Date: Mar 12, 2018 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
Whoa Teddy! What change since the beginning! "Don't mess with my twink" was loud and clear.
Brent is so in love with Michael that he forgot his common sense if he ever had any.
Now, Brian knows who was leaking information. What else Lindsey found to get back to Brian?
Date: Mar 12, 2018 8:31 am Title: Chapter 12
Things are getting good.
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2018 8:02 am Title: Chapter 12
Well one question answered.....You go Ted ! He is going to get lucky tonight
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2018 6:28 am Title: Chapter 11
Brian would not take Gus from Justin but he would hurt Lindsay Thanks for this
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2018 3:58 am Title: Chapter 12
OMG! You caught me off guard with Brent! Poor delusional Brent in love with Mikey and manipulated by Lindsay. And now unemployed!
I love that Brian didn't even bother to read the results. He knew in his heart that no matter what the results said, Gus is his and Justin's son.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
*Hugs*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2018 3:56 am Title: Chapter 12
Damn It Wasn't Michael Helping Lindsay?:(
Brent is a fool who got spellbound by Michael and Lindsay's act and now he is out of a job and has to payback every cent he earned working for Kinnectic...Ouch!!!
Lindsay is heading to Chicago to get Gus and boy will she be surprised cause she lost her trump card.
The blood test just confirmed what they already knew and now they have to be ready because Hurricane Slut will heading there way sooner than they want, especially when the money dries up from Brent who will need to put in an application at the Big Q in the morning.
Ted punching Michael for pushing Blake made m smile and his threat to Michael made me proud, Ted is so Getting Laid Every Night!! lol
Brian allowing Justin to top him shows the trust he feels for this man who he has known for such a short time, Justin letting Gus decide what he wanted to call Brian is Justin knowing that he and Gus are safe with Brian.
Wonderful Informative Chapter:)
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2018 3:39 am Title: Chapter 12
Michael is such a twit. And Brent is stupid. First he believes Lindsay and doesn't even check to see if what she's saying is true. Anyone on Liberty Avenue could have told him it was a lie. What is it that Lindsay got to fight Brian with?
Date: Mar 12, 2018 3:20 am Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter. Nice job having it be someone we really didn't know helping Lindsay and Michael just keeps being more of an idiot. Terrific writing.
Date: Mar 12, 2018 2:08 am Title: Chapter 10
I wasn't sure about the premise of the story, but I lvoe it. So glad that Justin didn't freak out when Brian told him that he thought Gus was his child. I'm worried that if Justin and Brian have to put a notice out that he wants to adopt Gus, Lindsay will come calling. Off to read some more.
Date: Mar 11, 2018 6:09 am Title: Chapter 11
It must hurt a lot for Mel to see that her Nemesis can have a better relationship than the one she had with Lindsey! Too bad; she should have opened her eyes before it was too late.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2018 3:00 am Title: Chapter 11
Love how Jen told Mel off for talking in front of Gus. It's good that Brian is more than willing to add Justin into his life. Gus is going to be one happy little boy.
Date: Mar 11, 2018 1:28 am Title: Chapter 11
Good chapter. Trying in my mind to think who is helping Lindsay. Michael just doesn't seem smart enough. You will tell us when the time is right.
Date: Mar 11, 2018 1:27 am Title: Chapter 11
Thank goodness Justin took that leap of faith and trusted Brian.
Love how Jen handled Mel and how Brian didn't take to sniping at her the way she was sniping at him. She knows the truth about the person Lindsay really is, so hopefully she will start to look at Brian without the Lindsay blinders.
Hopefully they will all do what's best for Gus.
Looking forward to more!
*Hugs*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2018 1:01 am Title: Chapter 11
Mel never believed Brian could love anyone because she never took the time to get to know him.
It's easy to judge someone when you only get one side of the story and jealousy is clouding the truth.
Lindsay was able to be manipulative because no one really look under the surface except for Reese.
