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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2018 7:22 pm Title: A Real Family Affair and the Book of Revelations is Opened...The Final Bite

BOO YAAA, Joan Kinney!!! You Just Got Served!!!!

Father Shaw sending the letter to the Bishop leaves her exactly where she wanted to be...All Alone.

What the Hell does Lindsay think she can do when she hanging onto her life by a thread that could snap any second?

Michael would've hit Lindsay.

Lindsay like Nancy is proud of her Whore status, what she should've been more proud of is being a good wife and mother smh

Is Nancy really sure Lindsay is Ron's daughter??

Gus, Grandpa Ron, Aunt Libette, Jenny, John and Peter really had messy fun making the bread dough and it tasted Amazing because it was made with love.

How nice of Lynnette to think of getting gifts for John and Peter, she is a very nice lady, are sure Nancy is her mother? <giggles>

Who Is the father of Lindsay's baby?

She was flaunting her badge of pride around a lot of people and wasn't exactly smart about who she slept with or how many? (Can't Believe She Didn't Think To Get Tested <shudders>)

Wouldn't it be funny if Nancy and Lindsay went on this huge shopping spree before going back to Texas and Nancy find out the money came from her Rainy Day Fund?? lol (A thirty thousand spending spree should hurt ;))

Thanks for the Updates :)

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2018 5:38 pm Title: A Real Family Affair and the Book of Revelations is Opened...The Final Bite

Well done! Joan is out and won't be able to attend any other mass. What a vengeance!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2018 3:17 pm Title: A Real Family Affair and the Book of Revelations is Opened...The Final Bite

WOW!!!!!!! Just WOW! That was a truly FABULOUS scene with Joan in teh church! Talk about nailing her where it truly hurts. That was EPIC!!

Now WTF is Lindsey up to? We all know whatever plan she has up her sleeve will fail, but she still tends to make me nervous. She's such a manipulative bitch. She'll inevitably bring all those around her down with  her. Again....something to look forward to.

The whole part with Aunte Libette and Ganpa ronald is so incredibly sweet. Nice to see such heartwarmning scenes abmidst such amazing angst. 

Wonderful!! 

Sorry I've been bad for reviews lately. Am desparately searching for a new job. company I've worked at for the past 12+ years is chutting it's doors, so not a lot of time for much else. Getting as many hours in at my other job as possible to help make ends meet. Once I'm set up with a new job and can breathe easier, I'll get back to reviewing more. Unti lthen, just know that whenever I find a few minutes to read, usually before lights out, I truly truly enjoy every word that is written in all three of these stories! Once they are all done, I'm looking forward to putting them on my kindle so I can sit back and read them through properly. You are all so gifted.

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Dear Elaine,

Thanks for you reviews, we love to get them whenever we can. As for Lindsay, yes it is going to go wrong as per usual but Lord loves a tryer!

I so hear you about finding a job and some folks perception that you are not doing anything! But one must dig deep breathe hard and punish M&L in as many scenarios as I can!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2018 2:44 pm Title: A Real Family Affair and the Book of Revelations is Opened...The Final Bite

Did Lindsay try to convince Michael that her child was Brian's?  At last the church sees Mrs Kinney for the wicked person she is.



Author's Response:

For one brief second she did. but Debs saw through that. And yes they finally see Joan as the Devil's Disciple and not the Sweet Saint she purports to be.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2018 2:03 pm Title: A Real Family Affair and the Book of Revelations is Opened...The Final Bite

Oh, this just keeps getting better.  Love when dumb and dumber just get dumber.  And, dear old Joanie is finally getting what she deserves.  Thanks for the great writing.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2018 12:16 pm Title: A Real Family Affair and the Book of Revelations is Opened...The Final Bite

Hi I have read every chapter in one go and have laughed and hissed at the baddies lol. Interesting hate you have going on against Debbie lol I totally agree she could have done more for young Brian. I think it’s great to have Lindsay and Michael as narcissistic psychopaths because their level of jealousy and constant need for Brian is real

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2018 11:30 am Title: A Grandpa and Aunt Really You Promises! And Asses Get Bit...Part 2

Maybe Michael will get the message and won't forget about it the next morning.

Like mother like daughter: this is really a great way to describe Lindsay and Nancy.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2018 6:54 pm Title: A Grandpa and Aunt Really You Promises! And Asses Get Bit...Part 2

Aunt Libette is too cute for words and I agree with Gus's Aunt it is just Perfect :)

Michael is finally seeing where he ranks as Brian's former friend, those idiotic gifts didn't deserve any place in Brian's loft or office, cause they are Fugly Junk just like the moron who gave them to him.

Cynthia delivering that crap back to Michael was good but her delivering the restraining orders to them both was Priceless.

