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Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2022 8:57 am Title: Chapter 16

Ah, I like this new addition to Justin's little new family. Tommy seems to be a very kind and lovely guy. I have a bad feeling about this Roman and I hope history doesn't repeat itself here in any form. Of course it would be great if there was just someone normal who just had feelings for Tommy...

Oh, Debbie, my goodness, she just can't let it go either. But well, it's probably hard to break long and old habits...

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 4:50 am Title: Chapter 16

This whole thing is so damn sad on we go

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2018 2:32 am Title: Chapter 16

Tommy is so cute, I am glad he has someone like Justin to guide him. But urgh, that man at the diner, I hope that's not set Justin back. I need our boys to communicate some more.



Author's Response:

I love Tommy - I had a lot of fun creating this boy, and I am so glad that he has been received so well. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 16

It started well, but the trip down memory lane / Liberty avenue wasn't quite a good idea. Going to the diner wasn't great, except for Debbie who could see Justin a little more.

The only good thing is that Tommy is getting a smooth overview of the gay world, so the risks are limited for him. He gets to know some key people.



Author's Response:

NO, this trip hurt Justin more than he has let on. 

Reviewer: JerseyGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 16

As I read the exchange between Tommy & Lilly, I thought of Justin & Daphne, of how this was perhaps a little drift into the time before we came to know them.  Loved Tommy, he too made me think that perhaps this was or could have been Justin before the lampost!  Innocent times.



Author's Response:

 Loved Tommy, he too made me think that perhaps this was or could have been Justin before the lampost!  Innocent times.

You nailed it. I created Tommy as the embodiment of Justin's lost innocence. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 3:12 am Title: Chapter 16

I like Tommy, but I worry that something might happen to him.  Please promise me that nothing bad happens.



Author's Response:

I promise you, Phyllis, that nothing will happen to Tommy. I created his character in reference to Justin's lost innocence if you like. The other side of his coin. A beautiful boy with a beautiful soul. Tommy's safe with me. xx 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 12:47 am Title: Chapter 16

Holy shit.....that was so freaking brave of Justin! To take Tommy down to Liberty Avenue and then the diner...Jesus. He must be feeling stronger right? Glad he has Sam & Ethan in his corner. Tommy was so sweet & naive. This was posted a little early....does it mean we'll get another chapter soon  lol 



Author's Response:

Lol, you're funny!! :)-

And yeah, I love Tommy. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 12:19 am Title: Chapter 16

Tommy sounds sweet and very much like Justin before the world got tainted around him, Justin can use another friend but he can't give more...Not Yet?

Deb should know better than to push Justin right now because unlike before when he spared her feelings, this Justin will annihilate if he is pushed.

She needs to but out and stop expecting the Justin of before to be understanding, Justin is walking a fine line and anything will set him.

So who is going to be the one to tell Brian about Justin being on The Avenue and face his wrath about that jerk hitting on and insulting Justin??



Author's Response:

Tommy sounds sweet and very much like Justin before the world got tainted around him

I'm glad you picked up on that - I created Tommy for this very reason.

So who is going to be the one to tell Brian about .... that jerk hitting on and insulting Justin?? 

Wait and see. ;)

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