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Reviewer: Devizes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 7:12 am Title: Start Living The Lives You Deserve...

brilliant

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2019 12:15 am Title: Start Living The Lives You Deserve...

Love this story.  Have from the beginning.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 6:49 pm Title: Start Living The Lives You Deserve...

Karma You Bitch,Thy Name Is Lindsay Peterson.

She has lost Brian, Gus, Mel, Jenny, her Friends, reputation and her ability to have kids because she needed everyone to stop and applaude her for breathing, suing this doctor is the last desperate attempt of a Loser who is hoping just one person will clap and say You're Amazing Lindsay.

Michael needs to go through what Brian went through to understand that reinforcing the abuse isn't what !are Brian a success it washis determination to be not be Jack or Joan that made his the man he is.

And why Michael could never be successful but very conniving because unless it was about him he didn't care, his determination to keep Brian anchored to him for life is why he will always lose and be a loser.

Gus is so Happy and now that his his Daddy and Jussin are getting married he is Over The Moon.

Brian is moving past Michael, Deb, Lindsay, Jack, Joan he doesn't hear them anymore and with Justin, Gus and Everyone else he will have more Great, Fabulous, Fantastic Days then Bad.

No more will anyone keep score on his life and dictate how he should live it.

Brian Aiden Kinney is Free!Aiden

Thanks For All The Updates, Glad You Are Feeling Better Too.😀😀

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 5:38 pm Title: Start Living The Lives You Deserve...

Many developments here: great job!

Michael hearing about Brian's second times is going to eat him alive, once it will sink in his sick head.

Gus is so happy: it's the best gift Brian could give him, a Papa Jussin.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 3:07 pm Title: Start Living The Lives You Deserve...

Wow!  Just wow.  Bad news for Lindsay and Michael, good news for Gus.

Reviewer: imherenow Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 11:18 pm Title: Memphis...And The Kiss That Broke The Camel's Back

looking forward to the next chapter.

❤︎

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 6:34 pm Title: Memphis...And The Kiss That Broke The Camel's Back

Memphis is so strong to deal with the indifference of his adoptive parents and the abuse of his adoptive brother, he found the strength to run twice and to fight back when it called for it.

Brian and Memphis are stronger than the bullies who tried to control, own and eventually destroy them, they both can face their abusers and say You Hurt Me, But You Could Never Destroy Me!

Memphis is going enjoy being with Robbie in Texas he can find more of his inner strength being in such wide open spaces.

Yes Memphis is going to be a wonderful addition to this family :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 5:14 pm Title: Memphis...And The Kiss That Broke The Camel's Back

Wow, powerful chapter.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 4:25 pm Title: Memphis...And The Kiss That Broke The Camel's Back

Fantastic chapter.  I plan to reread this from the beginning once it's done.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 4:12 pm Title: Memphis...And The Kiss That Broke The Camel's Back

Tough chapter! I really need to go back to a few chapters to find the link between Brian and Memphis. 

I love the symbolic of the hair.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 6:33 pm Title: View from a Sister and Two Prisoners

Can't wait to find out the words and the truth.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:55 pm Title: View from a Sister and Two Prisoners

I thought Memphis Abergin was older too!

My goodness only twenty-three and sentenced to a life her never asked for, so proud of him for fighting back and finding the strength to keep fighting.

Not surprised about why Lindsay wanted to get pregnant with Gus but as usual her careful plans blew up in her face, Gus is doing just fine with the people who love him Tremendously and when he is older and ready to hear the full story he will continue to be just fine.

Deb serving Michael with a restraining order is surprising, so is her finally admitting why she started abusing Brian

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:46 pm Title: View from a Sister and Two Prisoners

What started when Memphis was 11?

Deb is finally doing a closure and leaving Michael behind, alone: good for her!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 5:35 pm Title: The Plane Arrives and Three Times is a Gus

Gus is so happy and from little to big things. It's great that he doesn't miss his mother.

Deb and Vic: she can cry all she can, it's too late.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2019 2:09 am Title: The Plane Arrives and Three Times is a Gus

Great two chapters.  Glad Lynette has her daughter.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 7:36 pm Title: The Plane Arrives and Three Times is a Gus

Yes, Brian So Needed Nonna and to get away going to Italy is just what they need to regroup and find their stability.