Deb really never knew Brian at all if she thinks that therei s still a chance she can regain her place with him, this betrayal is too deep to ever be forgotten or forgiven.

Nancy and Lindsay are spending money like they have an endless faucet, if Ron wanted too and had the legal option to he should try to recover every cent Nancy spent on Lindsay and every cent he had to loan to her that wasn't paid back?

Is Lynnette as rich as Ron?

Lynnette is a self made woman who refuses to rest on her butt every cent she earns fills her with proud cause she really is the opposite of Nancy and Lindsay.

They expect everything to be handed to them and Lynnette works for the right yo spoil herself, plus she is 10xs smarter than both of them put together on her worse day lol

When they go splat it will be Spectacular maybe even gossip wothy? ;)

Fantastic Update :) Thank You So Much

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2018 5:59 pm Title: A Grandpa and Aunt Really You Promises! And Asses Get Bit...Part 2

Great update.  Love every time you make Michael & Lindsay suffer in any way possible.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2018 1:48 pm Title: A Grandpa and Aunt Really You Promises! And Asses Get Bit...Part 2

It's nice that Grandpa Ronald and Aunt Libette finally get to meet Gus and Jenny.  I'm still a bit confused with Robbie and the meeting with Deb and Michael.  Is Deb on the shit list?  What do Nancy and Lindsay hope to accomplish?

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2018 9:38 pm Title: Feasting of the Asses...One Good but the Rest Bad Very Bad...Part 1

UPS... sorry, there was a little mix up regarding Sid

but I‘m sure this Lindsay will think the same

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2018 8:17 pm Title: Feasting of the Asses...One Good but the Rest Bad Very Bad...Part 1

Hello there,

 

Have to deliver a fast review to this chapter… bevor you post the new one -,-

 

Aaaah yeah… how predictable; Michael's ingenuity strikes again. He didn’t even bother to check what the nickname meant with which he was struck. Well, this is another lesson Mikey will never learn: only because Brian says something 'sounds cool' doesn’t necessarily mean it is in fact cool.

 

And really!? What the heck is Nancy's Problem? She lived her whole life in a privileged manner. There was always enough of everything; food, cloth, shelter, money… highly likely even staff to clean after her pompous ass – she doesn’t had to lift a finger to live the comfortable idle life of the well-heeled and it still isn’t enough??

There was never a need for her to work and I'm sure that is the crucial source of the problem. She obviously was bored and had to fill her time with something. And because it wasn't filed with earning a living or simply doing house chores, she had way too much time to weave intrigues, to be conniving and poisonous. If this Tarantula had had to work at one point in her life for the money she spent and hoarded, she would see the world with a completely different view.

It is scary, but this woman seems to be totally morally corrupted to the last fiber of her existence. She does not seem to have a problem with her daughter cheating, stealing and blackmailing the people around her. On the contrary! She is recognizably proud of a criminal. This raises the question of how far Nancy herself is stuck in illegal activities, because she shows signs of a profuse criminal energy and we all know she has molded Lindsay to her image. And Lindsay learned way too well.

 

I had a nasty grin on my face when Nancy and Lindsay were confronted with the Kinney clan. It is really funny that the sophisticated and glamorous grandmamma and the so very highly knowledgeable and experienced art connoisseur don't speak French. Unfortunately, those two creatures are as dense as the Grassi/DeVores and don't want to see that they are history. I'm looking forward to the time when Nancy will try to pull rank in her WASP-community only to be ostracized by her 'very good friends'. Or when Lindsay recognizes that Sidney has way more pull in the art-community than she ever had and will ever have. The gall of this abominable toad to think Sidney's house is going back to her efforts; I'm sure the Bloom's had their house way before Sidney even knew Lindsay.

 

Nancy and Lindsay are like two peas in a pod and Ron should really, really get rid of them as fast as he can. He still has Lynette, the disappointment in Nancy's book (maaan, this woman is definitely not a jot better than Joan or Debbie in the mothering department. Disgusting!). In my opinion Nancy sees her older daughter as useless because she can't (and won't) satisfy her mother's greed. She can't have children, so there's no opportunity to marry her of to an upper class man that wants to have a breeding mare and therefore pays Nancy for bearing her and advance her social standing. We have a pointer to that as Nancy instantly starts scheming as Ron mentioned the 'single billionaire'. Madam Pimpress wanted to immediately marry Lindsay of to a completely stranger because there laid a very distant smell of money in the air. I think Lynette's only flaw is that she has decency and dignity and works for her keep. That she married a man she loved is one very big positive to. She has a good heart, is capable of love and compassion and that raised her way above her mother and sister… her willingness to raise Lindsay's baby only proofs my point.

