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Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2018 2:52 pm Title: Beautiful Music, Mud Glorious Mud and Ugly on the Inside Too

If everyone treated bullies like this the world would be a better place.



Author's Response:

Agreed!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2018 8:53 am Title: How'd You Like Your Eggs in the Morning?

It's great that Debbie is opening her eyes regarding her son and closing her nose. I don't stand his view, but if the smell is so bad, it must be a combination from Hell: Stinky Tinky Dinky Winky or Big Q-Skidder is so accurate!

I love this quote from Emmett: “Do I have to wear it on my finger?



Author's Response:

I so agree about Debbie.  I just wish she'd do it more often!  And LOL at the quote.  Reminds me of the scene in Woody's after the bombing when the metal detector went off.  Gotta love Ems!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 6:15 pm Title: How'd You Like Your Eggs in the Morning?

My goodness that is one way to truly grabs Emmett's attention and keep him focus.

Brian teaching Justin to cook is so cute!

Emmett did good with orders cause it got them together and teasing each in the process.

Michael is such a criminal and if The Big Q finds out he faked that injury he could be in a world of trouble.

Vic letting Michael fend for himself is good it is time for him to realize people were not put on this earth to cater to his whining.

So what is Emmett going to do with the information he got from Tinklebell?

 



Author's Response:

Yep, bling will always capture Ems' attention! LOL And it's always a good thing to let Michael stand on his own.  I just wish Debbie had done it years earlier.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 3:27 pm Title: How'd You Like Your Eggs in the Morning?

Keep making Mikey awful.  I just love it. 



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Always! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 1:50 pm Title: How'd You Like Your Eggs in the Morning?

Michael is in big trouble.  Love how the plan to switch food worked out but Brian giving Justin cooking lessons?  Didn't know he could cook.



Author's Response:

You know Brian... always full of surprises!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2018 10:38 pm Title: One Way or Another He Thinks He's Gonna Get Ya

Ha ha ha, Michael's comments on clothes and about the contest! Pathetic!

The flowers are beautiful.



Author's Response:

LOL Typical Michael!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2018 11:35 pm Title: One Way or Another He Thinks He's Gonna Get Ya

Michael fired a warning shot at David and left him amazed with how completely delusional little Michael is.

Not that neither one has quite  a chance of capturing Brian's attention, now is revulsion they can have that in spades.

No way can Michael and David do those moves without severely hurting themselves and others, a slinky has more flexibility than those two and is 10xs smarter.

Chyna is a Genius and one brutal task master I couldn't take one of her glasses because I would be Siberia praying she never funds me lol

Brian and Justin are moving slowly and getting to know one other (with some occasional kissing), but Emmett is right they need to go a little faster and spend more time together.

So what plan does David have to best Michael?

Did anyone hear that conversation?

 



Author's Response:

Michael amazes us all with his delusions.  He's nowhere near the real world!  Don't you just love Chyna?  And there's no way I could take her classes either!  I hurt just thinking about it! :P So glad you are enjoying the story.  We appreciate your support.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2018 11:05 pm Title: Cast of Characters and Their Nicknames

Thank you.  This will make it so much easier to keep everyone straight.



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You are very welcome

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2018 5:37 pm Title: One Way or Another He Thinks He's Gonna Get Ya

More laughs about the idiot, Michael.  I just love that so many of the writers feel like I do about him.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL Never enough punishment for Michael in my opinion! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2018 4:38 pm Title: One Way or Another He Thinks He's Gonna Get Ya

I'm with David on this one...completely and utterly flabbergasted!! Michael is jaw-droppingly delusional!! 

All this match making is great fun and am thoroughly enjoying it. Chyna is a hoot. However, I NEVER want to take one of her classes! YIKES!

This is a fun story so far.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

So true!  Michael is the king if delusion!  And I completely agree with you about Chyna.  Love her, but I wouldn't last 10 seconds in her class!

 

Thanks for your support.  So glad you like it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2018 1:49 pm Title: One Way or Another He Thinks He's Gonna Get Ya

Who would have thought I'd feel sorry for David!  The girls have things well in hand though.  Love Tight-end and Quarterback, no have to guess who they are.  Love the pics as well.



Author's Response:

LOL I agree with you about David.  I rarely feel sorry for him either.  And Tight-end and Quarterback are two of my favorite characters as well.  Thanks for continuing to read.  We appreciate your support. 



Author's Response:

LOL I agree with you about David.  I rarely feel sorry for him either.  And Tight-end and Quarterback are two of my favorite characters as well.  Thanks for continuing to read.  We appreciate your support. 

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2018 9:30 pm Title: Working Up A Sweat...Put Your Hands All Over Me

The list isn’t showing. Great story btw. 



