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Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2019 5:14 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION

Debbie is an example of "what a mother Should not be like". Her moron son Micheal is another example. Vic should live free without their petulant demands. 

Brian have Right about discard anything tied between him and them. (Let's see how Deb,Linds & Mikey react about it.)

Love Justin for being there for Hunter. (In Qaf, didn't like Hunter much under Micheal influence (father like son). With Justin influence he have better live. 

Fantastic writing...☘

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 1:05 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION

I Hope Hunter Scored High?!

Brian should know that Michael who couldn't get through high school with Brian thought of a plan to drug and kidnap his best friend to keep Brian away from everyone especially Justin.

The numbers Michael is racking up will have him in prison until time actually does stand still the man seriously makes Stupid Look Smart.

Vic preserving his sanity by severing his ties to Deb is one Hell of a smart move because she talked a good game but Deb was never ready to change, because it would mean everything she did was wrong and that Michael is wrong which is what she is not remotely ready to admit too.

She like Lindsay and Michael enjoys the spotlight Brian brought into her world because he is a determined force which can never be diminished and without it they are forgettable, she as expecting to be in her usual place and wasn't ready to run into a force like Jennifer Alwyn who rightfully usurped her place without trying.

Jennifer is the mother figure they all need because her only condition is that You Never Settle For Alright or Okay when it comes to love, You Settle For Awesone, Amazing, Heart-Stopping, Never Ending Love or Nothing At All!

She loves them all flaws an all and he doesn't demand or expect them to love her in return and that is what makes her the woman they can admire and love with Great Respect. (And She Isn't Much Older Than Them)

Brian not being Deb or Michael's POA is the last real time they have to him and once that is gone they are really on their own. (Could Lindsay have one naming Brian that Mel.doesn't know about?)

The ones playing follow the leader at Kinnetik are going to wish they had skipped that game cause Justin is a force you don't want to reckon  and bullying Hunter is helpful either.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2019 12:06 pm Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION

This just keeps getting better and better.  Shame Deb has gone back to her old ways.  It looked for a while as if she'd managed to see the light.  From all the hints, it appears that your next chapter is going to be beyond good.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2019 11:12 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION

Amazing chapter!

The part with Vic is heartbreaking, but he has no choice.

The part with Justin and Hunter is great because they passed their weird phase, where Hunter will try to get into Brian's pants on any occasion, and they try being professional and honest. Good riddance of Troy and Eric; I bet Brian will be relieved as well.

I love this quote "I can’t even imagine where he got that impression since both Daphne and Cynthia are still very much employed here… and they speak their minds ALL THE TIME!".

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2019 12:53 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION

Wow, an update on my other favorite story all in the same week.  Thank you, thank you, thank you.  Terrific writing.  

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2019 12:17 am Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION

I had to go back a couple of chapters to remember why Ms Novotny had a black eye. (That's okay... it was fun reading about it again.)

Question for you, though... Why is Deb selling her house? Does she owe restitution for something? I've been racking my brain trying to remember. if I had any idea where in the story to start looking... I would be doing that. But... well... help a  lady out, PLEASE! IF she owes restitution, will she have any money left over? How will she support herself or have any money to live on once that happens? (NOT that I give a damn... but I would think she would find it hard to get a job... and I'm fairly certain after her latest escapade and what she said to Vic... the offer of her going back to school and the restaurant job, is no longer an option. For someone who is not a true redhead... she sure has the temper of one. Believe me... my youngest is a redhead. Ouchie-Mama!

I wouldn't think that in light of the latest findings about Troy and Eric, there should be any repercussions to firing them. I'm surprised that they are still there! They both should have criminal charges against them, and should be occupying another cell with the other flukey's. Especially Eric, as he was distributing funds.

I wonder if Lindsay could possibly be Michael's backup POA....OH HELL... she'd pull the plug, too. I just thought of something... Deb must not be aware of Michael's guzzling bleach.

HUGS  ~Cathy

P.S. Thank you for all the updates the last couple of days. You Rock!



Author's Response:

Hello Cathy,

 

The answer to why Deb is selling her house is back in the "Bracing for Impact" Chapters (there are 2 parts). It's still possible for Brian to file a civil suit requesting restitution for all the money he 'loaned' her over the years since it wasn't ever used for its intended purpose. However, she signed the house in Palm Springs over to him in Chapter 19, which is titled "You Have the Attention, Now what?". As for the rest of the answers and speculations, you'll have to wait and see if you're right! LOL

HAPPY READING AND HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BabylonBritinTaykin69 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2019 9:14 pm Title: CHAPTER 73: THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND POSSESSION

How many more chapters of this story till it's finished 



Author's Response:

I'm shooting for 100, although it could be more, or less than that. Not quite sure yet, because it just keeps growing and outdoing itself. All I can do is say stay tuned! I can definitely promise that it will be well worth the wait.

HUGS,

~Nichelle

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