[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2022 7:34 am Title: Chapter 12
Ah, what can I say? Another great chapter! And I love that Brian confronted Gary S. and punched him out! Great!
Regarding Lindsay... I have to say I think about her as badly as I do of Michael. some "best friends" they are... She pits Mel and Brian against each other, even in the first scene. In my opinion, a child's name should be chosen in peace between the partners and not make it a contest. And while at times it seems like she's supportive of Brian and Justin's relationship and hopes Brian will grow up a little, there are also those totally opposite moments like before their wedding when she talks Brian into going to a crappy White Party instead attend her wedding!? Where he is going to do what? Fuck guys like every day? I didn't understand that at all!!!! In my opinion she is a manipulating bitch.
Alright, back to your story. OMG, that moment when Justin takes off his beanie, Gus recognizes him and the two of them are just so incredibly happy. Even if it was manipulative, i agree, he needed this moment of joy and happiness. Awesome!
Oh, and by the way, I really really like Sam!
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2018 12:25 am Title: Chapter 12
great got to keep reading
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2018 1:11 am Title: Chapter 12
As sly as it was using Gus to get to Justin, he needed it. He needed to see that little boy again and remember what it was like to love and feel loved. You're killing me with this, but I kinda love you for it.
Author's Response:
LOl, I get that a lot, too. But I agree - he needed Gus.
Date: Jan 27, 2018 6:58 am Title: Chapter 12
Awwww! Gus to the rescue! TAG
Author's Response:
Super Gus!!
Date: Jan 26, 2018 2:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for this story. The closest I can come to describing it is that it is simply POWERFUL. I don’t know what else to say.
And yes, there was no doubt in my mind that the way to get to
Justin was Gus. That is what happened, and it was beautifully
written.
Once again, thanks for this wonderful story.
DavidR
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, David; I'm glad that you find it powerful, and that you are enjoying the way that I write. I appreciate you letting me know. I hope you continue to enjoy. x
Date: Jan 26, 2018 2:26 am Title: Chapter 12
Holy shit....So glad Brian finally took care of Gary. I would have loved to see that on the show. Daphne: she's amazing! Felt so bad for Brian but I can't blame her at all for anything she said. Michael is still an idiot but at least he's shut his mouth. I think the idea of enlisting Gus's help was genius. Yes, manipulative & desperate but apparently very much needed. That can only be good for Justin. Having Gus back in his life is something I think he needs for his basic survival.
Your writing is so phenomenal Kerri! I am so captivated by this story....
'Misery coated the man' omg, stunning!
Author's Response:
Thanks, babe!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2018 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 12
Never a sad moment when Justin and Gus are together cause they love each other without conditions and strings.
How much longer can Justin bottle up his feelings before he snaps?
Author's Response:
How much longer can Justin bottle up his feelings before he snaps?
*Grins* Sooner than you think.
Thanks, hon. xx
Date: Jan 25, 2018 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
Heartbreaking this part with Justin and Gus; it could be the only way for Brian to get back in Justin's good graces.
Author's Response:
thanks, hon.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2018 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
This chapter was heartbreaking. Learning that Brian is seeing Alex is a step in the right direction. The plot to use Gus, at least, worked. Sam was a good choice in speaking to Lindsay and hopefully another plot is hatched that will work out well.
Author's Response:
hopefully, another plot is hatched that will work out well.
*Grins*