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Name: Lorie (Signed) · Date: Dec 21, 2017 3:34 am · Chapter: A Truth Will Keep You Here A Lie Will Set You Free

 

The weasel should probably go far, far from Liberty Avenue. That is if he has any hope of finding someone who doesn't want him gone as soon as he opens his mouth. He is, unfortunately too well known on Liberty.

~Lorie



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Dec 20, 2017 5:59 pm · Chapter: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Hope Tower is a great name for this building!

Justin and Debbie's scene was hilarious, as well as the one with Lindsay and Debbie.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Dec 20, 2017 5:22 pm · Chapter: Reality Bites and We Will Be Dancing Yeah!

Michael and his roomie: I feel so sorry for the poor guy.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Dec 20, 2017 5:08 pm · Chapter: Getting to Know You...and Knowing You Too Well

It's "funny" how Lindsay is daring asking Norman his help for meeting the IRS.

I hope Justin and Brian will avoid keeping secrets that may impact the relationship.

I imagine Ben holding/carrying Michael in the street.

Your recipes are always a great pleasure to discover.



Name: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: Dec 20, 2017 1:42 pm · Chapter: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Haven't reviewed in a long time but feel compelled to do it now.

Girl, this story is sooooo immensely good. I can't stop reading.

The way Michael manages to alienate everybody is really hilarious. He shouldn't keep up otherwise he might be forced to use the YEP services for himself.

The return of Deb and Carl, accompanied by Gilda willl be a very "pleasant" surprise to both Lindsay and Michael who will most likely be told off in Debs usual brash way. 

For them to sell the home to Analise is heartbreaking. 

All the furballs are adorable and I love the odd bit of their way of thinking being written in into the story.

And your recipes at the end of some chapters? I've built myself a nice cookbook by now and will enjoy trying some of them out the coming year.

THank you for the recent update. 3 chapters in a row. You were on fire.

For now I wish you a very Merry Christmas and a New Year full of love, laughter, healt and happiness.

XOXO

MeMa



Name: Lorie (Signed) · Date: Dec 20, 2017 1:43 am · Chapter: Reality Bites and We Will Be Dancing Yeah!

 

Loving this story.

Instant corpse dick - great line, and so true.

What is a Curly Wurly?

~Lorie



Author's Response:

Have to admit that's one of my favourite phrases. A curly wurly is a chocolate bar; twisted caramel covered in thick milk chocolate. If you can find them try one, I am lactose intolerant but there are times when you just have to!

Happy reading and eating!

- Nicole



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2017 9:21 pm · Chapter: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Just finished 34,35 and 36.  Great updates.  Looooooooooooooove the Harold Gale Enterpries.  You are a wonderfully talented writer.  Can't wait for more of the nasties and their "oh poor me" saga.  Happy Holidays



Author's Response:

Thank you kindly. Happy reading and Happy Holidays to you and yours.

MissMerlot



Name: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2017 9:19 pm · Chapter: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Really good. Can someone just beat Michael to death or something already.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2017 7:14 pm · Chapter: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Whoa, how is Lindsay going to be able to pay the IRS, Norm's and Effy's support??

How much did she squirrel away in her rainy day fund from Gus's support and can she get in trouble for that, especially if she and Brian have a written agreement that money is to be spent on Gus and Only Gus??

Justin standing up to Deb was Amazing and worthy of the respect she showed him and the thank you Brian gave him ;)

Albert is Rich?!?! 

Thank Goodness Michael never knew or he would try to bleed him dry like he tried to do to Brian.

Lindsay is going to try to seduce Norm into paying the IRS for her?

About as likely as Michael winning the lottery lol

Albert was smart to get a lock on his bedroom door and hide his products, Michael believes he is entitled to whatever and whomever he wants and Damn the consequences.

Deb really slammed Lindsay with some hard truths and as usual Lindsay had no comeback because her brain went on vacation lmao.

I don't think Michael should've put nails in the wall to hang up his posters.

This may just cost him more than he thinks.

Albert and Royston have wisen up to Michael and his grandiose behavior and they are stepping back to leave Michael hanging out on the limb by himself.

 



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2017 6:40 pm · Chapter: Reality Bites and We Will Be Dancing Yeah!

Thank You Norm for getting Effy's birth certificate changed that is a blessing for everyone who loathed that name especially Effy.

So Lindsay will be served with divorce papers and she has to pay spousal support and child support rofl.

Guess Lindsay should have paid more attention to the prenup and not her superiority complex.

Four bowls of Cereal?!?!

What a slob!

Albert is much nicer than I am because if saw Michael had been invading my space he would be out on his non-existent Ass!

Albert telling him off is way overdue and much deserved because he continues to act like he is fourteen and expects everyone to cater to his dictates and tantrums <eye roll>

Everyone is pairing off and moving on while Michael and Lindsay are stuck in the past.

 

 



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2017 6:08 pm · Chapter: Getting to Know You...and Knowing You Too Well

Lindsay hasn't learned if you want someone to help you, you don't insult them or demand something you've never earned.

Norman was smart to abide by Lindsay's rules since he can't be dragged into the audit with her.

Seems Lindsay has as much talent with retail as she does with Art rofl

Norman going out with Melinda is a stop up after being around Lindsay and her cruelty, time for Norm to be around a Lady with Class, Style, Sophistication and who is gentle on the inside as well as out.

Whether they end up together or just remain friends Norman knows he can do better than Lindsay in both categories lol

Michael seriously needs to stop acting like Albert should now whenever he walks into the room, especially since the room he is walking into happens to be paid for by Albert.

