Date: Jun 14, 2018 4:14 am Title: Chapter 16
So glad that Justin and Jennifer made up and that she's able to give them a bit more insight into what Lindsay might want.
Gus is so adorable!!!!
Michael needs a nice padded cell and a straight jacket until he learns how to listen and accept what is being said to him by everyone who isn't Lindsay. She's only out for herself and he'll probably learn that the hard way.
I love Leda! She's the female Brian Kinney and much better suited to Melanie than Lindsay. I wish they had paired them together instead of having Lindsay and Melanie's commitment ceremony in the series.
The banter between everyone at the end of the chapter was so spot on, including Gus! LOL!
Loving this!!!
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Apr 28, 2018 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
This was priceless. I loved the convo between Leda, Brian, Mel and Justin. And then once Gus came to the party, adorable overload. Loved it.
Date: Mar 31, 2018 3:12 am Title: Chapter 16
I adore Gus so much. And I love Brian and Mel getting along. I'm glad Randolph seems to be on to Lindsey, and I honestly have no words for Michael.
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2018 2:05 am Title: Chapter 16
I’m loving this story so much- all the characters are great and the story is really exciting. The depiction of Lindsay and Michael is really well done, I can really hear their voices perfectly and imagine the expressions on their faces- that drippy manipulative smile of Lindsay’s, and Michaels sulky face ;) Brilliant story all around- I can’t wait for the next part! A definite favourite :)
Date: Mar 26, 2018 6:43 am Title: Chapter 16
Yeah! Leda is here and Mel is starting to go back to her true self, including kicking balls.
If Lindsay discovers that Gus' found is full of millions, she's going to be nuts, more than she already is. She better be careful because she will have to face Jennifer, her parents, Justin, Brian and Mel, then her in laws.
Date: Mar 26, 2018 3:23 am Title: Chapter 16
The end was so funny.
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2018 3:19 am Title: Chapter 16
Will Ron and Nancy be ready to listen and walk away from Lindsay when they hear the whole truth?
Randolph tried to save his son from Lindsay and walked into a trap, the only way out is to beat Lindsay at her own game.
Tell the truth and take the hit like a man so you can end this sham marriage with dignity.
Michael is in his own little world and no one is going to pull him out of it, of course he never met Justin who really doesn't suffer fools and their pathetic delusions.
Lindsay couldn't get Brian and she won't be getting Justin but it will be funny watching her try her feminine wiles on him.
When he gets through laughing he can toss her nickel for the chuckle, sense he doesn't do swanky cunt and has taste.
Gus had me rolling with his comments to Mel, way too cute :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2018 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 16
It's good to know that all the key players are backing Justin and Brian. Michael will try to cause a problem, but just what can he do and not sound like a fool?
Date: Mar 25, 2018 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter. Oh that Lindsay is such a bitch. Glad that Mel & Brian now get along. Good writing.