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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 12:58 am Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION

Oh my .   Glad that Debbie is finally getting her act together.  Hopefully, the family can come to a compromise with her.  Michael is an idiot and I just want him to get his and be gone from everybody's life.  Silly man thinks LIndsay is going to help him and he doesn't even factor in that she is not available since she is in jail.  Love the talk Brian gave to his staff.  Eveybody is really coming together for Kinnetik.  

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 1:31 am Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION

Michael is so delusional and I hope that he just keeps digging himself deeper and deeper.  It would be wonderful if he managed to do something that would literally get him thrown in jail with no chance of leaving.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2018 6:09 pm Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION

Brian's speech was really motivating and I like that Kinnetik will have three tiers which will bring this company to greatness.

Deb realizing that she repeated the cycle her parents forced on her with Brian and the others, while leaving Michael free to abuse her shows that she really needs to take this time to rediscover herself before she is ready to walk away from Michael and leaving the others to move on without her.

Brian, Justin and everyone else aren't ready to see Deb  and she isn't ready to see them until she can stand there, take the lumps and not revert to using You Owe Me.

It will take time but maybe someday they can all be in a room together without any animosity, Time Will Tell.

I knew Michael would go for Gus after all it was always Lindsay's go to method when she needed Brian's attention, though I do believe Lindsay doesn't have any rights to Gus (will have to re-read it over again...Oh What A Hardship ;)), Michael will have to deal with Brian, Justin, Mel, Emmett, Ted and Jennifer if he tries to hurt that innocent child to get Brian to bend.

They will bury him after they rip him apart.

Lance was smart to tell Michael this is wrong but he is stupid to stick around and listen.

And if Lindsay also stole from Justin then she deserves to go down hard along with Michael and anyone else involved in this stupid plan.

Wonder if Claire knows her money supply has dried up yet?:)

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2018 2:02 pm Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION

OMG- I missed this chapter.  After I quit hypervenilating and could read it, I feel so much better.  hjahahhaha

Deb is gaining insight.  I never thought I'd see the day.  I'm rather happy about that.  I'm also happy that she seems to realize that a simple apology won't fix everything.  It's good that she is working on it for herself.  She certainly needs the insight and perspective.  Loved this part.

Michael....I loathe him.  He is beyond screwed up.  Mentally, emotionally, he is so off the rails.  I don't even know what I would do to him.  What would be enough?  I shall contemplate that. :)

As for Brian's speech at Kinnetik - oh, yes....I'm excited to begin, too.  He lit a fire.  Exciting times ahead.

Thanks, thanks, thanks.....

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2018 1:15 pm Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION

Impressive speech! I hope it will have given energy to everybody.

Deb seems to be on the right path and disconnecting from Michael, who is moving on his next plan, even when Lance tells it's a bad idea...

Great story!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2018 12:58 pm Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION

I do so look forward to each new chapter.  This one had a little of everything.  Brian and Justin motivating their employees.  Deb realizing her mistakes.  And Mikey being a shit.  Will Lindsay help?  Are will she turn against Michael like everyone else?  Only you know.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2018 9:28 am Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION

Kinnetic is really born. t's nice that Deb understands what she's done to the boys except Michael all these years. Lindsay in prison she has already lost her rights to Gus no? Let's see Michael and his twisted ideas! Too bad for Lance he does not look so bad.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2018 8:44 am Title: BECOMING KINNETIK (Part 2), A MOMENT OF EPIPHANY, A PLAN SET IN MOTION

Please tell me that Michael isn’t trying to get Lindsay to sign custody of Gus over to him....and please tell me she isn’t going to be dumb enough to do it. I don’t see that going over very well at all, and if whiny boy thinks he can force Brian to choose to be with him or lose Gus he has another thing coming.

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