I get the impression it's going to be a ride.
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
The ride will get bumpy.
Author's Response:
The ride will get bumpy.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Homecoming...Part 2
Wooo, this is so good. Love how bad Michael is. Gus is going to be great as well. Can't get over how entitled Michael is and how he talked to the new owner of the diner. Justin! who has a dog. Goooood chapter.
Author's Response:
So glad you liking this.
Date: Oct 25, 2017 7:16 am Title: Homecoming...Part 2
Michael is an pass. Hero is my hero , good dog.
Author's Response:
Will assume you meant ass and yes he is.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2017 5:59 am Title: Homecoming...Part 2
Go Hero! Really Michael will never learn
~Teresa~
Author's Response:
Enjoy!
Date: Oct 24, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Homecoming
I love how you changed almost everybody's role/place. Gus and Molly: quite an interesting duo.
Emmett is as delightful as ever.
Author's Response:
I can't write Emmett as anything but delightful, he's such a sweetheart! Glad you're enjoying it thus far.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 24, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Homecoming
Intersting start. I like that Ben and Brian are besties in this and not Michael. I get the history of B&M's friendship. We've all been there I think, but when one grows up and the other doesn't quite as much. when they have little in common except history....That friendship was always a bit of a head scratcher for me. Ben and Brian make much more sense as they are much more equal.
Different dynamics it seems with the gang too. Looking forward to this. Deb is gone apparently, Molly and I resume Justin have bought the diner.
I gotta say, nearly shed a happy tear when Molly gave Kiki the material for the uniform. That was so touching!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
We wanted to change it up and shake hings loose. Tickle a few funny bone along the way. Bee
Date: Oct 24, 2017 8:10 am Title: Homecoming
Still feeling my way through this, but sounds like it could be good
Author's Response:
While you feel your way around this story we hope you decide its as good as we think it is.
Date: Oct 24, 2017 12:14 am Title: Homecoming
Oh yes, yes and yes! More please
Author's Response:
More on the way. Enjoy!
Date: Oct 23, 2017 11:53 pm Title: Homecoming
I like this beginning. Michael is an acquaintance, not best friend. Ben and Brian best buds. Good.
Justin and Molly opening a new diner. Okay.
I'm in for the ride.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Bee
Date: Oct 23, 2017 11:11 pm Title: Homecoming
Another one off to a great start!
Deb
Author's Response:
Thank You
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2017 11:07 pm Title: Homecoming
Ohhhhh! This is going to be a treat. Love Ben being Brian's bestie. And Molly being a new owner of the old diner, that has to mean that Justin is there as well. So Deb moved? That means that Michael won't be getting away with shit. Hope, hope? I am so going to enjoy this.
Author's Response:
Michael will always get just what he deserves. Bee