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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 5:34 pm Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...

I don't remember the watch: in which chapter is this detailed? Thank you.



Author's Response:

Hey there, it is  etioned i. Chapter 60 towards the end and the expkanation for hiw it came to be and mean is in 61.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 5:30 pm Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...

Got caught up the chapters.  Great writing.  Now we are moving along with the trial and I love it.  This story has kept my interest from the beginning. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 4:28 pm Title: The Devil Delivers...

Well, that was unexpected, but Brian won't have to hear his mother lying once more.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 8:23 pm Title: And Now the Scheming and Screaming Starts...

Great chapter.  So looking forward to the trial and the verdicts.  Again, thank you for the updates.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 8:09 pm Title: A Ball, Picture Perfect Belle, Loving Food and These Are Our Men

Thank you for the update on this and Des & Moon.  I have missed reading about their adventures.  This chapter was great, I am moving onto the next chapter and then to the other two stories.  Again, thank you for your wonderful writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 6:02 pm Title: And Now the Scheming and Screaming Starts...

I love Robbi; the repartee she has is very entertaining.

This quote is hilarious "he has the brains of a gnat after it has smashed into a windscreen"!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 5:31 pm Title: A Ball, Picture Perfect Belle, Loving Food and These Are Our Men

Debbie is on the way to clash her son and she should have been doing that long time ago.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 4:13 pm Title: And Now the Scheming and Screaming Starts...

Hi guys, still enjoying this and can't wait for the trial chapters!

I do love your writing, but I have a very tiny little whinge.  I have noticed this mistake in many stories here, not just from you guys.  The word conscious (awake, alert) seems to substituted for the word conscience (moral sense, guilty conscience).

I know it may seem petty, but after so many times seeing this it is starting to bug me!

Still love you all though!

Thanks

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 3:36 pm Title: And Now the Scheming and Screaming Starts...

Love the story of the watch.  Drew and Emmett are so good for each other.  Just when Lindsay and Nancy think things couldn't get worse, they do.  Good job!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 3:18 pm Title: A Ball, Picture Perfect Belle, Loving Food and These Are Our Men

Lovely recipes.  I guess they should be taken in moderation?  Lindsay and Nancy really need to learn how to be nice.  It would be a nice change.  haha.  Michael doesn't get it does he?  He really believes he has done nothing wrong.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 1:18 am Title: And Now the Scheming and Screaming Starts...

Brian and Justin are their weight in food in Italy and yet I wish I was there to partake aswell :)

Schenk is an idiot and Michael is helping Brian's case with his continued stupidity.

Brian and Justin taking the kids to Florida was just the reassurance Gus needed, I also like the explanation about the watch and why Vic was so excited and Happy.

If Michael sees that watch on  Justin he will go berserk because he will finally know it is truly over between him and Brian...Hmmm (evil grin)

Nancy and Lindsay are really in the quicksand now and they are sinking fast, do wonder who the father is and are they willing to have Lynette raise the baby and they get visitation?

Money and Power is what Deb, Michael, Lindsay and Nancy crave wonder what they are going to do without  it and a safety net?

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 12:49 am Title: A Ball, Picture Perfect Belle, Loving Food and These Are Our Men

No Regrets now Debra you were proud to shout to the world that Michael was your greatest creation and no one could tarnish that without dealing with your wrath, now the tables have turned and he will be your biggest downfall.

Michael has seen with his own eyes and heard with his own ears who Brian and Drew have chosen for their Forever and still he looks down his nose and thinks he better.

Drew has in Emmett all the man he needs while Michael is still trying to progress to big boy pants.

Brian and Drew were smart to do the press conference at the same time and to prevent Michael for trying to turn the focus away from him.

It's funny that Michael and Deb are running away from attention when it was exactly the thing they craved the most lol

Lindsay also the attention seeking Whore she is about to learn that some attention you shouldn't seek, and with Nancy be her side I do believe taking the stand will not be a good thing for either of them.

Lynette looked Beautifully Stunning and that is because she is Truly Happy and that is why Lindsay and Nancy look she haggard because they don't cherish anything but their own Greed and their outside is starting to reflect how putrid their inside is.

How much do Michael and Lindsay have of Brian's money?

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2018 7:32 pm Title: Una Proposta Nuda, Iron-Style Payback and Butter

I love these "duplicitous callous sack of horse shit" and "stinking progeny"; excellent!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2018 9:38 am Title: Treasure Hunting, Letting Go - Sort Of and Understanding

I really have difficulties to imagine a kind and nice Craig.

Yeah! Emmett and Drew!!!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2018 1:06 am Title: Una Proposta Nuda, Iron-Style Payback and Butter

Yeah Ironmen.  Can't wait for the trial.  Terrific chapter.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 5:25 pm Title: Una Proposta Nuda, Iron-Style Payback and Butter

Michael, Deb and Joan have just learned when you throws stones someone else will come along with boulders to cave your house in.

They won't be able to go anywhere without the press hounding them, oh the irony of how they dogged Brian and now the tables are turned against them.

