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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2019 7:24 am Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 2 PREP WORK

Imagine my surprise when I decided to catch up with this story, and the last chapter read was 64!!! Sure, I do believe i read a later chapter, but was no don't a little in the dark when I read it. I was almost shocked how far back I had to go. So, after reading my past reviews, I reread 64, and now I'm here.

I'm really, REALLY trying to figure out how it will play out that Lindsay and Michael are more aware of the Jason Kemp arc, than what we are aware of. In cahoots with Reichert... it makes my blood turn cold!

I'm glad Kip is staying away from Bellweather... but I hope he stiffens his spine and goes to Brian and lays everything out for him. Or, are there still players out there that he needs to worry about regarding his safety. Because he MUST know, Michael and Lindsay can't get to him from prison, unless there's still a loose canon out there. And what, pray tell, is a 20/20 reporter doing with the likes of scumbag, Bellweather? THAT should prove interesting.

I hope copies of the coloring book make there way into prison. With a big JUSTIN TAYLOR on the front!!!

So Emmett feels Deb deserves some kind of forgiveness. She was told time and time again, but refused to believe it. And if I remember correctly, still didn't want to believe it while sitting in the courtroom hearing it!  Hmm, not sure about that.

Looking forward to learning about the findings in the house in Cali. But, in a way - NOT!

Not sure I like Brian and Justin playing ball with Nancy. She pulled a 180 too fast for my liking.  Green money talks, sure, but seconds before that, she was willing to believe what Lindsay told her as God's word!

And yes, I suppose I have to comment how cute the Jus, Jus, Jus was. It has to be a good feeling for Brian to know that Gus, an innocent, loves Justin that much.

Well, off to continue reading.

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2019 7:32 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 2 PREP WORK

Another amazing chapter! ^_^

M&L related to Jason Kemp?! that is shocking. It would smart for Kip to tell Justin & Brian first. Unless someone else found out. Who is George bell?

Brilliant ! "AC Book" . Mikey & Lindsay r gonna more jeolous seeing Justin another huge Success.

Love Gus's cute Jus! Jus! Jus! & Brian adoring his 2 boys. He looks happy.❤

Insightful views of Micheal & Lindsay given are much to point. I agreed (In show Brian said "He is conversely the best candidate for marriage" to Justin.) In same way possible Micheal & Lindsay are bad inside, have 2 faced nature. Both often manuplated Brian(& Justin) to their whims. Never managed their own life. Even Deb is not blameless. (She should let Micheal face hard truth of life.)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2019 3:25 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 2 PREP WORK

Amazing chapter! So dense!

Who is George Bell? I don't remember this name.

The end is full of determination: go Brian, get them and show them what you are made of!

I love the idea of coloring book for adults: Justin is a phenomenal human being / artist!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2019 9:18 am Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 2 PREP WORK

I love this story so much, even if I do not always leave comments! I am blown away by your writing and I look forward to every update. And now Michael and Lindsay also have something to do with Jason Kemp. I hope that Kip who seems to make a good decision staying away from Bellweather and his friend, will talk to the right person.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2019 3:03 am Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 2 PREP WORK

Fantastic chapter.  Your writing amazes me more and more with each story and chapter.  What a gift you have.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2019 2:34 am Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 2 PREP WORK

Brian's retrospective was very insightful and accurate Deb, Michael and Lindsay took to the point of trying to drain Brian's soul, while Joan and Jack tried to destroy all hurt Brian for their own selfish reasons.

Only Joan is trying to learn from her mistakes and find a better way to live her life and support her son.

Deb had potential to learn but she is a bit more stubborn and had to really want it never just keep saying she wants it.

Michael and Lindsay will never learn because they don't want to believe anything they are doing will have Brian turning away from them, they refuse to see that behind the mask Brian was just a scared lonely person who just wanted love without conditions.

As long as Brian continued to play his assigned role they could bask in his reputation and look down their noses in contempt, but the more Brian succeeded the further he moved away so they tried to strangle him with their version of love.

Only they don't want love they want power which they think means power and if the can control Brian and everyone else then they are happy.

Enter Justin who loved Brian flaws and all their strings pulling Brian in all these different directions started to snap which ticked them off so they used more underhanded tactics when Justin destroyed simply by showing up.

They all resent Brian for not letting his past dictate his future it isn't change they despise it is the list of control they can't stand.

Michael and Lindsay had something to do with Jason Kemp's death?

WTF?!?!?!?!?

Justin's adult coloring book sounds Amazing and quite useful for some people who need an easy way to relax without drugs, plus it sounds like fun while showing his detractors they were wrong.

Brian and Justin and their corporation is about to make everyone who doubted them eat not only crow but their words and profits lol

Kip is smart to stay away from Howard Bellwether and his friend of course he will be a genius will be talks about Jason Kemp.

I don't know how you do it but for each story your writing leaves me wanting more :)

Thanks for the Update!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2019 2:26 am Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 2 PREP WORK

Wow.  A fantastic chapter.  I know that once this is finished I'll be reading it again!

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