Date: Apr 03, 2018 3:19 pm Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Wow, superb, excellent, great writing. Just what I (and I suspect lots of people) hoped for. About time they all learned what blake knew and what a true bitch she really is in this story. Gotta say great imagination with story line, really unique.
Thanks for your story,
Deb
Author's Response:
Thanks! :) I am glad that you liked the ultimate reveal; Lindsay can't talkher way out of this one. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 02, 2018 10:57 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Wow! What a chapter. I'm so glad not only Brian but everyone got to hear how Lindsay really felt about Justin.
I know Brian is upset that Justin didn't confide in him but I completely understand. I just hope Brian can.
Thanks for the update. Glad you are feeling a bit better.
Author's Response:
Me too! This way Lindsay can't twist things to make herself look good. As or the boys, they're due for a few bumps in the road, but I'm certain that they'll work things out eventually. They always do. :) Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 5:17 pm Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Oh Crap!!!
Justin is in trouble and they have a lot of talking to do before any forgiveness is established. (They both have some stuff to apologize for)
Lindsay hasn't realized that in that room is the women who are about to destroy her world and that of her friend Simon, plus is associates.
Looks like Lindsay is about to learn what Ostracism Really Is.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Justin is definitely in the hot seat; but Brian doesn't really have a clear conscience himself as he has yet to confess something necessary things to Justin as well. They really are a pair; trying to protect each other to their own detriment. Hopefully things won't get too out of hand in this discussion. And Lindsay hasn't even begun to feel the pain yet; but by the time those women are done, she will wish that she'd ignored Simon. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 1:39 pm Title: March 22 (Part Five)
First of all, FANTASTIC chapter. Everyone now knows what the bitch is really like. And, so glad to hear that reviews for the previous chapter made you happy as it was truly amazing. But most importantly, hope that you are feeling better. Reactions can be awful and I get drowsy taking non drowsy meds so I can fully understand how you feel. Rest and get better. We will be waiting for updates when you can get to them. Your health is what is most important to all of us. Even feeling bad, hope you can enjoy a little of the holiday. Take care and hugs from PA.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am feeling much better, and I've tried the non-drowsy stuff before, and it doesn't help as much as the Benedryl does. Plus it still leaves me feeling groggy. So, I just usually go for the stuff that helps, but unfortunately, it also knocks me out. Luckily, I don't have too many allergies, but this time, whatever was in the soap I used, got to me. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 9:26 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Way to go Brian leave the poor lad to think he is going to get kicked off the Kinney cliff again
Author's Response:
I don't think it will get quite that bad; but Brian really isn't handling it well right now. Hopefully he'll pull himself together in the end. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 9:19 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
I did wish Brian got to see Justin take down Lindsay and you granted it . Thanks Now what is Brian going to do with the info,Justin is tired and drained
Author's Response:
Always happy when I can grant the readers their wishes. :) With Brian's reaction...well, we'll have to see how he handles it. Right now he's shocked hurt and angry and that's not a good combination; but hopefully he'll hold it together enough that it doesn't explode. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 8:50 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
I really meant to comment on the last chapter.....PERFECTION!!! In this chapter I can understand Brian’s anger and hurt. Justin really did make it seem as if he didn’t trust him enough to tell him about Simon’s true intentions....Lindsay’s as well. Justin shouldn’t have kept it from him no matter how well intentioned.
can’t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Giving Lindsay the bitch slap she so ricly deserved was fun! :) And yeah, Brian is really hurt by Justin's seeming lack of faith; I can understand Justin wanting spare Brian the pain of his so-called friends bratty behavior, but in this case, Brian really needed to be in on it. This wasn't some small transgression, easily overlooked, it will have serious reprecussions. Of course, Brian doesn't have a completely clear conscience himself; he too has been holding off on telling Justin something important, and that is likely to bit him on the ass later. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 8:01 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Sooooo good. Bu please don’t let Brian be too hard on Justin!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm sure things will work out between Brian and his Sunshine, but it might get a little bumpy. Just hang in there... Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 6:56 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
You gave me my wish. How sweet. Can I have a million dollars now? Haha
Author's Response:
Oh, if I only had a million dollars to give... Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 6:52 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Yeah, the banshee is out, for good I hope. Justin will have some explaining to do and that will be a bumpy moment. Brian is hurt and it will take him lots of energy not to scream his pain.
Author's Response:
She is defintiely on her way out, that's for sure; there is no way to talk her way out of this one. :) And Brian and Justin will definitely have some rocky issues to work out; hopefully that can get done without too much blood being drawn. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 6:18 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
OMFG! That was handled beautifully.
She was caught in the act. It's on film. Did she really think she could sway Brian into believing her innocence? Against his husband? Stupid stupid woman. She has no more marriage. No more Peter. No more sympathy.
Daphne got in what she could, damn Liam, but if she didn't then Lindsay wouldn't have known what hit her. For a good as Justin is at doling out a smackdown, Jennifer is so much better. I mean Justin had to learn from someone right?
Now how Brian handles all he found out from what happened at tje Sap's party to Lindsay's betrayal, to that scum Simon is a whole new kettle of fish.
Brian's angry for Justin not telling him. He's feels that Justin didn't have enough faith in him, in them. He's feeling guilt that Justin went through any of that at allm. But I thinks he's hurt by Ted knowing at least some of what happened and didn't confide in Brian either.
Oh yeah, time to call the cops on the disturbance at their door.
I'm sorry you weren't feeling well. I couldn't wait until this chapter git posted. Was very excited to see it up. Now I just want more.
Author's Response:
Lindsay's sense of entitlement and her absolute delusion that she has Brian firmly under her thumb always astounds me; but wow did she get a wake up call or what? ;) Daphne did get a couple of good licks in; and not to worry, I have a feeling Daphne isn't done with her yet. Liam has to sleep sometime. And Brian is definitely feeling a lot of mixed emotions; hopefully he'll get that all worked out in his head before there is too much damage done. And thanks, I'm feeling much better now and I also now know not to use that brand of soap. I'm glad you're enjoing the story! Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 5:53 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Perfect!!!! Love it that everyone got to see and hear all of it. Please let Brian get past the hurt of Justin not trusting him enough to let him know what happened in the past. Brian needs to see that Justin needed to take care of this on his own and not feel like the victim that Brian needed to take care of and shelter. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm sure that Brian, once he gets over his shock, and past the anger enough to process it, they will resolve things like they usuall do. It might get a little bumpy though, because they are both passionate people and things can get away from them in in the heat of the moment. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 5:03 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Wow. When you plan a story you do it up right. Having everyone find out by video cam was downright perfect. I was kinda hoping Lucille would give Lindsay something to remember. If this talk they are going to have doesn't put Justin into labor I don't know what will.
Author's Response:
I'm sure Lucille will still gie Lindsay something to remember; she'll likely just wait until she least expects it. As for the talk, well, we'll see what happens. I have hpoe that Brian will be mindful of Justin's condition and not let things get too out of hand. Thanks for reading! :)