With the trial starting soon they won't have a moment's peace and no safe haven to run too, or friends to protect them, this trial...well the people attending to support Brian will make this quite noteworthy and keep the press frothing for weeks.

Brian and Justin got away at the right time and now that they are engaged they will prove quite formidable in court.

Michael is going to be extremely shocked when he finds out who Drew is dating.

Just like Joan is going to be shocked that Beelzebub ain't coming to help her or stop what is about to happen.

Thanks For The Fantastic Updates to All Three Stories :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 2:40 pm Title: Una Proposta Nuda, Iron-Style Payback and Butter

When Brian and Justin get back they are going to find they have more friends than they thought.  So Joanie made a deal with the devil.  She's reaping what she sowed.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 11:06 pm Title: Treasure Hunting, Letting Go - Sort Of and Understanding

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 5:25 pm Title: Treasure Hunting, Letting Go - Sort Of and Understanding

A scavenger hunt around Paris sounds like so much fun and Justin being with his family is just the icing on the cake.

Brian also helping Drew and Emmett get together away from the press is so him, he has this big heart and when he loves he loves completely.

Michael and Deb should have the press hounding them and digging into their past, it will be enough to keep the papers filled for weeks at least.

Ronald should enjoy his freedom after all he earned it and so much more.

So how much do Nancy and Lindsay get and will it be enough to help them get back into society and pay for their legal fees?? lol

Three excellent updates for three excellent stories, Thanks :)



Author's Response:

You have done it again...given us an idea, see next chapter! Thank you lovely!

Happy reading.

THIEF ladies

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 1:40 pm Title: Treasure Hunting, Letting Go - Sort Of and Understanding

Everyone seems to be doing well except for Lindsay, Nancy, and Fusspot.  Loving this.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 11:33 pm Title: The Firsts...Time, Tango in Paris and Kiss

Great update.  Oh that Michael.  Just want to slap him a few times.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 4:30 pm Title: The Firsts...Time, Tango in Paris and Kiss

I can imagine the mess they did in the plane. Shower must be a privilege during a flight.

Beautiful suite in Paris!

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 12:30 pm Title: The Firsts...Time, Tango in Paris and Kiss

Hello Ladies,

I'm about to be on schedule! Yeah to me!

Well now, Justin and Brian enjoy their vacation start... numerous times. It's great that they can have this time away from the mess at home so they can be relaxed and recuperated when everything comes unavoidably to the boiling point and to the final conclusion.

 

I'm fully with Ben on the terms of Mel getting restraining orders for Lindsay. As minuscule her interest is in them, as tremendous is her advantage seeking. She will only try to use the kids as long as she hast access to Gus and Jenny.

It's is great that Ben will come back to Pittsburgh, it will be good for Jenny and he simply belongs to the new Kinney-Clan.

The Grassi/Devore's ogling Drew Boyd is a little disturbing even if I can understand it, especially since it happened in the privacy of your own living room… and to be honest: who doesn't ogle at certain celebrities? May they be sport stars, singers, actors or something completely different…

What I really can't understand is Michael – as always. Again I'm asking me what the heck this idiot has between his ears, you know, there where the gray matter should actually be. Riley told him he was straight and even if he weren’t, it is so definitely not Michael's business if he is Drew's love-interest or not. Calling the press about it was a singularly stupid move. Michael has clearly bitten of more than he can chew: now he has not only Drew Boyd against him but also the Ironmen and Leo Brown (who seems to be a supporting boss in this fic).

The bottom line is that subsequently Emmett and Del will only be further pissed and so will the Kinney clan. Michael's position within his overall already bad situation will only be further weakened - ergo: he created a no-win-situation out of a jealous whim with all the following unpleasant consequences for himself and his environment (read: Deb).

Now I'm back to waiting…

Greetings

Katharina

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 12:54 am Title: The Firsts...Time, Tango in Paris and Kiss

Paris and the boys!  Ben and three kittens!  Mikey screwing things up again.  So funny.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 12:21 am Title: The Firsts...Time, Tango in Paris and Kiss

Michael is going to wish he was in a coma cause Drew Boyd is going to twist him into a pretzel, then throw him in a black hole. (And Deb will be joining him because she didn't stop him)

Ben staying in Pittsburgh is good Jenny needs him and Gus loves his Uncle Ben.

Mel should file a restraining order against Lindsay she doesn't care about Gus or Jenny and for all her talk about wanting grandkids Nancy couldn't pick Gus out in a line up, besides all she wants to do is grandstand and she can do that with Lindsay away from Gus and Jenny.

And Michael could care less about Jenny since she was just a means to have something in common with Brian, for all his shouting about Brian being a drop in dad he is the one Jenny will forget.

Hell even Deb has forgotten about Jenny all she wants is her place back on Liberty Avenue.

Will Michael's call to the press have repercussions during the trial?

Ari should really watch his back cause Drew is not taking Crap off of anyone anymore.

Thanks For The Updates :)

 

 

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