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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2020 1:53 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101

Thanks for update.  I was reading the entire story again

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2020 9:18 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101

So we arrive in the house of horror! More pleeeease.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2020 2:01 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101

What a chapter.  They've finally gotten to the house that Novotney bought and while most of it shrieks Brian, the bedroom holds secrets that we need to learn.  Hurry and get better so we can find out what you have planned.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2020 4:34 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101

I have waited all day trying to form a coherent response for this chapter. (or was I trying to still my churning gut?)

I remember asking for photoshopped pics of the house in one of my reviews...

(In Urkel's voice) --> Did I do that??? What was I THINKING???

Uhmmm... I'm trying to figure out who I despise the most in this story... There have been so many evil people - so many evil things done... Lindsay, as a woman and mother... has been despicable. Craig as a parent... has done the unthinkable... and Debbie... ooh... don't get me started. I asked you once, why try and save her? Why try and redeem her? Why help her break away? I know you said because Steve was - kind of - in her place at one time. And she returned the house to the rightful owner. But, she still  - to me - and some other readers - she should still be held more responsible, and punishment should befall her. Lies of omission... (can I say theft of omission?) ... she aided and abetted Michael in his plans... (Maybe she wasn't aware of the final outcome of kidnapping Brian... that's her own idiocy coming into play...)... which means, she was an accessory to the crime. Her high-handedness, and her "I'm right, you're wrong, you owe me, etc..." throughout the story, just screams - "I'm not wrong! No reason to change!"

But, right now, I honestly believe, that Michael holds 'most evil'... can we scoop his insides out with a dull fork? I wish we could explain all of this away by saying he had a split-personality, because what kind of evil does everything he has done in this story.

Wouldn't it be fun if Brian's dummy look-a-like showed up at the house when all the police are there? I wonder how much, if any, information they can truly gain from the neighbors. I can't imagine how they are going to feel knowing all of this has been going on under their noses. Which brings me to wonder... are the police going to find the people Michael hired to make the house look like this? Were their suspicions not aroused? Why did they do this work, and not contact the police? They had to know nefarious acts were in the making. Especially when they find the secret button to get inside the walls.

The projector... or info on the projector threw me for a minute... as my first thought was projector... hmm, let's film me with Brian... while he's unconscious, I'll make movies of us. But, things they found in Pittsburgh? I'm not sure what all that could be, or what exactly that means. Because everything came out in the open during that interview. So, I'm excited to see just what you reveal here.

Will we be privy to knowing just how Michael planned to have Lindsay and Debbie taking all the blame... or left 'holding the bag'? Will Debbie be in the courtroom when all is revealed?

The only bright side of this chapter, is that hopefully, Brian and Justin are able to have privacy while viewing the inside of this house. I can't even imagine what that would do to someone's psyche. I'm glad Alex is on stand-by.

HUGS  `Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2020 2:47 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101

Great update, love the pictures.  Wonderful writing and making me hate Mikey even more.  Hope you are feeling better.  Please take care of yourself.

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2020 10:52 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101

Love this as always you leave me begging for more. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2020 8:37 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101

Omg omg omg your writing skills are brilliant I was reading so fast I missed some of it lol. So I have re read it and now I am late for work 🤣🤣

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2020 7:11 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101

Michael took the rope used to strangle Jason Kemp?

Sick A-Hole!

Everything they said about Michael, Deb and Lindsay is true they all abused Brian to get what they wanted then they discarded each other once they got it until they needed each other again, it was the pattern they had until Justin came in and disrupted the rhythm cause it left them scrambling to find new ways to get the balance back.

Deb should be charged caused she helped contribute to why Michael feels so entitled to everything and the lengths he was willing to go to get it just like the lengths she was willing to go to give Michael whatever he wanted.

That house is making my skin crawl and we haven't even found the really bad stuff yet, so glad everyone is doing this before Brian and Justin get there cause they are going to need help to process this.

Michael hiring someone to pretend to be Brian for the neighbors is spot on I wonder is the doppelganger is scheduled to make an appearance again?

I too wonder what Michael left for Deb and Lindsay to ensure they would never be able to get into his way again, and throw suspicion off of him while he does what he planned to do to Brian to keep him submissive?

Even if Deb was there with them she still wouldn't believe that Michael was capable of this and she would run to get mantra of blaming Brian.

This shouldn't be revealed until it is done in court that way Michael can't dispute this and neither can Deb without looking really stupid.

I just wish there was some way for Deb to go to jail too?

Scared to find out what else is in that house but gotta know

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2020 5:43 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101

Argh!!! Cliffhanger!!! Diving into the deranged mind of Michael is always painful, but seeing what he has built...

Thank you for the update!

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