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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 6:19 pm Title: You Eyes Don't Want to See...But Watch and Learn, He Doesn't Want You...He Wants Him

Wow that was great.  Love the bubble.  Your imagination is wonderful.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 6:17 pm Title: Slip Sliding, Sip Sliding Away...Oh It's Slip Sliding Away

Vic is right Deb is to blame for Michael's behavior...Up to a point after that Michael is on his own.

The little muffet can afford his own tuffett with his ill gotten gains.

If The Avenue is gossiping that Michael faked his injuries than it has to be true.

Ethan leading the orchestra is as laughable as Michael having manners ;)

Brian and Justin baking bread and getting sweaty...Yes!!! lol

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 5:44 pm Title: Stomp. Step Down On It. Put Your Foot Where You Feel The Fit

Love the outfit.  Ethan will look just lovely in it.  Great idea & pictures. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 5:11 pm Title: You Eyes Don't Want to See...But Watch and Learn, He Doesn't Want You...He Wants Him

A vision that will give Michael some nightmares.

The bubble playhouse is genius: I'm wondering how it stays this way.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 4:55 pm Title: You Eyes Don't Want to See...But Watch and Learn, He Doesn't Want You...He Wants Him

I take it the Bubble Playhouse is soundproof so they didn't hear Michael yelling.  



Author's Response:

Yes to soundproofing but the door was open so that’s how he hear them.

Happy reading!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 4:50 pm Title: Stomp. Step Down On It. Put Your Foot Where You Feel The Fit

There will be very soon a battle for the top of the A list between Michael and Ethan.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 4:45 pm Title: Stomp. Step Down On It. Put Your Foot Where You Feel The Fit

Teddy is now taken!  Yippy.  Shame that Ethan made the grade.  What's the name change?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 4:35 pm Title: Slip Sliding, Sip Sliding Away...Oh It's Slip Sliding Away

I can't wait till Vic give Michael what he needs.  Lying bastard.  Now Ethan thinks he's going to be top dog?  I don't think so.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 4:32 pm Title: Slip Sliding, Sip Sliding Away...Oh It's Slip Sliding Away

I'm surprised that Michael is still in the house, but it seems it won't last long.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 4:26 pm Title: Cry You A River Fine...But No One will Cry A River Over You

Amazing how wrong Michael and Ethan are and they don't know they've been caught out.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 3:49 pm Title: You Eyes Don't Want to See...But Watch and Learn, He Doesn't Want You...He Wants Him

Oh GOD, EWWWW just EWWWW.  I need eye bleach!!!!

Glad the boys are getting to "know" one another and have the backing of the Squad to help thwart Michael (not that he needs any help screwing up).

Ca we have a hot-n-heavy shower scene to clear our minds of it playing with his marbles?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 6:08 pm Title: Cry You A River Fine...But No One will Cry A River Over You

Good riddance of Brent and Ethan. Michael is going to pay for what he said to Justin and it won't be nice I guess.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 5:48 pm Title: The Yeah Yeah Yeahs...and The Don't Be Stoopids

Ethan and Michael: what a great couple they would make; both nasty jealous guys.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 5:25 pm Title: Hip Splitting and Picnic at Hanging Cock...I Mean Rock!

Michael and the split: hilarious even if I suspect it must hurt so much. The way you describe the slow agony was great.

I'm surprised they are trying this as it's not something anybody can do without weeks/months of training, except dancers, gymnasts, yogi and maybe some other sport categories.

The end was hot!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 5:19 pm Title: Cry You A River Fine...But No One will Cry A River Over You

Brian, Brian, Brian Kinney Is In Love!!!! ;)

Brian has admitted to himself that he is in love with Justin, now he just has to tell Justin which shouldn't be too hard <giggles>

Ethan really thinks he has talent too bad it isn't with his violin and it seems he doesn't have talent when it comes to sex either, he might want to see if The Big Question is hiring lol

Michael and his delusional ranting about his non relationship with Brian has sickened Brian and Justin, but it has also brought Brian and Justin closer together.

So Brent should be on his way to Pittsburgh to get told off to his face.

Emmett and Drew are pretty Hot together and they haven't even had sex yet <fans self>

What is Brian going to do about Michael??

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 4:35 am Title: The Yeah Yeah Yeahs...and The Don't Be Stoopids

Michael's done it again.  Looks like nobody is going to see Brian for at least a week.  It's about time.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 4:29 am Title: Hip Splitting and Picnic at Hanging Cock...I Mean Rock!

Michael back in the hospital.  Just what he deserves and they got it on film.  Shame nobody was around to film the picnic.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 2:38 am Title: The Yeah Yeah Yeahs...and The Don't Be Stoopids

Thank you for 2 terrific chapters.  Great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 2:03 am Title: The Yeah Yeah Yeahs...and The Don't Be Stoopids

Brent is a liar who will pay, Ethan is high if he thinks he is better than Justin and he will pay, Michael is so delusional that he needs his own wing at the psychiatric ward, and he will also pay.

Waterfall Hot, Blanket Hott, Justin telling off Ethan Hottt, Brian denying Michael's lie Hottest!!!!;)

Well we can thank Michael and Ethan for Justin staying with Brian, but I wouldn't give them credit for breathing.

Hope Michael enjoyed the scenery as he limped his no Ass home rofl

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL Agree on all points!!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 1:38 am Title: Hip Splitting and Picnic at Hanging Cock...I Mean Rock!

OMGAWD, Brian and Justin under a Waterfall<fans self> Is there any water left after all that Hotness??

Michael tried a split and it backfired <rofl>

Oh Goodness He Is Beyond Stupid, But His Stupidity Is Hilarious!!!



Author's Response:

*fanning BlueMyst* LOL  Totally agree about Michael.  His elevator just doesn't go all the way to the top floor! :D

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2018 12:38 am Title: Beautiful Music, Mud Glorious Mud and Ugly on the Inside Too

This is getting so good.  Love it when Michael is a jerk and you portrayed him so well.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2018 12:38 am Title: Beautiful Music, Mud Glorious Mud and Ugly on the Inside Too

This is getting so good.  Love it when Michael is a jerk and you portrayed him so well.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your continued support!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2018 7:01 pm Title: Beautiful Music, Mud Glorious Mud and Ugly on the Inside Too

Michael obviously didn't understand that only his shirt is supposed to be ugly not his personality.

The more he is denied access to Brian the uglier he gets but to the point where he doesn't care who he hurts while he thinks he is just be witty.

Too bad no one ever told him in order to be witty he actually has to have some wit.

Brian doesn't like Michael, but Michael thinks he is just playing hard to get <eye roll>

Dung Breath getting banned for a week should be nice especially since no one will have to see his horrendous attempts at dancing <shudders>

Bring and Justin are taking it slow and getting to know one another, good for them :)



Author's Response:

As usual, Michael is delusional and refuses to take no for an answer.  And yes, it's good to see a slow build up for our boys.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2018 5:06 pm Title: Beautiful Music, Mud Glorious Mud and Ugly on the Inside Too

Nice that Emmett and Drew are connected, but what is it with Michael.  Living in delusionland?



Author's Response:

Michael is the King of that world!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2018 4:25 pm Title: Beautiful Music, Mud Glorious Mud and Ugly on the Inside Too

The pink shirt is really ugly.

Brian is helping Justin to take a bath and nothing is happening? Does he wait for their third date or is he waiting for Justin to make a move?



Author's Response:

He's decided to take it slowly with Justin.

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