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Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 19

OMG! Can Gus get any cuter?! He is so adorable with Craig who has finally seen the light and again with Deb who is willing to share his daddy with him.

Emmett is a true friend, helping with the loft and getting Brian, Justin and Gus on their way home.

Loving this!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 31

Interesting ping-pong match between Justin and Claire. What a harpy!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2018 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 31

Holy Mother! Does Claire actually have a brain? To form a thought all on her own? She can't even try to consider what everyone is telling her It's as if all she can believe is what Michael told her. She really should ask Michael if he has any signed proof that what he told her is the truth. And the Peterson's are petty and jealous. Michael is just as stubborn and stupid. Everyone is telling him the same thing, but he's so sure of himself, that he can make Brian to heel and can get what he wants.

Loving the story, and can't wait for more.

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2018 10:48 am Title: Chapter 31

Thanks for the update for all your current stories.  I still like this best, but Alone is a close second.  Gus' Choice I still read, even though it's not my cup of tea, because you wrote it! I have tried to read the end of Life AWKI but I lost the plot, literally, along the way!

Thanks Star, I hope you are well,

Deb

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2018 7:43 am Title: Chapter 31

I don't know who has the most twisted / deviant mind between Claire and Michael. Great chapter!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2018 4:14 am Title: Chapter 31

Poor Claire, or should I say poor baby.  She's not going to get what Michael told her she would.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2018 2:20 am Title: Chapter 31

What The Petersons should really be seeing us that if you hurt Brian then you hurt Justin and that is not a good thing cause with the money and connections they have A Wasp Freeze Out could be very Expensive, Painful and Humiliating.

Obviously it is a lesson they want to learn up close and personal smh

Claire and Michael still don't really know who Justin is huh?

More Fool Them!!

Michael's alleged proof should make nice toilet paper for the police, judge, lawyers of course this case would be quite a lesson for first year law students of people's innate stupidity.

Deb ignoring Michael and fighting for her grandchild is a better use of her time, there is no cure for willful ignorance Michael lives in his comic universe and no one and nothing truth worthy is getting in to destroy it.

Claire lives in the same land of broken toys and she refuses to see that her failures in life are her problems to fix.

Blaming Brian is easier then admitting that being lazy conniving, devious, manipulative and bullying does not mean a parade and the big cash prizes.

Time for the children to get their just desserts and the grown ups to reap the awards.

Brian and Justin are looking towards the future, their family and to Hell with everyone else's drama.

Fabulous Update :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2018 1:18 am Title: Chapter 31

Great chapter.  Claire wen to the school of Mikey & Lindsay and learned well.  Great writing.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2018 4:55 am Title: Chapter 30

Hi... Just read this story. It's awesome!  Did Michael still have a key to Brian's loft when Claire got pregnant? Could Brian actually be the father? I know that's a sick idea... just a thought I had when I first read that part. The thing is, if it's Michael's, did they conceive it the old fashioned way?  We know neither Michael or Claire can support the baby, but will Claire still refuse to give it up? Is Michael still living off his proceeds from Deb selling all his collectibles? Because, if he was doing drugs and drinking heavily he had to have gone through quite a bit of money. Where is he living? What was Michael thinking charging towards Justin at Claire's house? At least he admitted in front of the police and child services, that Claire was doing everything to stay away from the house. Also, he admitted he was getting the information from the Peterson's, in front of Brian and Justin...

Claire! What a royal bitch!  How could she have fallen for the crap Michael spewed? Anyone with half a brain can see Michael's delusional. Okay... Maybe she only has a pea brain.  So glad John SR is in the picure again. Craig and Brian have found a way to keep him in Pittsburgh to build a life with his sons. Sure he was wrong to abandoned them all those yrs ago, but IMO, better to abandon than turn into beating the wife and kids. Maybe when the relationships start to grow, John and Peter can find out that John SR has been sending almost all his money to Claire to support them.

Lindsay is something else.  What a sick mind she has. Not sure of the dollar amount Craig gave her, but I think her greed will get the best of her and she will contest the adoption, throwing caution to the wind, regardless of Reese's warning.

Glad that Brian, Justin and Gus are going out of the country, there's probably no way any of them will be able to contact them, and it will give them all a chance to work on their family. They will be no situation to come back in case someone does call.

Well, so happy I finally read this. I left a comment earlier, and for some it wasn't posted tonight, when I checked back in to the comments page. Thank you for sharing this story with us...

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2018 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 30

It seems that the boys will have a father figure and a grand-father figure as well; it's never too late. As for the mother, it's a lost battle.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2018 1:56 am Title: Chapter 30

Wonderful update! Love how Justin's family is coming together and joining in with Brian's. The boys will have a great support system and be able to get to know their dad without feeling pushed.

I think Brian figured out what Justin would be up against shopping with Molly so he sent Emmett. LOL! Leave all fashion decisions to Emmett; it's much safer that way.

Looking forward to more!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: BabylonBritinTaykin69 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2018 1:02 am Title: Chapter 1

How many more chapters of this story are there?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2018 12:42 am Title: Chapter 30

Understanding Michael's reasoning isn't easy but Emmett did a good job of explaining.  I think John Sr. is going to be a welcome addition to the family.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2018 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 30

Great chapter.  Can't wait to see what Mikey thinks of next when this plan doesn't work.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2018 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 30

John Sr. is now ready to deal with the cor of his leaving John and Peter to deal with Claire, he is ready to be the parry he should've been from the beginning, but wasn't to because Claire like bet in control.

Michael and Claire are about to get a dose of reality neither of them is ready for, Brian is going to let them sink cause his family is his top priority.

It is always being to have more than one safety net and now they all are covered.

While the others have to figure out how to save themselves.

Thanks for the Update:)

Reviewer: Scarletkiss18 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2018 12:00 am Title: Chapter 29

Thank you for the update I am enjoying this story 

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 29

I was glad to see a update on this story thank you. It is always difficult trying to get everyone’s input in the decision making process but it looks like Craig has learnt from his mistakes 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 29

What Craig is proposing is quite amazing for the boys; that would be a 180° change from the life they had with their lazy mother.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 9:31 am Title: Chapter 29

Great chapter.  It is so unusual seeing Craig as a good guy and kind of nice.  Just waiting for Mikey and Linds to get theirs.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 1:50 am Title: Chapter 29

Craig suggestion does make sense but letting John and Peter chose gives them the control which has been missing from their lives.

Whatever John and Peter decide they won't be abandoned and get to know their newest sibling.

Michael promising Claire to sign over the baby is Idiotic, Brian isn't with Justin because of Gus, he's with Justin because he fell in love.

It is a slim chance Claire will regain custody of her son's, but at least they can have a relationship with their father and he in turn can find himself again, while also gaining the confidence to be a strong male figure for his sons.

A

Sublime Update :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 1:09 am Title: Chapter 29

This seems like the answer to the boys problems plus they'll get to see their dad.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2018 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 28

Ooooh I can't wait for the next chapter! Claire and Michael need to be CHOPPED in the throat! I wish there was a way to arrest the both of them for attempted extortion. It will be really interesting though to see if that low-down dirty dog, Michael used Brian's sperm instead of his own. I put absolutely NOTHING passed that punkass!

Looking forward to MORE!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2018 3:25 am Title: Chapter 28

Wow this is getting very interesting Brian is trying hard to hang on to all the ropes. Justin is being a quiet support whilst learning about Brian’s demons 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 28

Having John and Peter won't be great for Brian, Justin and Gus. I understand they need to be with someone they know, but the issue is that they don't like Brian. Tough situation.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 28

If John and Peter are lucky they will end up in Chicago.

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