 

Well, I have a feeling that it will be quite full on the side of the defense attorneys when Lindsay and Nancy will join the ranks of the defendants. Child trafficking for adoption is a serious charge – I haven't done much research only a cursory look at Google but I have read that there is the possibility of imprisonment up to 14 years and a fine. Marvelous future prospects for the grandmamma and the best horsey in her stable… (woe… am I nasty but I like it!)

 

Ok, enough raved... great chapter as ever

See you soon!

Katharina

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2018 10:18 pm Title: Feasting of the Asses...One Good but the Rest Bad Very Bad...Part 1

Lindsay and Nancy have been tricked into the house of their dreams: too bad they can't have it and Mel does! Goodie!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2018 6:45 pm Title: Feasting of the Asses...One Good but the Rest Bad Very Bad...Part 1

Holy Crap!!!!!

That had to hurt Nancy and Lindsay's pride to know that they have been outsmarted yet again (Like It Was Hard To Do!!) and that their dastardly plans are for nothing cause they will still lose.

Especially if they could also be charged with abuse, Hell just the threat of prosecution and Deb coming after both of them should have them scared.

But Stupid is As Stupid Does and they can't see what a Wasp Freeze Out is like or what Deb is like when she is set on revenge.

Lindsay should know Brian doesn't lie he just doesn't give out information if no one asks, Brian being a Billionaire is no one's business but Brian, his account, lawyer, Justin and kid/kids.

Lindsay thinking about selling her baby with Nancy helping her is aagainst the law and so it looks like they might be joining Deb, Michael and Joan sooner than they think in prison :)

My goodness Brian has some good people protecting him cause right now his Fortress of Solitude is Impenetrable and the others are in quicksand and despite ignoring the warning signs they are sinking fast lmao.

Lynnette will make an excellent mother because she knows what not to do to raise a child and with some new friends she has good strong support when it gets overwhelming.

Three Fantastic Updates to your stories really made my Sunday.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2018 2:32 pm Title: Feasting of the Asses...One Good but the Rest Bad Very Bad...Part 1

Interesting meeting.  I'm not sure how Lindsay and Nancy think they've won. ?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2018 11:21 am Title: Feasting of the Asses...One Good but the Rest Bad Very Bad...Part 1

What a great chapter.  This story is so full of twists and turns.  Just love it.

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 8:59 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

Hi again,

Ok, so Robbi and Vic uncovered the reason why Debbie blackmailed Joan. I am distressed at the thought but I have to admit that I see this as a tiny little bit of redeeming reason for what she did. It is still unspeakably wrong in its entirety but I can understand it to some extent. She needed the money to safe her Brother. But – and it is a BIG but! – why the heck was she using Brian? She could have easily blackmailed Joan with her embezzlement. The result would have been the same, but Brian would not have suffered as much as he did. I thought she loves him? Seems not to be the case…

Virago… well, I know that's a negative used word in English (as it is in German too to an extend) but knowing the Latin meaning I'm inclined to say it is really not the fitting name for Debbie. Heroine, Hero-Virgin, Goddess... even masculine looking ones - no, really doesn't fit at all. She's no virgin and definitely no heroine.

Nancy and Lindsay don’t seem to grasp that they are on the losing side. They are restlessly fishing for information's of Ron's financial exploits and don’t realize that he has them fishing in the dark and is clearly protected from their sticky fingers in his wallet.

Looking at Roberta cleared some things up in regards of her brother. She worked all her live regardless of her husband's net worth, which was insipid as Nancy announced. As for his sister, Society reputation and grandstanding are no concern for Ron therefore no manipulation possibility for his women. He strikes me as the type of man who would live happily as long as he is able to live comfortably off his own achievements and Brian and Mel allowed him to see his grandchildren; with no ties to the overbearing WASP-nest.

And I am absolutely sure he will do everything to prevent that Lindsay will bring up the new baby to her way… he is scheming like a pro. I can see that Ron is starting to reign in his demon-daughter and is about to put her on a very short leash. It is a stroke of genius on his part that he will Lindsay make the personal assistant of her sister – only question will be which one will kill the other first, because I don’t think Lindsay will be any good at being a PA.

Ok… Mikey provided us not really with new news. His reasoning and scheming and lying… same old, same old. And Debs Pride will be short lived. Trying to use Lindsay to weasel their way back to The Avenue is another plan to combust on them

 

So, I am waiting… impatiently!

Later!

Katharina

 

Oh… almost forgot: what plot-point did I give to you? I'm always happy to help. But I truly didn't catch it.



Author's Response:

Hi Katharina,

I hd no idea what Virago meant in Latin, you're right ill fitting for Miss Grassi.

Love reading your reviews and will be posting over the weekend we promise. As for the plot point, we were trying to work out how to bring Lindsay back and you prompted an idea. So once again thank you!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 8:58 pm Title: A Blast from the Past...

