Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2019 7:32 am Title: The Plane Arrives and Three Times is a Gus

Baby's home... everybody seems happy. Are they ever going to explain to Gus that's his sister?

Vacation time!!! Much needed!

Debbie has to face reality and be honest. If I had to give a guess why... it was to make Michael seem better than Brian. Make Brian suffer for Michael's inadequacies.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Hi Cathy,

You are so close, she does explain at the end, but I will let you read that.

Best

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2019 5:57 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After

Wonderful End To A Funny, Heart-Wrenching Story I look forward to reading it over again for Years to come.

Brian found his Freedom, Family, Friendship, Love, True Love and Happily Ever After At Last!

Thanks Another Fantastic, Amazing Story😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2019 12:35 pm Title: Excoriation and Happily Ever After

Wow.  You tend to make the most of your stories.  Plus giving us a happy ending.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2019 7:17 pm Title: Revenge Is Not In My Plans, You'll Fuck Yourself On Your Own

Just love it

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2019 7:39 am Title: ...Their Final Truth…

TRUTH will hurt Micheal a lot as it comes from Brian. Brian deserves a last say and Micheal getting truth of bitter Reality thrown at his idiotic, whiny face.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2019 7:14 am Title: Wedding Night Heralds the Beginning of...

Aww, Chandlier over a pool... Wow! Taylor-Kinney house is definitely a Heaven. Hot moments & foods. I would Love to live like JB.

Beautiful update. Kudos:)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2019 4:23 pm Title: Wedding Night Heralds the Beginning of...

Ben has to be there so Michael and Deb know that their version of love didn't break him it just made him strong enough to accept When Real Love came his way.

Ben was just as abused as Brian thigh not to the same extant but it was still abuse because they value Power and Control over everyone above anything else.

Deb may have realized that she was wrong but it doesn't change that for years she used others weakness to hold them close and keep them depended on her, we also taught Michael to be the same way only he refuses to see that it was wrong.

Brian making his Victim Statement will show that he was always Stronger than them and They Didn't Break Him, He is/has moved past them they are as important in his Life now as a mosquito bite.

Thanks For All The Updates :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2019 10:37 am Title: Wedding Night Heralds the Beginning of...

Wow, wow, wow.  Hot chapter.  Fantastic writing.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2019 7:53 pm Title: Maintaining Innocence...Good and Deluded

This last sentence is genius: “The excommunication order from your Church. They want nothing to do with you either.”

This is hilarious: "I interrupt this trip down Letusfuck Avenue!" and “Daddy, they’re sausage shaped!” “With cushions!” Where do you find this kind of thing? Real life from kids?

 

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2019 4:07 pm Title: Maintaining Innocence...Good and Deluded

Hi writers,

At first I have to apologize for not reviewing for whooping 23 chapters… so sorry, but there is this annoying thing called Real Life and its demands – agonizing about potentially starting university at almost 40 not the least of it… and no, ultimately it will not come to that.

Well, what should I write now? As you see, I am still reading and I’m waiting with bated breath for every new chapter.

I am so unbelievably pleased that every one of the miserable excuses of human beings has gotten what was due to them. It is still hard to grasp that especially Michael to this day hasn't got a clue about how despicable he really is - but well, he only tops off the charts of the most monstrous deviancies, Joanie well on his heels.

 

On a storyline point of view I have to say that the Memphis plot seems a bit much to additionally pack into this already big story - at least in the extend it gives the impression it will take. If it had just been mentioned it would be fine, but he seems to become a big plot point with all the accompanying writing-hassle entails. In my opinion the poor guy simply disrupts the flow of the story a bit… but that’s just a thought of a fellow writer who happens to walk in the same trap of packing to much in one single Story ones or twice, no offence meant.

 

Now I really, really want to see Michael utterly cowed. He is still the one with the least remorse (we will see about Joanie in this point). He destroyed his own live, almost killed his ‘best friend’ and still feels he is somewhat of the big shot. Maybe you could let him be even more stupid, landing him in with the hardened population of prison inmates? Child abusers are really not liked behind bars, malicious backstapping traitors also not...

Last thought in this review: I am so content with the developments for Brian and Justin; happily married, free of all the old trash (for now at least), co-parenting Gus... nice breather.

I am looking forward to new chapters and I will try to review again...

Greetings to you all

Katharina

Author's Response:

Hi Katharina

Welcome back! so lovely to hear from you.

Thanks for the review and would like to clear up the Memphis part, he will not be a big plot point, like you say, there is enough going on with this. No offence was taken.

Utterly cowed you want...then utterly cowed you will have my dear!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2019 9:08 pm Title: ...Because You Earned It

Hilarious! Going commando can be dangerous! I love when Justin gets embarrassed and flushes.

The recipes are very interesting.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 6:34 pm Title: ...Because You Earned It

Joan Woke Up!

Was Not Expecting That!

Brian and Justin are Married!!

Life Has So Many Surprises Some Good, Some Bad but It's The People Who Are Willing To Share Both That Make Life Amazing😀

Thanks for all the Updates to your stories really made my day and week😊😊