Date: Jan 02, 2018 9:36 pm Title: Homecoming...Part 2
Who was he thinking to meet there? He is such a dumbass.
Date: Jan 02, 2018 9:00 pm Title: Homecoming
So Michael is going to try to be his best friend just to get fucked by him? Interesting but impossible.
Date: Dec 31, 2017 6:48 am Title: Surviving, Driving and Thriving
Loved this story! Really enjoyed that Lindsay and Michael both get their comeuppance! And was so happy that Norman found Melinda; he deserved his happy ever after!
All the puppies were wonderful and made me wish I could have a dog! :) The pictures were a great addition!
This was so much fun and will be added to my harddrive and favorites!
Deb
Date: Dec 28, 2017 8:50 am Title: Surviving, Driving and Thriving
I loved this wish there was going to be a sequel. Maybe babies along with more dogs. I love babies and puppies.
Date: Dec 24, 2017 9:03 pm Title: Surviving, Driving and Thriving
Nice story! Sorry to see it end but looking forward to your next story!
merry Christmas!
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2017 7:18 pm Title: Surviving, Driving and Thriving
Michael and Lindsay and Gone and everyone is Happy and at Peace I say it is the perfect ending to a Wonderful Story.
I already look forward to reading it all over again :)
Thanks Ever So Much and Happy Holidays to You and Yours :)
Date: Dec 24, 2017 4:38 pm Title: Surviving, Driving and Thriving
I am happy and sad. Happy for the wonderful story that you have written and sad that they will no longer be part of my life. I get very attached to a story. Thank you for completing it before Christmas. It felt like your gift to your readers. Happy Holidays.
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2017 4:23 pm Title: Surviving, Driving and Thriving
What better ending with the dogs finishing this story. Both Lindsay and Michael have made their beds and try as they might to wiggle out of it, were unable to. As with all your stories loved this. What are you going to do next?
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2017 3:58 pm Title: Yeah You're Not in Charge...Fire-Fire-Fire-Fire
Brian cooking! What a treat. Love that Vic has moved in to take care of Gus. Gus better watch out or he'll need new clothing. Lindsay doesn't realize she's in real trouble. Love how Albert got even with Michael for all the misdeeds he's done. That must have smart. LOL!
Date: Dec 24, 2017 3:52 pm Title: Surviving, Driving and Thriving
I so enjoyed the entire thing. Happy Christmas to us happy readers and to you writersm. Thankks for doing a great job.
Date: Dec 24, 2017 9:35 am Title: Surviving, Driving and Thriving
Too bad it ends! Great story! Thank you!
I would have loved to read how Michael behaved on the plane and during the first days in the Cap. I bet you would have found some new ways to torture him.
Date: Dec 24, 2017 8:57 am Title: Yeah You're Not in Charge...Fire-Fire-Fire-Fire
Fireworks in Michael's pants: that's an event that had never happened before and I doubt it will ever again!
Date: Dec 24, 2017 8:05 am Title: Plans are Set in Motion...and there's a Switcheroo
Way to go Vic!
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2017 4:31 am Title: Plans are Set in Motion...and there's a Switcheroo
Awww, how sweet. What a kiss. Mikey's not going to know what hit him and Lindsay is in for something she didn't see coming.
Date: Dec 23, 2017 2:46 pm Title: Like Norman Said...and Gilda's Rather Good Idea...
Gilda seems to be quite a character! I would love to see how they meet with Debbie. That must have been an epic scene.
Date: Dec 23, 2017 2:24 pm Title: A Truth Will Keep You Here A Lie Will Set You Free
What a naughty Albert! I hope for Michael that he will go commando for a few days, weeks... Otherwise, ouch!
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2017 1:27 am Title: Like Norman Said...and Gilda's Rather Good Idea...
Is The Middle of Nowhere Too Close??
Hell I think Never Never Land is too close!!!
Everyone is wants to due a benefit to get Michael out of Philadelphia and it will be beneficial to everyone else so they don't all end up in Jail for killing the little twerp!!!
Lindsay was warned, didn't heed that warning and got arrested for being stupid.
