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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2018 5:38 pm Title: Coming Together As One, Piling it On and Erinyes ups the Enmity...Sorry Ante

Just love how you can make Michael & Lindsay look like the idiots that they are.  Great job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2018 2:35 pm Title: Coming Together As One, Piling it On and Erinyes ups the Enmity...Sorry Ante

Looks like more fun is coming.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 4:51 pm Title: Explaining and Setting the Stage...The White Knight

Michael is going to have a heart attack when he will see the sign(s) at the store! It's hilarious.

I got what you meant about Emmett, Justin, Todd and Jennifer: I forgot about that.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 2:11 am Title: Explaining and Setting the Stage...The White Knight

I absolutely love this story! It is such fun! Looking forward to Michael seeing his new store sign!! LOL!

And I have to say that I have read stories with Craig being an understanding and supportive father to Justin after he comes out and I liked it, but the characterization you have written for Craig in this... I have to say I adore him! This Craig is so enjoyable!

I love how Justin handled Emmett's *deflowering* of Brian. A dominant Emmett is a wonderful change!

Looking forward to much more.

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 2:06 am Title: Explaining and Setting the Stage...The White Knight

Can't wait to see what Michael thinks of his new sign.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 12:55 am Title: Explaining and Setting the Stage...The White Knight

Emmett's shirt is as adorable as he is :)

Business cards will go really well with Michael's new sign and perhaps shirts? lol

Michael is such an arrogant Ass he is lucky Deb just used a rock and didn't snap his neck with her bare hands.

Justin and Brian talking about Brian's past with Emmett and moving on shows how they are using communication to enhance their relationship not hinder it.

I agree with Emmett that Justin should protect his man and his little grub.

The Avenue and the Greenfield Boulevard Neighborhood Committee will show Michael how they feel about him :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 12:43 am Title: Explaining and Setting the Stage...The White Knight

Good chapter.  Love Em's shirt !

Reviewer: OBabyRN Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2018 5:26 am Title: Erinyes and The White Knight with Blue Eyes...Go to War

I like this Justin and Brian!  Great story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2018 5:51 pm Title: Erinyes and The White Knight with Blue Eyes...Go to War

Does Jennifer mean that Emmett is a WASP?



Author's Response:

Not quite...he’s the same as she and Justin...and Todd

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2018 3:56 am Title: Erinyes and The White Knight with Blue Eyes...Go to War

So Brian now knows about Mikey's wish list.  It's hard to believe he thinks he deserves what he wrote.  Deb threw a boulder at the little creep?  How did she pick it up?  Love to see Justin mad.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2018 3:45 am Title: Erinyes and The White Knight with Blue Eyes...Go to War

Lindsay is going to be so in debt that she will have to look for a new planet which would be such a shame <snickers>

Poor little boy lost his roomy is not very compassionate about cleaning his house and servant mother wants to rip his wee balls off and stuff them down his throat lol

Jennifer is a genius with that sign and it so befits it's owner.

Justin is now joining The Anti-Dumbass Team so his smack to Michael should be interesting.

Since its an environmental hazard doesn't that mean Lindsay can be sued and forced to pay moving expenses? Rofl

So Michael is going to get his house cleaned that should be very interesting <evil cackle>

Mel has to dress to impress her date and make Lindsay green with envy.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 9:26 pm Title: Adapt*-ation

Hot hot hot this last scene!

As for Lindsey, she can mock Michael, but she's not better than him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 2:19 am Title: Adapt*-ation

I'm loving that Emmett is there for Brian.  Brian and Justin needed that.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 1:32 am Title: Adapt*-ation

Brian and Justin out in the woods getting Hot and Sweaty from Intense Sex is just what the doctor ordered ;)

I Feel bad for the rock which had to touch Michael's small balls hopefully it will get help for a really good therapist.

Can't Wait to find out what Jennifer did and what Emmett is going to do.

Lindsay is such a moron and it has bit her in her flat, flabby stinky Ass rofl

Better hope it didn't spread unlike Lindsay's legs!!! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 12:43 am Title: Adapt*-ation

Terrific chapter.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 10:15 pm Title: Mothers In Arms

I loved Deb speech about her place, the Chinese and her son's balls.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 9:26 pm Title: Tag Teaming...Revealing and Idiot Scheming

Poor Gus: Michael wants to his legal guardian, but is unable to remember his name.

Reviewer: OBabyRN Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 10:39 am Title: Mothers In Arms

Loving your story.  Loving a strong Emmett because he really is a great character.  The relationship you created in this story between Emmett and Brian is nice.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 10:35 pm Title: Mothers In Arms

Looks like Justin and Brian will be safely out of the way.  Michael should probably go to see a doctor.  They might have to amputate.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 8:52 pm Title: Mothers In Arms

Great chapter.  Love that Debbie now sees the idiot for what he is.  Just waiting for Lindsay to get hers.  I don't think she knows the power of Mother Taylor !!!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 8:44 pm Title: Tag Teaming...Revealing and Idiot Scheming

OMG.  Could Michael get any worse???????  Look up it up in the dictionary and I'll bet idiot is described as Michael !!!!!!  Good job,

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 7:58 pm Title: Mothers In Arms

OH SHIT!!!!!! THAT WAS SO BEYOND STUPID!!!!!

Michael got off easy because if he had tried that with my Mama they would be scrapping his body off the sidewalk with a spatula and Lindsay's too.

I do like the threat that if Michael tries that again Lindsay gets worse, Deb is not taking anymore of Michael's royal edits and Lindsay should be held accountable for anything Michael does whether they do them together or apart.

Michael dropped his list of demands and Jennifer has taken off her shoes, removed her jewellery, cracked her knuckles and getting ready to rumble.

The whole neighborhood had to hear Michael and that should prove very bad for both of them.

Benson is a sweetheart to give Brian, Justin and Gus a place to escape to for the next week, cause when they get back it is going to Very Interesting.

Emmett's secret will be kept safe between Cynthia, Daphne and Mel.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 7:40 pm Title: Tag Teaming...Revealing and Idiot Scheming

If I had a goldfish I wouldn't let Michael near it the poor creature would jump out the window after a minute of Michael and his squeaky voice.

Todd a powerful Dom? Wow!!!

Michael and Lindsay should really be sent to Siberia where no one can hear them except the snow.

Which matches their cold, selfish hearts.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 4:59 pm Title: Tag Teaming...Revealing and Idiot Scheming

I hope that Justin and Jen are with Brian when he gets home.

Michael a stable influece?  Hell-to-the NO!!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 1:25 pm Title: Tag Teaming...Revealing and Idiot Scheming

Michael, Michael.  So much wrongness in one package.  So I take it he doesn't know about the Dom/Sub livestyle that Brian is part of.

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