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Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 1:31 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH

Wow, just wow.  Absolutely amazing writing.  Oh how I hate that Michael.  Always have, always will.  The pics were a great addition.  Hope all is well with you.  Just love this story.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2020 7:52 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH

Brian and Justin really are strong together because they are sticking around that house so they can see and know every vile detail so that when it is revealed in court they won't be blindsided.

Plus by seeing everything together it takes away the surprised and pleasure Michael could derive from the videos and photos being shown in court in front of the jury and spectators.

Michael really is living in the past which is ultimately where his growth ends and does because with all his supposed cleverness he is sitting in jail waiting for his day in court with his other co-conspirators.

Michael was really willing to go to any lengths to force Brian to choose him and any lengths to guarantee that he is the only one who will ever have Brian.

This new detail about to be revealed could push Brian and Justin over the edge and further seal Michael's fate.

I wonder if Lindsay kind of the same plan for Brian with Michael and Deb taking the fall?

So need to find the cheap version of Brian and see what he knows and if he would be willing to make an appearance in court?

That would freak Michael out especially if he walks up to Lindsay and kisses her wonder if she  or Deb will be able to tell the difference?

After this I think The Family could use a vacation to some place tropical or Brain Bleach?

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2020 4:41 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH

Whoa! I don't know if I want to throw up or cry or both! What a violation of privacy and trust! What a sick pervert Michael is!

Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2020 8:45 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH

Michael est vraiment fou! J'attends avec impatience le procès avec toutes les preuves qu'ils rassemblent. Thank you for the quick update

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2020 7:54 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH

Argh omg the evilness of Novotny is going to really hurt Brian but also Justin

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2020 5:48 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH

Your killing me with the waiting!!! 😫😫😫😫

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2020 4:59 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH

thanks for update.  Michael is a sick fuck

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2020 3:25 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH

Sick, sick, sicko...

I hope Brian can get copies of those pictures, take them into an investigation room, slap them on the table in front of Michael and ask him: JUST WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU WERE DOING? YOU SICK SON-OF-A-BITCH!!!

Could Lance have helped Michael design this? Or given him some suggestions what Lance would have liked to put Brian in?

I had to reread the last sentence a few times... hopefully, I think I now understand the way it is supposed to read...

What Michael intended for Brian, and ONLY Brian, to see.

The first few times I read it... I thought that Daris meant only Brian could see what the outcome was going to be... and I was ready to scream holy hell thinking he needs Justin with him...

I think it was the combination of the horror of the chapter, but finally understood that Michael only intended for Brian to be the only one who would ever see whatever it is that they will now hear from Melanie.

Sorry... (deep breath) ... what a House of Horrors!

Happy Birthday to you (tomorrow) ... Thank you for giving us a present...

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Aw!! THANK YOU SO MUCH for the birthday wishes, Cathy!! Hugs

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2020 2:50 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH

We know that Michael is mentally challenged, but what is it he had planned and how will Melanie take finding out?

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