She is going to have to prove she was justified in grabbing Effy so forcibly cause a criminal charge will not look good if she fights Norm for custody, then again her whole behavior towards Effy, Norman and Gus won't look good, if Effy has bruises and they were photographed plus her hitting Norman makes her look like the abuser.
Brian moving in with Justin and that tub means everyone should seriously carry around fans because it is going to get Scorching <fans self> lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2017 12:29 am Title: Like Norman Said...and Gilda's Rather Good Idea...
Justin and Brian and a copper tub. What could be better? Lindsay assaulted her daughter and did not get away with it. Wonderful. Mikey is a charity case. Wonder where he ends up moving.
Date: Dec 21, 2017 11:26 pm Title: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall
I really do love your names, puns and anagrams. The latest 'My dad is Harold Gale of Gale Enterprises' Love it!
Liking this story, but prob like Carbon Copies more, except can't get my head around the whole 'how they became twins thing' I know Mpreg stories by their nature are out there but I think this one would give even Mulder palpitations!
Ta Ta
Deb
Date: Dec 21, 2017 11:18 pm Title: A Truth Will Keep You Here A Lie Will Set You Free
ROTFLMAO!!!
Captain Ants in his pants.......
XOXO
MeMa
Date: Dec 21, 2017 7:02 pm Title: A Truth Will Keep You Here A Lie Will Set You Free
A thousand apologies! I haven reviewed either of your stories in a bit. Sorry, I have been so incredibly busy with both jobs, it's all I can do to find time to read. I'm lucky if I can do that tbh. Am on vacation as of Saturday though and am looking forward to r & r and most importanly, catching up on and re-reading some fics.
REally gald Deb and Carl are back, and that Deb, Carl and Gilda are all putting Michae lin his place. It's much needed and a long time coming. Naturally he's not takling any of it, but he's sure to leave at some point in time isn't he? If not, he may just find his new digs is jail. Pretty sure he's stupid enough to land himself there. lol.
The fire ants...lmao! That's awesome!
Have to admit, albert kind of gave me the heeby jeebies at first with all his bugs and walking around in the buff, but he's definitely endearing himself to me now. He's made amends to all the people he's bothered while ensconced in Michael's machinations. Like the rest of that little group, they've all seen Michael for the ass he is and want nothing to do with him. They all much prefer the Liberty gang.
Enjoying this thoroughly! So many aspects of this is so ridiculous it's sublime! Michael's sense of entitlement isn't as anger inducing as it normally is, now I find myself rolling my eyes and chuckling at his behaviour and how he's inevitably treated. Albert is a hoot and a half. Liking Molly and Eric.
Brian making those waffles for Justin was so sweet!
All the characters are a wonder. So enjoyingthis!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Dec 21, 2017 9:20 am Title: A Truth Will Keep You Here A Lie Will Set You Free
Very funny.
Date: Dec 21, 2017 4:34 am Title: A Truth Will Keep You Here A Lie Will Set You Free
Yeah, Michael is getting what he deserves. Have experienced fire ants so he is in for it. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2017 4:27 am Title: A Truth Will Keep You Here A Lie Will Set You Free
Fire Ants? I'm loving Albert.
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2017 4:20 am Title: A Truth Will Keep You Here A Lie Will Set You Free
Oooooo Michael's Wee Wittle Balls Are Going to Be Inflamed!!!
Which will be the most action they've gotten in years rofl
Way to Go Albert!!!
Deb tried but it takes more than words to fix the conceited and Michael doesn't want to change.
He wants to be Important and Respected but instead of earning it he wants to ride on the coattails of others.
What Michael and Lindsay never learned is that without Confidence, Self-Respect, Bravery, Fear, Smarts and Earned Respect no amount of grandiose will give you Class.
Piggy backing off others doesn't make you better it just means you have no talent or imagination to find your own course in life, and makes it easy to blame others and make excuses when nothing goes your way.
I think Michael and Lindsay are the same age and that's why they can't function without tearing others down.
Thanks :)
Author's Response:
Yes the flaming is coming and you are welcome.
Just so you know when you read a line of familiarity, that you wrote it...of the many I have 'borrowed' this one starts with without cnfidence and ends with your way.
Happy reading
MissMerlot