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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 10: TRANSFORMATIONS, REVELATIONS and A GOLDFISH BOWL

The transformations are fantastic. 

Don't know which I like best, but Calista is in the lead. A black space of nothing. Although Zephyra's is kind of unforgettable.

Cynthia was her sister? Time to make her parents pay too.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:49 am Title: Chapter 10: TRANSFORMATIONS, REVELATIONS and A GOLDFISH BOWL

This story is just amazing.  Your imaginations are beyond anything I could ever think up.  Writing it as Rage was such a fantastic idea.  I love stories where Michael & Lindsay are the bad guys and happy endings for Brian, Justin & the rest of the gang.  Can't wait to see where it goes from here.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, we're really enjoying writing it and hope you continue to enjoy reading it. Poor Mika/Zephyra and Calista, life is so going to suck for them!

Happy reading

~Babes of Rage~

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2017 9:40 am Title: Chapter 10: TRANSFORMATIONS, REVELATIONS and A GOLDFISH BOWL

Whoa, Cynthia is Calista's sister! No wonder she's hyper protective of Byron.

As for Mika, the transformation was hilarious: Zephyra in a bowl!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah that transformation was written with particular relish! 

Happy reading!

- The Babes of Rage

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2017 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 10: TRANSFORMATIONS, REVELATIONS and A GOLDFISH BOWL

Wow they transform and Cynthia is Calista's sister!!

Mika got turned into Zephyra the Niad who gets to live forever in a fish bowluntil he is killed by The One Who Wounds His Heart.

Don't think he is going to enjoy being Cody's pet but he got what deserve for pushing his Mom around and yelling at her like he Owned the World.

Seems Calista can't transform into her beautiful self right now and that is the perfect distraction to keep her from finding Byron.

It is seriously taking too long to get to the 14th!! lol ;)

 



Author's Response:

Hey Blue!

There is so much going on in this story and so much backstory into these fascinating characters to be had. Cynthia and Calista being sisters was definitely the surprise and yet, the history so thoroughly explains Cyn's attachment to Byron. She's been his protector and shadow for a long time.

Vic promised not to kill Mika...but he never promised not to know someone who could. In that moment, we all wished that Mika was a real person so that we could stomp a mudhole in his ass...SMH Di is much more patient than all of us! 

To a vainglorious bitch like Calista, not being able to look in a mirror and admire herself will definitely hurt her ice cold narcissistic heart. But alas, she's too stubborn to be distracted from her ultimate goal for very long. But oh how we all could wish...but then again, what's this story without Little Miss Evil Personified? LOL 

We too are feeling the impatience of our characters for the 14th. We all usually hate slow-build stories to a degree so it's a special kind of irony and punishment that this has turned out to be one...well, sort of! 

Happy Reading!

~The Babes of Rage~

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2017 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 10: TRANSFORMATIONS, REVELATIONS and A GOLDFISH BOWL

Mika turned into a girl.  Now that I'd pay to see.  Love the changes and the pics.



Author's Response:

Hey Phyllis! 

MissMerlot did a great job finding the pics based on conversations we've had. They all turned out fabulous! Now everyone has a face to go with the banner for the story, which is courtesy of Nichelle.

We had so much FUN writing the scene turning Mika into Zephyra. Now we all know why Michael was raging in "Taxi to New York" LOL But by the time we're all done, we're sure everyone in the prison will be asking for him to be put in solitary....the same goes for Lindsay. *Collectively evil grinning and rubbing hands*

Happy Reading!

~The Babes of Rage~

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