[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2020 4:01 pm Title: Cat and Mouse
Justin is pissed at Ethan. Brian told Michael off. Things are going just the way I like it.
Date: Apr 23, 2018 7:43 am Title: Cat and Mouse
Now that’s what I call a strip TEASE! Lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2018 10:19 pm Title: Cat and Mouse
LOL These guys are going to burst into flames soon..I love your writing, you really nailed Mikey in this one. I was patient for updates knowing you were working on Britin. I have no idea how you keep your thoughts straight..Copious notes???
Author's Response:
I do have pages and pages of notes, along with outlines and timelines if necessary. In fact, for Britin, as I start to come to the end of a month, I start an outlie for the next month and work out what exactly I want andneed to cover on a day to day basis. I even have myself signed up for a pregnancy tracker on Baby Center, so I get constant updates on the pregnancy's development and things he'd be facing at that particular time. It's help immensely on keeping me on point. There are times where I'll change some things up if something unexpected happened in the story, but I try to stick to my outline as much as possible. It makes keeping track of stuff much easier. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 21, 2018 7:35 am Title: Cat and Mouse
Great teasing chapter except the Ethan's part, which is getting really creepy.
Brian knows how to put the heat up, but Justin isn't that innocent and he could beat Brian to his own game. That's exciting! Maybe Brian did go commando, this would mean they have the same count of clothes...
I think the end of the chapter is missing as the last sentence isn't complete.
Author's Response:
Ethan is a creepuy little asshole in this one. And you are right, there was several paragraphs missing from the chapter. I have since updated it. Thanks for pointing that out to me; and as always, thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 20, 2018 7:09 pm Title: Cat and Mouse
Great update. Could actually feel the tension between Justin & Ethan and Brian & Mikey. And, of course, the heat between Brian & Justin. Great job.
Author's Response:
They are so much fun to write in this and I do love to tease them so... BTW, I did realize later the next day (due to a review) that part of the chapter was missing. It as since been fixed. :) Thanks for reading! :)