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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 8:42 pm Title: The DQ, The Joan Miasma and The Newbie Idiot

all your food makes me hungry and order food, LOL

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2018 10:01 am Title: The DQ, The Joan Miasma and The Newbie Idiot

55.   Hm, I don't know if I should like Debs attorney or not. On one side she seems like a no bullshit-woman, but what she implied toward Vic is not going to go down well. And of course we know from whom he got the money to pay Debbie back... from Brian.

So the other fact that we got out of these flashback is that Michael as Teenager already was an ignorant and unpleasant Person. Self-centered, with not the slightest regard for the privacy of others, always seeking his advantage...

How could he not know where Deb has her first aid kit? And obviously this was the first and probably the only time that Michael has taken care of Brian injuries. Does he really think, if he has done it one time he can weave a munchausen syndrome out of this now?

And what should I make of this surprise trip to Florida? What was the reason the Kinneys took their Children out of town? Did Joan think Deb would call Child service regardless of her paying her because in that instant she was the one who abused Brian? And I think this is where the last 5000$ were spend...

Joan Kinney at her best... every attorney who is saddled with her has my sympathy. But I don't understand why Arthur gets a recording of this. I thought attorney/client-confidence would prevent such exchange – but well, I'm no attorney myself and customs may be different to those in Germany. In any way it will only help Brian's case...

Kinnetic staff benefitting from Justin's sulk is a nice touch – the dense admirer not so much. He has no concept of the dangers he is about to stir up. But on the other hand, he is a complication Brian does not need. Such people as this idiot will only cause more unnecessary trouble because they feel slighted and will try to seek unjustified revenge…

See you at the last one…

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2018 2:12 pm Title: The DQ, The Joan Miasma and The Newbie Idiot

I'm curious about the trip to Florida: did they actually go there or did they just hide somewhere? I'm surprised they would have the money for that.



Author's Response:

Hey there,

They actually went - there will be more on this in the trial - Joan had taken more money than she gave to Debs.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2018 1:13 am Title: The DQ, The Joan Miasma and The Newbie Idiot

Love Brian and his Tigger.  Wanted  the nutjob to get fired.  Now just how much trouble can you get Joanie in and is Deb going to manage to stay free?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2018 12:06 am Title: The DQ, The Joan Miasma and The Newbie Idiot

Joan went to her attorney meeting drunk lying and condemning her children for why she stole money from the church and Deb is lying and passing the buck as usual.

I can see why Joan and Deb dislike each other because they are exactly alike.

Yeah she took that money to help Vic with his medication but it doesn't excuse her using Brian for years to excuse Michael's behavior or her lack of empathy for an abused child.

It also shows that despite agreeing with Vic that Brian and Michael are ill-fated for one another, she was still prepared to push for Michael's stupid fantasy to come true and bully Brian to make it happen.

Michael really did learn his deceitful ways from his mother's knee and it now it may bite Deb in her ample Ass!!

No one is going to buy Michael's act but watching him try to pull it off in court should be pathetic and amusing, just like Deb not being loud and overbearing or Joan  not being pious and drunk.

So Mr. Idiot would be smart to avoid Brian and Justin while also keeping his mouth shut and his opinions to himself.

I bet Justin has a rusty spoon on stand by <giggles>

Three Fantastic Updates for Three Fantastic Stories, Thank You So Much!! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2018 11:12 pm Title: The DQ, The Joan Miasma and The Newbie Idiot

Two great chapters.  Oh that Michael is such a slime.  Can't wait until he gets his.

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