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Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 1:38 pm Title: A Bit of Clarification and a White Dissimulation

Wow, reading this story is like riding a rollercoaster. 

Speed, loads of plottwists and quick actions.

The utter gall of Lindsay calling Daphne an incubator and the subsequent slapdown by the lady WASP;s had me first frothing at the mouth and then in tears from laughter.

Loving this one.

XOXO

Soirsa

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2018 10:19 am Title: A Bit of Clarification and a White Dissimulation

Debbie is great in this story. I love how Brian and Justin are starting to get along so well, and Gus is quite OK with this new comer in his short life, even if the feeding must help.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 5:57 pm Title: A Bit of Clarification and a White Dissimulation

Brian and Justin are enjoying exploring one or two of their mutual interest together and it will be fun reading about them getting closer.

Brian was smart to put in the agreement that Michael forfeits his home and store if he tries to bully Deb, cause Michael is gearing up for some serious bullying when he realizes that Brian is not going to continue to take care of him.

Brian only has one child (For Now ;)) who needs taking care of and a thirty something whiny Bitch is not his responsibility...Anymore!!

Daphne has a beautiful home and the housewarming party should be fun.

Lindsay couldn't afford a blade of grass on that property much less a home anywhere in that neighborhood.

Emmett gave a smackdown worthy of the Queen he is and it left Lindsay in a place she should really get use to, beneath everyone who has more Class and Intellect than her.

She and Michael really should be related since they share the same brain and avarice for everyone who isn't them.

Mel should be Overjoyed to be rid of such a leech and looking forward to her date with someone who can be her equal instead of a noose around her neck.

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 3:43 pm Title: A Bit of Clarification and a White Dissimulation

Yeah, Lindsay, gets knocked down a peg or two.  Just what she needs.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 1:37 pm Title: A Bit of Clarification and a White Dissimulation

Love how well Justin and Gus get along.  Did Justin ever discuss what it was he went there for?  I love the penalty they put in Michael's document.  Perfect.  Lindsay tried to pull a fast one.  Didn't work did it?  So is Mel correct and Emmett didn't put in a bid?

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