Brian is dealing with so much and he needs to decompress.

deb knows why she started she just doesn't want to say it out loud because then it will really be true about why she abused Brian.

forgiveness is earned not handed out like candy and until Deb admits the truth she will never find forgiveness in herself she has already lost The Family and this time she will really have to depend on herself to get by.

Gus is just really too adorable!

Thanks for All The Updates to Your Stories :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 7:20 pm Title: ...By the Courts, The Gaggle and The Sister

I don't agree that Deb shouldn't have been charged with abuse she started it and Michael just followed her lead. (But it is your story so I will get over it :))

Lindsay had twins?

Two Penny Whore Bitch!!!

I do hope she doesn't have anymore kids let the world be spared her venom of destruction, thankfully Lynnette and Frederick will raise these children with morals.

Brian is more generous than Deb deserves.

Michael is so stupid he makes Lindsay look smart and virginal roflmao

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 3:41 pm Title: The Plane Arrives and Three Times is a Gus

Deb can't answer Vic's question truthfully.  Shame.  So Olivia is not only Gus cousin but his sister.  Will they tell him?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 3:34 pm Title: ...By the Courts, The Gaggle and The Sister

Confusion time.  What happened to Vic?  Are there twins?  Love this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2019 4:34 am Title: Deliverance...

Nice job on the sentencing.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 3:51 pm Title: Deliverance...

Feels like the end is near. Why did the juror n°6 disagree with the others?

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 12:39 am Title: Deliverance...

I FINALLY got a chance to read today. I have been biting at the bit, as they say, to get to this!!!!!

You kind of threw me right at the beginning when the Forewoman wanted a no dissenters ruling. Maybe I'm under the wrong impression, but I was thinking that was a ruling when there was more than one judge. But, whatever, you explained everything beautifully, so there was no confusion on my part.

So, Debbie was not found guilty on child neglect or abuse. Ever hear of verbal abuse? She was definitely guilty of verbal abuse. My personal opinion, I don't think an apology hardly makes up for all the things she said over the years: 

"YOU FUCKING SON OF A BITCH" .... “HEY ASSHOLE, MOMMY’S HERE"

 

“YOU UNGRATEFUL FUCKING BASTARD OF AN ASSHOLE! OPEN THIS DOOR RIGHT NOW OR I WILL MAKE WHAT YOUR DAD DID SEEM LIKE A WALK IN THE FUCKING PARK!”

Case in point. And those are just a few I remembered where to find off the top of my head. She also threatened him. But as far as neglect, in Brian's case 'no', but in raising her son, YES!!! (but that was not on trial here.)

Although Joan got sentenced to five years, I don't think she's ever going to wake up to enjoy that residence.

Michael... YES, YES, YES!!!  He thinks he so smart. Untouchable. I sure hope his next two weeks prove interesting. I assume he's not going to find any comrades in prison.  Maybe he will bunked up with 'BUBBA'.

Abergin! YES!!!  PERFECT!  Let Michael pay for his defense. Serves him right! An abuser pays for counsel for an abusee.  I have a question though - Debbie's 50%, does that include her home, too? That is an asset. If that is the case, she owes an enormous amount, too.

Still wondering what is going to happen to Lindsay, though. last we heard about her, it sounds like everything is settles with her. She can't possibly go free with no recourse, can she?

Looking forward to the sentencing.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2019 6:57 pm Title: Deliverance...

The money going to Abergin's defense is a good use for it he deserves to face his Bully to and show them you weakened me but you didn't destroy me, just like Brian has done since he found out about their deceit.

Michael Really Makes Stupid Look Smart!!

I think he will get more time then Deb simply because he still refuses to see that he is wrong and everything he did to Force Brian to live and take care of him was wrong, that self-entitled behavior has lead to him being built of all charges but it will cost his more in prison because he will be all alone With no safety net anywhere and no Brian to take the lumps he should've got years ago.

Seriously Hope Lindsay get her just desserts too another self-entitled A-HOLE who deserves to see the inside of a prison cell, due to get abuse of Brian, Mel and Gus as well she also should pay restitution too.

it Takes A Dirty Loose Moral, Flat Ass, Low Down Ho To Steal From Her Own Son!!! <smh>

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2019 6:22 pm Title: Deliverance...

good , lookingforward to update

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2019 10:31 am Title: Deliverance...

So happy with the verdict.  Great chapter.  Love this story.

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