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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2018 2:02 pm Title: A Little Misunderstanding When Studying The Moon

Wow.  Brian is a dad and Gus is here.  Can't wait to see how many ways Lindsay tries to be involved and is refused.  I'm glad that Ben isn't enamered with Michael.  Loving this.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2018 6:47 am Title: A Little Misunderstanding When Studying The Moon

Awesome

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2018 3:59 am Title: And There Are More Subjects...And Secrets Are Revealed

Could be very interesting. Debbie seems wise. Michael is still a child.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2018 4:52 am Title: And There Are More Subjects...And Secrets Are Revealed

Yeah! Happy dance! Lindsey lost her slot and Mel is honest and happy for Brian.

I can't wait to see Brian and Brandon's first meeting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2018 2:57 am Title: And There Are More Subjects...And Secrets Are Revealed

Wow.  Michael doesn't seem to have gotten that he's no longer bestie.  Wy would he have a say in Brian being a father.  Wonder who the surrogate is?  Like how Ted and Emmett are closer to Brian then his so called 'best friend'.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2018 1:57 am Title: And There Are More Subjects...And Secrets Are Revealed

You have done it again.  Another WONDERFUL story.  I love how you can come up  with different ways to use Brian & Justin.  Keeping it new and really something that readers like.  I am not a writing critic, but I have read all my life which is many, many years and I know when a writer catches the reader's attention.  And, you do just that.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, sincerely thank you. I've not been writing long and that's a nice confidence boost.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2018 1:15 am Title: And There Are More Subjects...And Secrets Are Revealed

OMGAWD BRIAN, YOU FREAKIN GENIUS!!!

That totally puts a cork in Lindsay getting her greedy claws on Brian's money or social standing, Brian is having a baby with a surrogate and Lindsay gets to see her dreams crumble like dust rofl.

Brian saved himself the hassle of having to deal with Lindsay using the baby to get him to pay for her extravagant lifestyle, and he doesn't have to deal with Mel's constant need to tell him that he is not the father and that he doesn't have any say in how they raise his child.

Brian getting an attorney who isn't Mel is smart and saves him from Mel knowing how much he has and what he is doing with his money.

Cause she would have violated attorney-client privilege just to shut Lindsay up when she whined (Never understood why Brian would use Mel on the show when he could afford a Better attorney, who didn't have animosity towards him??)

Emmett topped Brian? Far Out!!! :)

Michael needs to seriously face reality cause Brian is Never Going To Be With Him and Brian is not going to continue to pay for him too.

Brian has more than paid his Debt to Michael so they are even and Michael is on his own.

Justin is going to CG and so is Brian and they both like astronomy? Interesting, Very Interesting <scratches chin> lol ;)

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 10:59 pm Title: And There Are More Subjects...And Secrets Are Revealed

Oh this is going to be a fun fun read.

Do want to know how Ben and Justin wound up sharing a house.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 4:53 pm Title: Kinney's Kingdom and People's Places In It

I loved the trick Emmett did with Brian's car: the best way to get rid of Michael.

What is the telescope pointing at? I guess it's Brian who aligned it.

Reviewer: Manawah1ne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 7:59 am Title: Moving Back and Moving Forward

What I like about your fics Is that you can make me hate people I love on the show  



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Ooh who’s that? 

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 5:06 am Title: Moving Back and Moving Forward

Emmett is hilarious! Michael is pathetic and Lindsey a pain in the ass!

Wonderful start, very promising!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 2:49 am Title: Kinney's Kingdom and People's Places In It

All the money he could ever dream and Michael is still acting like he is fourteen and Brian is his special toy that people can covet but never have <eye roll>

Michael you and Brian were alone for two years and he never once tried anything?

You are in the Friend Zone and staying there Forever!!! lol

So Mel and Lindsay are engaged Brian doesn't know and despite Lindsay's delusions Mel doesn't want to have a kid with her??

So that means no expensive wedding gifts? <smirks>

Emmett calling out Mel and Lindsay is so Great I wish he had done that on the show, Mel got away with alot stuff she shouldn't have since she wasn't as perfect as she likes to think.

Ok will stop ranting <giggles>

Justin and Ben are roommates and friends? Cool :)

Darn!!! Brian and Justin didn't meet :(

Two chapters and I'm hooked already :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 2:39 am Title: Moving Back and Moving Forward

Yeah A New Story!!! <does happy dance>

Rich, Poor or In between Michael would still be annoying and delusional, just like Lindsay.

Deb needs to pay attention and not listen to Michael cause No Way is Brian ever going to be a couple with Michael.

He would cut off his dick first!!!

Emmett is not on Michael's side and it doesn't seem Ted is either.

Good for Brian not resting on his laurels and looking to keep himself occupied and happy.

Michael and money is a bad combinations he will be broke in less than a year.

Brian has taken care of his Ma and the whiny Bitch did he give Emmett, Ted, Lindsay and Mel something too?

Does Brian have more money than Lindsay's parents?

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 2:29 am Title: Kinney's Kingdom and People's Places In It

Loving Em & Ted being close with Brian.  Not so thrilled with Michael living close to Justin and Ben.  This story is just perfect.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 2:17 am Title: Moving Back and Moving Forward

Another new story and it looks to be a doozy.  So Michael has Deb thinking he and Brian are a couple.  In fact he seems to feel that they are.  But if I've read you right, that's not true.  Yippy.  I'm going to enjoy this just like all your other stories.  

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 2:02 am Title: Moving Back and Moving Forward

Ooh nice start!

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