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Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2017 3:04 am Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

LOL! Fagin is very sneaky pretending to be on the phone longer and making Mika wait to get into the loft. And Mika trying to get Fagin's keys by using the same ploy he tried before? Wow you can tell he's not the brightest bulb!

Calista is disguising herself as a man named Bailey... hhmmm. Sure hope Byron doesn't fall for it! LOL! Oh my, Mika thinks he would really have a chance with Bailey.

Glad to see that Faye thinks quick! There would be pure hell if Mika found about Byron knowing Jules!

Off to read more!

Hugs,

Deb



Author's Response:

Good Morning Deb,

We can't begin to tell you how much FUN it was to write that scene between Fagin and Mika! And no, Mika is definitely a dim bulb in more ways than he knows. But where he thinks he's being clever, he's also as transparent as glass. It makes it so easy for Calista/Bailey to trick him into believing that he's really all that and a bottle of Beam, when he's really none of that and a 35 cent packet of Kool-Aid, LOL

Happy Reading!

~The Babes of Rage 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2017 7:13 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

Okay well now I'm intrigued. I love supernatural, mystical fiction. Magi's huh? That Mika though, rubbed me the wrong way from the start. Fire & Ice huh...let's do this! 



Author's Response:

LOL!! We're so excited that you are joining us in Gayopolis! We hope you enjoy your time here as much as we are!

Happy Reading!

~Nichelle and the Babes of Rage~

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2017 8:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

I'm definitely intrigued by the first two chapters.

I love the idea of having a story within a story. AND with fantasy/supernatural elements. Ladies, I'm hooked.

I've been searching for ages for a story that combined QaF with f/s. And this could be right up my ally.

The Mika character pissed me off from the first moment he appeared. Make him go away please. Turn him into a mouse and let him be chased away by the meanest and most hungry allycat ever. 

Looking forward to the next update.

XOXO

MeMa



Author's Response:

MeMa,

so glad you are enjoying this and boy do we make Mika disappear...well almost.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot and Crew

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2017 7:26 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

Intriguing! What is Faye fearing?



Author's Response:

Hey Claire! The answer was given in Chapter 2 but it's even more apparent in Chapter 3. It will continue to be explored in future chapters as well. We can just about see everyone rolling their eyes, sucking their teeth and yelling at the screen. WE LOVE THAT REACTION in our readers. It's means we're doing our jobs well!

Happy Reading!

~Nichelle and Crew~

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2017 12:59 am Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

OK I thought this would be stupid, but it is so goooood. Great going.



Author's Response:

 

Wellreadbunny,

Glad you are enjoying this story so far. None of us would put out a story that we wouldn't want to read. It's always good to try new things, so that's what we are doing here. Hopefully you will have as much fun reading the story as we are having writing it. It gets a lot more interesting in later chapters. We know this because there are several more chapters already finished.

~Lorie and Crew~

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2017 10:28 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

Mika needs to get a life along with Calista who is a conniving snake!!

Byron is Fire to Jules Ice, together they would be quite a lethal combination, especially towards their enemies.

Faye is smart to make sure word is spread about Byron and Jules, need to keep Mika in the dark as long as possible.



Author's Response:

Hey Blue! We definitely agree with all you've said. Mika and Calista are bound to receive much-needed lessons, but you know them. They are HARD learners and who better to teach them to mind their manners than Byron and Jules?

Faye is a wonderful addition to the cast! She keeps surprising us with her intelligence and cunningness. But she's not alone on that front!

So HAPPY you enjoyed this!

Happy Reading!

~Nichelle and Crew

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2017 9:32 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

First let me tell you I love Fagin. Can only take Mica in very very small doses. Pretending to be talking on the phone while Mica waits. Smooth.

Calista/Bailey...trouble's a brewin'. Yeah like she/he'd let Mica get close enough for sex. If she thinks getting close yo him will get her close to Byron, jokes on her.

I'm at a lost as to what Byron and Thomas Electronics and Jules have to do with Byron and Jules being together.

Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hello Sherry!! 

We definitely enjoyed writing the interaction between Fagin and Mika. We might have laughed the entire time, LOL! 

Calista/Bailey is definitely an opportunist. Just think of the saying "Birds of a Feather Flock Together" and "Desperation Breeds Strange Bedfellows" in terms of that whole scenario.

As for Byron and Jules, that situation will become clearer as time goes on. 

 

Thank you sooooo very MUCH for reading and reviewing! 

Happy Reading,

~Nichelle and Crew

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2017 8:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

OMG  Girls 😘

I am already loving this new universe that you have made. 

This story is addictive already and I don't think you ladies can write fast enough  to cure the need to see what is going to happen

Thank you all for taken the time to write this

 

~Teresa~. 



Author's Response:

Thank so MUCH for reading and reviewing, Teresa! We are having a blast bringing you all into our Ragian world! There is so MUCH MORE to come!

 

Happy Reading!

~Nichelle and Crew

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2017 8:04 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

Oh, this is good.  But did Craig die in the accident?    This is a world I know I'll grow to love.



Author's Response:

Hey Phyllis! So glad you are enjoying this world we're building. There is so MUCH MORE to come!

In answer to your question, both of Jules' parents and his sister died in the accident. 

 

Happy Reading,

~Nichelle and Crew

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2017 6:31 pm Title: CHAPTER 2: A FRIENDSHIP ESTABLISHED

Thanks for the name chart! Will help keep them straight in the beginning.

WOAH! That baily.Calista/Ice Tina think was right out of left field! That was exceptional!

OMG...Poor Jules!!!! poor thing. Mom, dad and sister??? Heartbreaking! (wonder what Jenn and Molly are thinking having read this part...)

Jules is part Magi huh. Oh yea...this is definitely going to be interesting! 

Peer Deb. It must be difficult knowing the sonm you've raised is a selfish asswhipe. 

Anyway....yup...this is going to be a fun read. Looking forward to it. An alternative reality of all our favorite (and those we love to hate) characters.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hey Elaine! So HAPPY you've enjoyed the second chapter. We'll be taking a look at how the characters of TTNY are processing the events going on in RU a little later in the work, but for now, it's definitely a bit of a heartbreaking road that Jules is on. The important thing is that he and Des are not alone. 

As for Di, yeah...it seems that she is doomed to be disappointed with her offspring, Mika. Bailey/Calista/Ice-Tina sure knew which weak-minded person within Byron's camp to play her mindgames on.

Stay tuned for there is so MUCH more to come!

Happy Reading!

~Nichelle and Crew

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