Hi Mädels,

Well, John clearly shows one thing: the Kinney-genes (… or maybe they are from Joan?) are fantastic if they are applied right and they are assertive. They have wrestled every other gene-pool into submission; John Sr.'s as well as Lindsay's. And if they are used to their full potential there is no stopping someone who has them.

Arthur and John seem to have figured out what was going on with Michael and it is no surprise that it was plain old jealousy to cause his wrecking of Brian's life. Disturbing on this realization is that Michael even as a 14-year old was a conniving sleazebag without any consideration and sympathy who doesn't even try to make a future for himself due to lack of drive and his boundless laziness. Even at that early date he didn't waste a thought on any possibility regards an proper education or a good paying job, his only goals seemingly were to wriggle thru life without lifting a finger, exploiting from whatever source would show. And he already was a thief too… lifting Debs diary – I don’t think she 'lost' it.

The Taylors being the connection to Ron is good; they know how to communicate with him so that his appendages don't realize what's going on. And he really seems to work toward a relationship with Gus and Jenny. I'm looking forward for the approaching Ron-Peterson-Jailbreak from the Nancy-Rock… and his warden is still thinking he is afraid of the society-sharks…

It was a great surprise that Ron's sister is Brian's and Mikey's old principal. She really seems to have a detailed knowledge of Brian's history and she does like him; that much is clear as day. Well, her relationship with her niece and sister in law are the exact opposite. This woman will do everything to rescue Ron from those run-down hyenas… helping Brian will be an added well received bonus with nearly as big a magnitude. It's good that she can provide a look into the distend past and bring some of the happenings to the attention of the family, like Debbie's look on Michael's and Brian's grades or such things. Robbi is a force to be reckoned with; Deb and Joan should better seek cover.

See you at chapter 48…

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 8:14 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

Boo Another Cliffhanger Just When It's Getting Good!! ;)

Nancy and Lindsay are walking into a trap of their own making and I doubt they will like the Snap!! lol

So Deb took the money to pay for Vic's pills and she along with Joan used Brian to absolve themselves of their wrong doings smh

Michael must've busted a gut coming up with that idea, should really relax and have another beer <eye roll>

How much of the money Deb got from Brian has she set aside?

Lindsay working for Lynette? rofl

What job will Nancy be doing once Ron kicks her No Ass to the curb?

Lynnette may be a Bitch, but she owns up to it and I think Ron can respect her for being direct, while Nancy and Lindsay hide their cruelty and that no one can respect.

They attack behind your back, a True Wasp would want to see your face when they destroy you, as they sip expensive champagne and nibble on expensive hor d'oeuvres.

Such amateur behaviors from Wannabe Wasps with No Class to go with their No Ass lmao

Thanks For The Updates They Were Awesome!!! :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 7:48 pm Title: A Blast from the Past...

Whoa Roberta Is Fierce!!

Lindsay and Nancy are in trouble because Roberta is not a person they can browbeat, seduce or bully to get their way.

Small world that Roberta knew Brian and Michael liked Brian despised Michael (Shocker), and saw that Deb used Brian to keep Michael from flunking out of school.

John is a Genius who saw that Deb was keeping a diary and telling on Brian cause she knew Michael would never measure up and she resented Brian, despite the abuse Brian still succeeded and Michael barely tried.

I think it was jealousy on both their parts Deb and Michael really do have a love/hate relationship with Brian, every time he succeeded it showed that they had no hand in it and that Brian really didn't need them, if Brian had ever really, truly looked past all the stuff Deb allegedly did then he would turn his back on them, and they couldn't bask in his success or be envied for being his "Family"

Ron is going to see his grandchildren and Nancy is abput to meet "The Family"

Hope Deb is ready to face her past?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 5:45 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

You sneaky person you.  Giving us little tidbits of information but not all.  Need more.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 5:33 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

Read all the current chapters and they are great.  Love how you are moving the story along and the new characters make it interesting.  Just always happy when Michael & Lindsay are in trouble or in their case, more trouble.  Terrific job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 5:19 pm Title: A Blast from the Past...

It's getting confusing.  Roberta, whose brother is Ron, taught Brian and Michael so knew of Joan, Jack, Deb and Vic.  What is her connection with Vic?  There is something about the diary that we don't know, the missing pages.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 4:43 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

The painting is beautiful!

Ronald is planning something and I can't wait to see it. Lindsay and Nancy think they will be able to remain in Pittsburgh; they will be very disappointed very soon.

Great analysis of the money situation: how was Joan able to give money to Debbie while there wasn't any in the Kinney's household. I bet Joan would be mortified if the information was known.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 4:11 pm Title: A Blast from the Past...

Roberta is quite a character! Brian can't thank her enough for having him boxing and hit hard.

What I don't understand is why Debbie turned her back to Brian: she seemed to be nice to Brian and was following his school's progresses?

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