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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2018 7:40 am Title: Reality Is Not So Much A Friend Of Yours

The end is hilarious!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2018 10:02 am Title: That Is What You Said So This is What we're Gonna Do!

I love this one "now that Kinney is all about domestic-one-man studification with the hot blond".

Mickey is going to get a surprise!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2018 12:52 am Title: Reality Is Not So Much A Friend Of Yours

Wow, this was a great chapter and I love the pictures.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 5:05 pm Title: Reality Is Not So Much A Friend Of Yours

Oh Yes They Will Do As Staff!!

I do hope they are allowed to keep their uniforms...I mean costumes perhaps they can find some use for them later on their next lives lol

Lindsay will be quite surprised when she finds out her etchings won't be in the competition.

She, Nancy and Michael should realize that arrogance is only warranted when you're actually good at something, without any talent it only makes you look ridiculous and very common.

I do hope Ron and Lynette enjoy the party and the new staff who will be serving them ;)

Cherry on top of a Splendid Chapter :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 3:12 pm Title: Reality Is Not So Much A Friend Of Yours

You made my day with your treatment of Michael.  Nothing is too good for him and Lindsay.  Let the party begin.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 10:49 pm Title: That Is What You Said So This is What we're Gonna Do!

Great update.  This story just keeps getting better.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 5:04 pm Title: That Is What You Said So This is What we're Gonna Do!

Nancy for you to use the death of Craig to hurt Justin goes to show that you taught Lindsay well, but Lynette was obviously the better student cause she served her mother to sweet with foam to stuff her cruel mouth.

I only wish Lindsay had got sprayed too. 

Benson is about to go all out with this payback.

Michael, Lindsay and Nancy look their best for the rehearsal dinner after all they will be meeting royalty.

Almost forgot about Carnegie can't wait for the event to start and everyone critiques the artist.

The Three Stooges still haven't learned when you throw dirt it comes back on you times three and usually with a captivated audience lol

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 2:12 pm Title: That Is What You Said So This is What we're Gonna Do!

Oh, I can't wait to find out what the favor is.  How do you keep track of all the characters?



Author's Response:

I have to reread the premise occassionally. Oh you are so going to love the favour!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2018 2:28 am Title: Buttercup, Cupcake, The Prince and Starting a Fire

Great update.  Love how this story just keeps having more twists & turns.  Really keeps my interest.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 5:12 pm Title: Buttercup, Cupcake, The Prince and Starting a Fire

I love when Gus is "talking" and letting us know what he thinks/feels.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 11:34 pm Title: Buttercup, Cupcake, The Prince and Starting a Fire

Gus is as adorable as usual and he is going to enjoy being around Henri.

About time Mel was with someone who actually makes her heart race and body shiver, instead of staying with a cold fish that makes her skin crawl and her heart weep sad tears.

Nancy and Lindsay realizing they were insulting Actual Royalty and not the one they made up was funny.

Of course where do they think Michael is getting an invitation to Deb and Carl's wedding?

Though if they were to come I  would dress all three of them up as court jesters, guards in stiff uniforms who must stand at attention, scullery maids who must wait on everyone at the party by order of Deb and Carl <evil grin> 

Brian and Justin acting out the steamy scene on the fire truck just guarantees that everyone should take notes lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 11:03 pm Title: Buttercup, Cupcake, The Prince and Starting a Fire

Can't wait to read about the party.  That should be fun.  Love reading Gus thoughts.  He and Henri should get along fine.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2018 1:12 am Title: Angry Sex, Latin Sex, Buttercup and Cupcake

Oh this is getting so good.  Great update.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2018 8:53 pm Title: Angry Sex, Latin Sex, Buttercup and Cupcake

Brian and Justin, then Ben and Benson, then Michael alone: from the best to the worse to read/hear having sexual activities.

Gus chose his moment quite wisely!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2018 12:28 am Title: Angry Sex, Latin Sex, Buttercup and Cupcake

So I guess Lindsay and Nancy won't be double dating in the near future? <giggles>

Oh these amateurish attempts of showing off and grabbing attention is so puritanical and shows that for all her years in the Wasp Nest and learning at her mother's knee that Nancy and Lindsay are still at the beginning and getting further behind every second <smirks>

Michael pleasuring himself <gags> is something he should only do in a cave away from all of society <shudders in revulsion>

I thought Ben and Benson were going to give Brian and Justin a run in the heat department, but Brian pulled out all the stops to make Justin extremely light headed with sexual pleasure and some sexy Latin so Brian and Justin win that round ;)

So what will the idiots come up with next and can all their smackdowns be public with snacks and sinful drinks? lol

Emmett, Del, Trey and Blake would make some serious Bank with Smackdown Buffets rofl

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2018 10:47 pm Title: Angry Sex, Latin Sex, Buttercup and Cupcake

An excellent and fun chapter to read.  Love the pics.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2018 2:41 am Title: Setting It All Out and Up

Great chapter.  Of course, anytime Mikey is put down is a good chapter.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2018 11:40 pm Title: Setting It All Out and Up

Thankfully Lindsay is so busy using her vicious on Nancy, while Nancy is doing the same that neither one has time to attack Brian and Ron.

Know it won't last but it is such bliss lol

I wonder who did kick Michael because they deserve a parade and a Day dedicated just to them <giggles> along with the key to the city.

Gus is definitely a smart baby lol

Michael will be hyperventilating while he waits for a letter that will never come.

The picnic on Saturday should be very interesting Justin already shot Michael down, Lindsay should be like removing lint ;)

Blake is a wizard of a baker and he should have customers for years to come.

Ted and Blake getting Married!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2018 8:28 pm Title: Setting It All Out and Up

Lindsay may win this battle, but I wonder if she will win the war: I guess her mother isn't going to remain in the shadow.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2018 8:21 pm Title: Setting It All Out and Up

Lovely Gus.  Taking on Michael and winning.  Did Lindsay do that deliberately?  Finding someone named Gustav for her mother?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2018 8:10 pm Title: Six...No Seven of the Best and The Boom that Caused It

Trouble in paradise: Brian can be difficult to handle sometimes, but Justin was able to manage.

Michael and the DVD: great idea to give him a proof of the fun they had on his expense.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2018 2:58 am Title: Six...No Seven of the Best and The Boom that Caused It

Wow, what a good chapter.  Mikey the idiot just never learns.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2018 12:53 am Title: Six...No Seven of the Best and The Boom that Caused It

OMG.  Michael is so delusional.  Love the video that Emmett sent.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2018 12:03 am Title: Six...No Seven of the Best and The Boom that Caused It

That Disgusting Little Ghoul he wanted to make sure that Brian's attention was focused on him forever.

Oh just would take each of those letters and make him choke on every Damn word!!!!

Whatever stupid plan he comes up with will keep him distracted so everyone else can come up with something actually good lol

Love that Brian and Justin stuck together to handle Brian's meltdown and his punishment <fans self>, them moving into Britin and planning to have another baby in six months is so Wonderful.

Michael might actually Shit a brick, but Lindsay might actually weep blood lmao 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2018 9:52 pm Title: Discovering Things and Reflections of You

I like the way you wrote how Justin discovered the scar.

Lindsay and her mother are always funny to read: WASP against WASP.

Ted's drug episode was difficult, but it helped Brian and Ted to come closer.

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