Albert has the right to do whatever he wants in his home and Michael as a guest has to abide by Albert's rules.

Hell Albert's friends have more rights than Michael!!!!

How utterly rude of him to show up at a dinner party he wasn't invited, then try to lie on Ben.

He definitely needs his Ass kicked from now until the end of time and that is just the left foot ;)

 



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2017 4:33 pm · Chapter: The Ribbon is Cut and the Hammer Starts to Fall

Oh this was wonderful.  Love that Albert is wealthy, so he shouldn't have any trouble getting rid of Michael.



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2017 3:55 pm · Chapter: Reality Bites and We Will Be Dancing Yeah!

I'm so glad to see that Norman will not be giving Lindsay half of everything.  Albert needs to get his home back.  His friends need him.



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2017 3:44 pm · Chapter: Getting to Know You...and Knowing You Too Well

Norman is doing well, while Lindsay is not!  Things are going great, though I do get queasy when Albert talks to Michael in the nude.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Dec 15, 2017 11:20 pm · Chapter: Things Change...and Some Things Stay the Same

IRS! Lindsey is definitively on a big downfall and the Captain is quite alone.



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Dec 15, 2017 5:35 pm · Chapter: Things Change...and Some Things Stay the Same

Oh goody more trouble for the idiots. Love it.



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Dec 15, 2017 1:28 pm · Chapter: Things Change...and Some Things Stay the Same

Oh my, an audit!  Just what she deserves and I do hope you've done something about her thinking she gets half of everything.  Mikey living with bugs and no job what more can he do?



Name: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: Dec 15, 2017 6:30 am · Chapter: Things Change...and Some Things Stay the Same

When it rains it pours. Poor little Lindsay.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Dec 15, 2017 5:07 am · Chapter: Things Change...and Some Things Stay the Same

Heathan and Stanley hosting a dinner party to apologize to Brian and Justin shows how much they are growing up and leaving Michael behind.

Albert and Royston still have some growing up to do before they finally wise up in the meantime they can take their lumps right along with Michael.

Norman and the kids finding a way to turn Lindsay's cruelty into a slap back her is good, Norman's mother sounds like a smart woman who saw through Lindsay from the beginning. (Does Norman have a prenup?)

Michael better have saved some money because I doubt anyone on Liberty Avenue will hire him to sweep the floor.

He is so stupid cause he thinks he has some clout but being Deb's son and Brian's former best friend doesn't come with rose petals thrown at his feet or a crown for his fat head.

Lindsay has been demoted to time keeper and told that if she quits then she won't be accepted anywhere.

The chick seriously needs to look in the mirror to see why Shit keeps getting dumped on her, when you have a nasty, self-absorbed, overinflated belief that you are entitled to everything it infects the very air around you, and causes others who are immune to despise and want to see you fail at everything.

Brian and Justin give off good vibes that makes everyone want to be around them to bask in.

Sounds like Norman is moving on and Lindsay might need a paper bag to breathe into because the IRS don't fall for Wasp Tears lol  

 



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Dec 13, 2017 5:18 pm · Chapter: Using Determination...Crazy, Ugly and Beautiful

Lindsey is becoming the pariah of Liberty Avenue.

The end was hot hot hot!



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Dec 13, 2017 3:50 am · Chapter: Using Determination...Good and Stupid

Craig hit Justin growing up?

Brian is going to have a little chat with Mr. Taylor and Mrs. Taylor cause no way is she getting out of feeling the full wrath of one Brian Aiden Kinney!!

Dun, Dun, Dun, Dunnnnnn!!!!

Heathan and Stanley were smart to see the error of their ways, apologize and walk away from Michael for good. (May They Stay Smart:))

 



Author's Response:

Sorry to confuse dear one. It was Brian talking about the first time his dad hit him not Justin. As for Heathan and Stanley let's just say they get to meet Big Bad...who is very protective of the man he loves...dun dun duuuuunnnnnn!!!

Happy reading

MissMerlot



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Dec 13, 2017 2:53 am · Chapter: Using Determination...Crazy, Ugly and Beautiful

Love Amy and Effy.  They are quite a team.  Nakita is something else as well.  Great chapter.



Name: Lorie (Signed) · Date: Dec 13, 2017 12:49 am · Chapter: Using Determination...Crazy, Ugly and Beautiful

 

Loved this chapter.

The 'saving the earring' was so great, made me cry.

Brian and Justin are HOT.

~Lorie



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Dec 13, 2017 12:29 am · Chapter: Using Determination...Crazy, Ugly and Beautiful

Love how the plot thickens and changes directions.  Keeps me thinking of what will happen next.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Dec 12, 2017 11:59 pm · Chapter: Using Determination...Crazy, Ugly and Beautiful

Michael is living with Albert and his insects?

I seriously hope they will all be happy together lol

Lindsay got caught wearing something that was supposed to go to someone more deserving (And Can Pull Off Gucci, Lindsay can't pull off wearing a Brown Paper Bag!!), she also found out that blackmail only works when the marriage isn't an open one <eye roll>

Catherine and her Husband don't mind sleeping with others but what they do mind is a skank stealing from Goodwill!!

Norman now knows Lindsay has cheated on him and he is DONE!!

No matter how many tears Lindsay sheds Norman is not falling for anymore of her crap or putting the kids through it anymore either.

Jenny and Amy are so Awesome!

Norman has made a new friend in Melinda who seems like a very sweet lady.

Brian and Justin were tender, kind and gentle to each and the sex was Scorching and funny.

Best way to end that chapter :)

 

 

 



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