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Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2018 8:57 pm Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

Hallo Girls,

 

I know ... long radio silence - and no real excuse, except that it was hot, really really hot here in the last weeks - up to 40°C - and therefore everyone had little desire to do anything…

Well, let's just say I'm still reading and will keep reading. Now I will leave a brief comment without ranting and long drawn analysis of the twisted characters around Brian. We have already been there plenty of times.

 

The developments of the last chapters are really everything I had hoped for:

Michael is on his way to his very own personal hell and he still thinks he will come out of this mess as a free man – we will happily be onlookers when his world crashes and burns around him. I hope you writers will utterly destroy him, disgusting excuse of a human being that he is.

Deb… I don’t know what I should think about her. On one hand she is almost as depraved as her son. On the other there are some little blips of the Debbie we all hope for. Anyway she definitely has to pay for her misdeeds - there really are plenty of those.

Joan got what she wished: the devil saved her from the trial... but nothing is for free, as we all know. I hope Brian and Claire don't have to care about her anymore, but knowing Brian he will see it as his obligation to pay for her care anyway...

I look forward to the destruction of every last little bit of reputation and clout Lindsay and Nancy think they have - their appearance in court will only be the beginning.

 

Outside of the courtroom is just as great even if it is a little less thrilling. The growth of the Kinney-Clan is going forward. They add new People to the fold who actually fit their group and aid positive progress; people who aren't only there because they somehow always were, even if they only ever halted any possible development. The characters of the People around Brian and Justin evolve and the couples develop healthy relationships without unwanted interference of people who are only looking for their personal advantage and profit...

 

I'm really curious what the trial will bring to light. What twisted schemes have they plotted? What ghastly things has Brian really suffered because of them and what will the court eventually decide?

 

I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Greetings from Germany

Katharina

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2018 1:17 am Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

Great chapter.  The truths are coming out and Mikey and Debs are in more trouble along wih the Witchy Wasp.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 7:56 pm Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

Well done Debbie: she seems honest and getting away from her son.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 5:38 pm Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

Deb may think she scored some points with Brian by saying that last part to Michael but she is no different than Joan.

Peter is right she never loved Brian she just used him to get a break from Michael's constant need of attention.

Over and over they abused Brian and still they have yet to grasp that what they did was wrong.

All the evidence presented in court shows that If Deb could have she would have bled Brian dry and run him ragged for the rest of his life, her abusive behavior is loud and clear so is her need to win and be in control, in baiting Michael she is showing the court her disregard smh

I bet she still believes Brian owes her a debt just like Michael?

I doubt they are finished with Deb but Michael and Lindsay taking the stand before Brian should be very interesting for Brian's side.

I hope Arthur asks Lindsay if she would like a hair clip when she goes for her lost little girl look and an Oscar for her tears lol

Three Fantastic Updates to three of your stories is the perfect start to my week...Thank You So Much :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 1:49 pm Title: He Goes Back to the Day You Hurt Him...

I love your stories.  Each chapter has a clue that keeps you guessing.

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