Mel wants to hold Brian responsible for her relationship with Lindsay falling apart but Brian wasn't as involved in their as she thinks and if she just opened her eyes and really listened she would've seen that Lindsay uses everyone to prop herself up.
Justin is doing the right thing by giving custody to Brian and Brian is doing the right thing by making sure Justin can adopt Justin.
Michael has to be the one giving Lindsay info and best way to know is to plant false information.
Very Good Chapter :)
Date: Mar 10, 2018 7:17 am Title: Chapter 10
I can't wait for Mel to find out that Brian is the father. At least, she provided a solution to fix the problem.
Gus will be ecstatic when he will know.
Debbie is seeing the light, finally.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2018 6:22 am Title: Chapter 10
So glad that Deb has clued in on Michael and having really listened to what Emmett said she took Michael's records to Brian. Very clever move on her part!
Happy to see that Brian is having Ted check into setting up Kinnetik Chicago, too! I'm sure that will chap Mikey's ass when he finds out!
Can't wait to see what happens when all these kids show up at Michael's store and Justin isn't there!
Another clever move was Ted and Justin both going to see Mel. I bet if Ted had tried to talk to her alone she would have figured out he was there about Brian.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
*Hugs*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:44 am Title: Chapter 10
I do so love how much Brian cares for not only Gus but Justin as well. I don't know if Michael is behind Lindsay being a step ahead but I wouldn't put it past him.
Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:33 am Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter. The drama is building. We just know that the witch will show up to make trouble, but I trust you to take care of her.
Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:28 am Title: Chapter 10
Loving this can't wait for next chapter
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2018 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
So happy that they are working together to protect Gus from Lindsay and they will be continuing to see each other.
Chicago is a good place for another Kinnectic and keeps Brian from ripping Michael apart, of course if he is the one funding Lindsay's run he will need an ambulance anyway.
I like Reese he saw through Lindsay and her need to be the center of attention, plus her nice girl next door routine.
Brian needs to tell Deb that Michael is not his responsibility since he didn't birth him, their friendship is hanging by a thread and so is her relationship with Brian if she doesn't stop pushing.
Brian is not fourteen anymore and he is strong enough to leave Deb and Michael behind to fend for themselves.
He also needs to stress that His Money is just that His Damn Money, every cent in his bank account is his and he is not Michael's personal atm.
Lindsay will be showing up soon cause she liked the chase because it kept Brian focused on her but now she is going to find out how Brian handles being lied to and used.
Funny how Mel became what Lindsay always wish she had been now that they are over, that will Piss Lindsay off.
Enjoyed reading all nine chapters :)
Date: Mar 06, 2018 10:30 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow that was a big chapter with lots going on. I was so worried about Brian knowing about Gus and keeping it from Justin but thank you you resolved it in this chapter. I cannot wait till the next chapter comes along
Date: Mar 06, 2018 6:45 am Title: Chapter 9
Justin handled that better than I would have.
Date: Mar 06, 2018 4:45 am Title: Chapter 9
So relieved that Brian told Justin, even if it was forced a little. I can't wait to read when Gus will know: his Brian actually is his.
Date: Mar 06, 2018 4:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Well this chapter responded to my last review.
It has to be Mikey paying her way and keeping her informed how close Brian's search is getting. If she was there with Gus that would mean Brian couldn't devote all his spare time to HIM.
Sharing Gus is the only route to go. Expanding to Chicago would solve so many of Brian's problems.
Really looking forward to see how Mikey reacts to Justin being a no show. Ha! Thinks he's so entitled.
Date: Mar 06, 2018 4:01 am Title: Chapter 8
Didn't seem like Reese asked Justin anything important to finding Lindsay. Brian needs to show Justin a picture and take it from there. Hurt, tears, anger, fear, whatever but get that part out of the way.
Go Jessica. Mikey needs a clue. Reese will help with that. Brian isn't his. Never was never will be.