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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2018 5:09 am Title: Chapter 25

Poor Michael.  (giggle)  He thought getting Brian to come back would change things.  (giggle)  How stupid of him.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2018 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 24

It's great that Brian was able to explain why he moved to Chicago and that his job wasn't his priority anymore while he could assure that the maximum would be done for a campaign.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2018 2:07 pm Title: Chapter 24

Great update.  Love how Brian is so happy with Justin & Gus.  Now it is time to kick Lindsay to the curb !!!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2018 2:25 am Title: Chapter 24

It's good to see more on this.  Lindsay not seeing that her approach is wrong will bite her in the end.  Brian has done the right thing for the right reason.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2018 2:18 am Title: Chapter 24

If Brian had brought Lindsay to that meeting he would've been too busy fixing her faux pas and trying to stop her from taking over the conversation, acting like  she understands advertising, whil flicking her hair, disregarding Jelly who is smarter and flirting with Harry outrageously.

With Michael it would've been cringing at him opening his mouth, eating, holding his fork, his comic book t-shirts, his ignorance at everything and whining about how he really wanted to go to a comic book store.

Two dolts who have as much culture as a lump of dirt (Sorry Dirt, You Are Still Smarter and Actually Serve a Purpose).

Lindsay wants everyone to her feet for having a baby while dismissing how that baby came to be here, coming to New York won't change that Brian Never Loved Her and Never Will.

Brian loves Justin and Gus.

Everyone else is far behind.

Michael could stay propping up the bar at Babylon until the end of days and still Brian wouldn't care.

Someone Toss Out A Net, The Lunatics Have Escaped The Assylum!!! :)        

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2018 3:52 am Title: Chapter 23

Awww! TAG

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2018 3:48 am Title: Chapter 23

LOved the ending.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 23

I am glad Justin and Gus are going to NY, i won't worry about them with Brian

Reviewer: Slugger07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 16

This was priceless.  I loved the convo between Leda, Brian, Mel and Justin.  And then once Gus came to the party, adorable overload.  Loved it.

Reviewer: Slugger07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 15

That was all sorts of awesome!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 23

Looks like their might be another child in Brian's future.  Love how Cynthia and her husband took Lindsay on.  Don't think Lindsay will listen.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 23

Beautiful chapter, apart Lindsey trying to get what she wants.

Funny how Gus and Brian are teaming to get more toys and Justin is resisting.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 5:21 pm Title: Chapter 23

Lindsay is so desperate to figure out a way to get Brian that she is refusing to see that she never stood a chance.

Brian could never love someone so weak and lazy like Michael and Lindsay they need to do everything and expects everyone to worship them because they associate with Brian.

To people like that were made for The Friend Zone and can never move out of it.

So going to Cynthia was a waste and that is what Lindsay is a waste of time.

Brian and Justin having a baby is good they are not letting others dictate their lives or happiness.

So what new stupid will Lindsay think of next and is Michael having fun in Delusion Land?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

Love this story so much, except maybe for Lindsay, but she does keep it going.  Great writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2018 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 22

Brian will not suffer the consequential cause he has better things to do.

No harm in having more back-up when delusional comes to town.

Lindsay is desperate to be the center of someone's universe and she really can't stand being ignored by anyone.

She could be dangerous so Brian will have to play this carefully.

Ted is a good friend for Brian cause he only wants Brian to be happy.

Michael is lost in his own delusions and until he is ready to admit that Brian never loved him past friend then he will remain there. :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2018 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 22

It's nice that Brian has Ted to back him up even though we know he has Justin as well.  At least they are not alone in their fight.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2018 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 22

OK, now that was a hot chapter.  Great job.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2018 7:36 pm Title: Chapter 22

Brian can't get somewhere without being noticed: gays, straights, undecided, men, women, everybody can be hit by his sexy, confident and vibrant persona. Adding Gus in the scene and it's a big kaboom!

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 3:14 am Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter.  Love that Brian showed up and told LIndsay off.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 1:22 am Title: Chapter 21

Lindsay demands what Justin earned simply by being himself and not letting anyone dictate how his life should be.

And that is what Lindsay loathes she wants everyone to love and show her untold respect but who can respect her when she doesn't respect herself?

Being sneaky and underhanded while neglecting a baby who doesn't play by your rules is no way to get someone to love you, it only makes you despise and loathe the person who did it.

Brian admitting that he loves Justin shows Lindsay that no matter what she does next Brian will never love, want or desire her and that what little friendship they did have died the second she betrayed his trust.

Lindsay coming to Chicago means she is desperate to regain whatever power she has, does that mean Mommy and Daddy cut off the money supply or are they getting ready to?

And have all her other resources dried up aswell??

What is Lindsay going to do next??

Who The Hell Told Lindsay Where Brian and Justin are??

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 21

Brian seems so at ease with this very new life and so is Gus.

How did Lindsay discover where they were?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 21

Lindsay showed up and Brian told her off.  Good job.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 21

I want Lindsay to go away for good, please write that. I like this loving Brian and making the move to Chicago for Justin and Gus, with his team following...

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2018 8:09 pm Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter.  Cat't believe that Lindsay just keeps at it.  Glad that Brian is finally telling her off and showing her that he loves Justin.  Can't wait to see where you are going next with this story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2018 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 20

Michael is beyond recovery.

Brian is a very hot Daddy; so great that found a new home where his past and "friends" will let him be free.

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