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Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2018 3:23 am Title: Chapter 16

The end was so funny.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2018 3:19 am Title: Chapter 16

Will Ron and Nancy be ready to listen and walk away from Lindsay when they hear the whole truth?

Randolph tried to save his son from Lindsay and walked into a trap, the only way out is to beat Lindsay at her own game.

Tell the truth and take the hit like a man so you can end this sham marriage with dignity.

Michael is in his own little world and no one is going to pull him out of it, of course he never met Justin who really doesn't suffer fools and their pathetic delusions.

Lindsay couldn't get Brian and she won't be getting Justin but it will be funny watching her try her feminine wiles on him.

When he gets through laughing he can toss her nickel for the chuckle, sense he doesn't do swanky cunt and has taste.

Gus had me rolling with his comments to Mel, way too cute :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2018 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 16

It's good to know that all the key players are backing Justin and Brian.  Michael will try to cause a problem, but just what can he do and not sound like a fool?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2018 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter.  Oh that Lindsay is such a bitch.  Glad that Mel & Brian now get along.  Good writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2018 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 15

Randolph must be high if he thinks Lindsay is going to stop now?

His kids get to tell him every day "I Told You So!" As a matter of fact they shut get a banner and t-shirts made.

Does Lindsay have a record for prostitution or did Reese get statements from everyone she slept with? (Must be a short list it's not like she is good in bed lol)

Michael had the truth shoved down his throat and still he will fight to make Brian his.

This is so sad because they are playing childish games and the adults will not be serving childish consequences.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2018 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 15

Well Lindsay and Mikey just had to show up.  At least Randolf knows the truth.  Now why does he plan to stay married to Lindsay?  Is there something that can be done about Michael?  Love this story.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2018 1:15 pm Title: Chapter 15

GREAT chapter.  Now make sure that Randolph keeps his word.  Love when Michael & Lindsay get knocked down a few pegs !!!!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2018 7:13 am Title: Chapter 15

LOL! Explosive chapter, StarBaby! Bet Randy is regretting not listening to his kids about that Globetrotting Thundercunt. As for Michael, he'd better run after Brett. He's probably the only one who would tolerate his whiny ass. Oh, can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the GREAT work! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2018 7:11 am Title: Chapter 15

Lindsey showing her true self doesn't suit anybody.

She lost this battle, but doesn't think she lost the war.

Reviewer: Manawah1ne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2018 7:04 am Title: Chapter 15

LMAO I was getting angry with the husband but I'm liking him now awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Slugger07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 3:18 am Title: Chapter 9

Our boys working together for Gus, heck yes.  And I really thought Justin was going to have a queen out when Brian told him.

Reviewer: Slugger07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2018 3:04 am Title: Chapter 7

Bahaha, Justin makes Mr. Kinney happy Jessica.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 1:11 am Title: Chapter 14

Oh no.  Hopefully, Randolph will go with Brian and Justin on custody-  Brian has custody and Lindsay left Gus-  Justin had adopted him and now he is with Brian.  So happy that everybody wants to follow Brian to Chicago.  Nice to know that in this universe, Debbie is making Michael stand up for his own good-  Maybe Brian can get out of town-  Chicago and Mikey will not know where he is or how to find him.  

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 14

Wow, terrific chapter.  The plot is thickening and I love it.  Great job.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 7:50 am Title: Chapter 14

Bad news, but the hubby wants to know what this is about. He wants a trophy wife, not a liar with a kid.

Michael is as greedy as stupid.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 5:19 am Title: Chapter 14

Wow! That was jam packed with goodness.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 4:36 am Title: Chapter 14

Hahaha.  Michael got just what he deserved.  Brian promised?  When?  Lindsay struck gold, black gold.  She still might have a chance to keep it, but I have a feeling she's going to have to give up Gus, which shouldn't be too hard.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 4:18 am Title: Chapter 14

Michael got exactly what he deserved!!

Crap Lindsay married a Billionaire?

Randolph's kids are going to roast his Ass when he heard the actual truth from Brian and Justin.

If he continues to stay with her and help her then he deserves to have his private life in the public eye.

Hope his kids were smart enough to put in an Adultery Clause that says StepMonster gets nothing if she has been spreading it all over time (Doubt she he been faithful) and a Morality Clause that if she brings unfavorable attention to the family she gets nothing and has to return everything that was given prior to and during the marriage.

Crappp!!!!!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 13

Emmett is quite witty when he wants: too bad for Michael!

Reese and Emmett? That could be very interesting to witness.

Brent went through all of this for nothing: Michael is blind.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 8:42 am Title: Chapter 13

Lindsay sucks too, and not in a life affirming way

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 1:03 am Title: Chapter 13

It's nice that Brian has rights to Gus, just wish the judge had pushed the adoption through too.  Brent is so stupid to believe Lindsay and now Mikey.  Mikey is so stupid that he expects Justin to sign comics at his store when he hasn't even talked to his publisher or agent.  

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2018 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 13

Wow! Mikey has his own version of himself in Brent! LOL! He's getting what he deserves!

Love Emmett and Reese's conversation in Babylon! I think they would make a very interesting couple.

I hope Ted's going to be able to walk once Blake is done showing his appreciation! LOL!

So happy the judge agreed to sign the papers and push it through the system. Hopefully the adoption will go smoothly, too!

Another great chapter! Looking forward to the next!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2018 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 13

Brent you are Michael.

You are chasing Michael, who is chasing Brian but who is chasing you?

This mess is of your own making and you must live with consequences of your stupidity, just like Michael will have to deal with the start of his come tomorrow and Justin isn't at the store and everyone tears Michael apart.

Sounds like fun wish I join in ;)

Brian is falling for Justin after a week, Michael had years and still can't move out of the Friend Zone even if his ass shit gold bricks on Sundays and pissed diamonds on Mondays.

Brian has is rights to Gus back now they need to get their resources together to fight Lindsay.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2018 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter.  I love that you write Michael in a way that makes me hate him even more than usual.  Now to get Lindsay what she also deserves.

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 12:57 am Title: Chapter 12

From the description of Reese....talk, dark and handsome not too mention smart and athletic. He was most likely Brian's first real love interest. He would have been a great match for College age Brian but Michael with his crazy stalker ass must have did/said something to Reese to get him to back off or am I assuming Reese' is gay? Hmmmmm.....think I may need to go back and reread a few Chapters...😜😘😀......If he's straight I call debs on Cynthia's behalf. Not near enough stories that give Cyn a love interest. 

This AU Michael comes across as dangerously obsessed with Brian. Did anyone else catch the few crazy internal rants Michael had about watching Brian hanging out with Reese on the soccer field? Was he stalking Brian even back then?  I can picture his loser ass lurking around the campus bleachers watching Brian. Creepy little weasel man.

When Lindsay brings her used up nasty ass back to the Pitts she better leave Gus alone. If not she'll have Brian and Justin wrath to deal with. For Gus they will tag team annihilate her....can't wait for her and Mikey to get theirs......I'll bring the popcorn.

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