Author's Response:

The list is in the very first chapter of the fic. 

Happy reading.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2018 8:41 pm Title: Burn Baby Burn...Disco Inferno...and Drunk in Love

Love this story.  It is so different and just keeps getting better.  Of course, I enjoy all of your stories.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your support!  We're so happy you've enjoyed it so far!

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2018 3:16 am Title: Who Let the Dog Out

Could you do a list of names and nicknames?  It’s confusing. 

 

Thanks



Author's Response:

So sorry!  The list should be visible now in chapter 1!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 6:21 pm Title: Working Up A Sweat...Put Your Hands All Over Me

Hot hot hot in so many ways! Brian without a towel... Self fan!!!

Poor Chyna: she can't make them sweat the way she would like; next time she must go slow the night before.



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*Fanning SNO*  So glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2018 4:54 am Title: Burn Baby Burn...Disco Inferno...and Drunk in Love

Vic can be so devious for the good cause; now, Debbie is going to push Michael towards the good doctor; good riddance!

Justin says funny things when drunk.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Vic could be a devil when he wanted to be.  LOL Don't we all say crazy stuff when we're totally wasted?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 11:37 pm Title: Here Comes Another One

Chyna won't to push too much as Brian and Justin already are on the edge of the cliff.

As if Michael had any chance.



Author's Response:

So true!  They can't help but be drawn to one another!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 7:40 pm Title: Working Up A Sweat...Put Your Hands All Over Me

Getting good.  Great story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  So happy you like it!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 5:25 pm Title: Working Up A Sweat...Put Your Hands All Over Me

Yes They Are Kissing Again!!!

Michael and David give a new meaning to the word Pathetic, they are so busy showing their arrogance that they can't see that it completely turns Brian off.

He was already in a relationship with an arrogant Ass who treated him like a bank, why would he want a repeat of that disastrous relationship.

Michael isn't good enough to wash Brian's cars and David isn't good enough to be Brian's dog walkers.

Both of them haven't even earned the right to sit a the kid's table <eye roll>

And Deb has her eyes wide open to certain things about Michael and totally blind to others, she just refuses to believe that Michael isn't an Angel, while everyone else can see the devil underneath the halo.

So how much did Michael really get for his alleged accident and how much did he spend on his toys and comics?

Are they sure that was Michael's only account?



Author's Response:

I love your whole assessment of the David/Michael situation!  Deb always did have problems seeing Michael for what he was.  He's her baby, and she can't seem to get past that.  Stay tuned for more to come!  You know Michael will have more tricks up his sleeve.  He always does!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 3:46 pm Title: Working Up A Sweat...Put Your Hands All Over Me

Love your stories, but sometimes I have to wonder what the fuck is going on.  Won't stop me from reading.



Author's Response:

Thanks for continuing to read.  So sorry we're confusing you.  It certainly is not our intention.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 3:36 pm Title: Burn Baby Burn...Disco Inferno...and Drunk in Love

I hope they all made it home safely.  When does Michael find out his account is berift of a good deal of money?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 8:49 am Title: Here Comes Another One

Loved this.  Brian's ex is not worth thinking about.



Author's Response:

Agreed!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2018 5:41 am Title: Here Comes Another One

Adam should have known better than think he was that good or smart to fool Brian, though the lesson he got taught was well worth his return lol

Chyna is smart to get Brian and Justin on a trip to Australia.

Deb must be on the same crack as Michael, she has as much chance getting Brian with Michael as Michael does of completing all those moves on the pole with David without knocking them both out rofl

She needs to get off that cloud and start embracing reality before Vic has her committed along with Michael.

Brian, Justin and a waterfall is all kinds of romantic and a pleasant memory for them both to share.

 



Author's Response:

Debbie has always wanted Michael to have whoever and whatever he wants, even if it makes no sense!  I never got that mindset either!  Wasn't the waterfall amazing? I want to know how to get there.  Perfect place to relax.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2018 7:51 pm Title: Candy Shop Makes You Lose Control

Excellent teasing! Chyna knows how to brilliantly deal with them.

How long until they go back to kissing? They should dance more, on their own time. Justin should invite Brian and play for him.

I loved Campbell and Daphne and their respective bits' issue.

Michael and David are so dumb and haughty.

The first picture reminds me of an ugly fish; it was genius from Emmett to show that with such a comment...



Author's Response:

So glad you're continuing to enjoy!  Thanks so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2018 4:04 am Title: Candy Shop Makes You Lose Control

Hahaha.  Michael is spending a lot of time in the hospital.  The pics are wonderful, but I could never do them.  At least Brian is talking, among other things, to Justin.  



Author's Response:

No way I could do them either, but I don't mind seeing a good looking man get up there and try! 😁 

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