Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 11:17 pm Title: WHEN SOCIOPATHS COLLIDE Part 2: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT…

Well, there's got to be something said for leaving in-depth reviews. With your last two chapters yielding almost 28k words, it would have been impossible to reread them. My reviews made it possible to remember everything. *pats myself on the back*

I admit I was a little leery what with your trigger warning, but it wasn't as bad as I thought. Don't get me wrong, we ARE talking Lindsay, Michael, amd Lance here, so anything was possible. So imagine my surprise when you started out talking about Lance.  But we already were forewarned of Lindsay's ability to carry this out. Horrid as it was, did I expect anything different from her?  Lindsay is all about a means to justify the end. The baby was useless to her. so let's get rid of it. I looked back to see how Brian or Mel worded it regarding Gus. “Meal ticket? Automatic rent? Or is he your clothing allowance this month?   Other than that he’s your tool of extortion by virtue of an umbilical cord.  Pretty harsh coming out of Brian's mouth but so very true.  So since the baby provided her with none of those things, it was expendable.  Cause and effect? WAS it because of the meeting with Mel and B/J, or was it the downsizing she was handed in court by Sam? Or, combination of both? The fact Mel paid Sam's wife back the money, didn't sit well with Lindsay. (This also raises two questions I still have regarding Lindsay.) But, I will wait and see if they are answered. Anyways, I thought you wrote it with grace and aplomb. As far as Jennifer being able to chew and spit Lindsay out, Lindsay grossly miscalculated Jennifer early on in this story. but bottom line, she's lucky she didn't die from it, but there's a high possibility she won't ever carry a child again.

Christ, lady!  You just had to go and refer to Michael as Rader! What an awful thought! (which only brought another story to mind for me! UGH!) But actually kill?  I guess that old adage, "If I can't have him, ain't nobody gonna have him."

Ron and Nancy joining the comglomerate. Guess I have a couple of misgivings about it. Lindsay is STILL their daughter. When push comes to shove...

And just because Ron is innocent in regards to the bashing, are we sure him and Nancy are innocent in every other regard. I think I would lay low and watch and observe for a while. It was also nice to finally hear the details of WHY Charles helped financially with Lindsay's college tuition.

Thank you for yet another lengthy and plot moving chapter.

HUGS  ~Cathy   (Cripes! I signed my name as LINDSAY first!!!) *SHUDDERS*

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 5:26 pm Title: WHEN SOCIOPATHS COLLIDE Part 2: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT…

Fantastic Chapter!!!

I really like the way you explained Michael and Lindsay because it seems so accurate especially with Lindsay killing her baby because the innocent child was of no use to her anymore.

I hope she is charged with murder and that she can't have anymore babies, Cruel I know but she is too selfish and a child is just a pawn for her to use.

Surprised about Ron coming to work with Brian and Justin but it could be beneficial to everyone because I don't trust Nancy she fell for Lindsay's game and might fall for it again, forewarned is forearmed when it comes to Lindsay and her schemes.

Michael drugging Brian really is the only way Brian would ever stay with him so they need to find everything Michael has stashed in that house then sell it quickly, thank goodness the police are coming to recording everything proves how far Michael was truly willing to go to have Brian all to himself. (Also seems like something Lindsay would do too <shudders>)

Thanks for the Update:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2019 3:37 pm Title: WHEN SOCIOPATHS COLLIDE Part 2: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT…

As always and excellent chapter that leaves us wanting more.