did read it again
did read it again
I'm happy that I took the time to re-read this and can't wait for the new one to be finished. You are a great story teller. Thank you.
Re-reading and I forgot just how good this story is!
You are welcome, so glad you enjoyed it again!
Gus is a spoiled brat
Is his way or the Highway
Ah that was lovely sad but lovely thanks so much for continuing to write these
wonderful stories for us to enjoy
Love this story, I read it as you were writing and then again all the way through from the begining once it was finished. As with all of your stories I will be reading it over again in the future. Would love to read a sequel for after both idiots are released from prison..........
Love your writing as always,
Great revisiting Jack's visit to the loft with the 11 o'cock!
Very dense, long and captivating story! I love how talented people are able to invent/build such stories.
Debbie is gaining some points on honesty where Michael is going deeper down. Vic is a great supporter.
I loved this story, thanks ladies. At the same time sad and funny. Michael who still has not understood anything, fortunately the restrictive orders are put in place, I dare to imagine what he could do. Debbie deserves what happens to her for not stopping him, she will be alone and miserable but she made the right choice. Gus loves his dad and his Jussin, it's adorable. Lindsay and Nancy are hateful. It was a pleasure to read this story.
great story, thank you 3 for writing
Hello MissMerlot and Company,
Congratulations to you for finishing a real good story. I was very entertained as I followed Brian’s Rollercoaster ride to hell and heaven.
At the end there are two conclusions for me:
First: Deb finally got it and realized that this was the unavoidable end to the matter and that it was her fault and no one else’s. She will be utterly alone in her future live, but there is still a chance that it will be a good one, away from her leech of a son and his selfish demands.
Second: Michael on the other hand still isn’t back to reality. He still thinks he can scheme and manipulate his surroundings – as seen in the Prison-Scene as he tried to use Brian’s last name and therefore to maintain a sliver of presence in Brian’s live. Utterly cowed he seems not and I can totally see him start planning his revenge when he is over the initial shock of his 5 year sentence… and I would have so liked to see him hit rock bottom and knowing it… but well, this could point to an eventual sequel to this story?
I am still amazed how much writing you manage to do. Your output is unbelievable and to maintain the constant great quality is another point I can’t wrap my head around… My own mind bursts with ideas but I don’t seem to be able to put it into words anymore…
Anyway, thank you for sharing your work
Oh my god!!!! I want to eviscerate them with a blunt spoon, b@**@ds! Sorry, not sorry! Such fanfuckingtastic writing though! Bravo!!
Good Ending! Everything was wrapped up. Although how Lindsay escaped being prosecuted, I'm still stumped.
Lindsay... just as well she can't have children. Her new lifestyle wouldn't have allowed it, and besides... She threw away the ones she did have.
Memphis received justification... Milton... received prison. YAY!
Mikey, Mikey, Mikey... Did he think that his anonymity at being 40 miles away, would somehow allow him to live his fantasy for the next five years? Michael Charles Kinney. Dumbass... the other guard had just said his REAL name! And for those five years as he lies in his bed at night, he can play those prophetic words over and over in his head:
It is you I hate. I hate you more than Jack. And I hated you more each second I spent with Justin. You will drift away from my memory.
Very, very good story. All I have left is to say...
That's All Folks! Y'all come back now ya hear! (with your next venture.)
I am so glad you liked it.
You could say she was punished by being unable to have children anymore, it was the one thing that she held over Lynette.
Ah, good, good, update.
Debbie did redeem herself. I'm proud of her. Her statement actually brought tears to my eyes.
MICHAEL! What can I say? Poor, immature, whiny baby. He just could never deal with the fact that Brian had the love of his mother and uncle.
Brian's 'wink' must have been how Debbie knew she was forgiven. he did it!
I would have loved to have heard Michael's statement. I can’t wait to read my statement now! It must have been very nasty!
Well, I have to savor the next chapter, as it is the last.
Hope you like it! I am not going to ruin the Michael part...but oh boy!
no tossing for either of us - is tossing a British word?
bare-boating - pretty ingenious!
“Want to help me write it?” The victim's impact statement?
I saw your explanation on the Lindsay debacle. (thank you!) But, why would Mami tell Lindsay that? Why not just say it was heard said that gonorrhea made it's way through the orgy? Does that mean the lawyer caught it then, too? But what kind if judge is going to sympathize with someone that participates in an orgy, doesn't use protection, and gets pregnant at said orgy?
Indeed tossing is a British word for that. And yes he menns the impact statement.
As for the Lindsay debacle, the answer is in the final chapter.
You really worked a lot into this chapter!
Brandon and Brian being friends.
Vic and Rodney were married, and now Vic has someone new coming into his life.
They sausage shaped "floaties" with the two big bally cushions! Did someone bang it Papa?” Cripes! I laughed so hard. The innocense of a child!
Joan Kinney's foray into prison. I guess Jack's visit wasn't enough to save her soul!! “I take it this is where they give me an apology and you place it on whatever file? Then I take my leave and never have to see them again; but I do wish to be provided for.” Delusional much? Haha! When her five years are up, she has to leave Pittsburgh. But the very best is, she can never step foot in a catholic church again. A fate worse than death, I'm sure! She should probably be careful about "Preaching" her religion while in prison, too.
OH LORD!!! Such a wonderful, wonderful day! Then to hear Joan came out of her coma!! Well, we know she gets five years. No matter her disabilities (if any should linger) they have prisons for just such inmates.
Hmm, maybe Jacks 'visit' will cause her to reform.
CRIMINY!!! You had me in stitches laughing so hard with the dressing room fiasco. Then when Drew told him to "rub this on"... I thought... Brian shouldn't be doing this. Just the close proximity of Brian close to his...
Well, I think you get the picture.
Wow! I have to agree with the new attorney. Michael took all that news better than expected. He kept the screaming and ranting to a minimum. Or will the tantrum hit later??? And I wonder which of the men he was referring to when he said: Wait till I see him! Ben or Brian? Poor Mikey... then he thought the Supreme Court ruled in his favor... NOT!!! Who's going to take care of me? Are you switching to writing comedy, now?
Lindsay's barren. Couldn't happen to a nicer person. (or in this case... not so nice.) She didn't want the children she had... it shouldn't bother her so much. BUT why sue the doctor??? I'm still confused!
A WEDDING TOMORROW!!! YAY!! Be sure to send an announcement to Mikey!!!
Lindsay is suing the doctor because he knowingly gave her a sexually transmitted, they met at an orgy and lied about how pregnant she was to her because he thought that the baby she was carrying was his.
Hope that clears it up.
I HOPE MILTON GETS THE BOOK THROWN AT HIM!!!
He needs to be in a hard-core prison for rapists. And most rapists, don't take kindly to others that rape children - at least I've read that.
I would think that Milton must be at least bi, otherwise, why choose a male to dominate?
Memphis should't have any problem bringing this up for charges, because a child has 12 years after their 18th birthday to press charges. So he's well within that time frame.