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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2018 3:00 am Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

Interesting twist with Joan.  Justin is quick to forgive, not sure how sure Brian is of this new revelation, but should be interesting to see how this plays out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 7:29 pm Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

This is a change in Joan and one for the better.  She's got the ammo that they need to come down on Craig and Claire.  Can't wait for Justin and Peter to meet and learn the truth.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 5:54 pm Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

Joan is seeing the world the way it is and not the way she needed it to be to excuse her behavior.

Father Tom and Blake are showing her that ignorance isn't always bliss and that Brian is more than his sexuality. (Knew Blake was Father Tom's Nephew)

She is seeing how her paths lead to the estrangement between her and Brian and that forgiveness doesn't come from the bible it comes from earning it.

With time and patience Brian might one day say Joan and it not be a sneer or filled with contempt, friends is the best either one could hope for right now.

Craig and Claire might want to count their pennies cause lawyers aren't cheap lol

Are Claire and Craig at her house with John and Peter?

Has Lindsay spilled anything to her lovers?

Has Michael spilled everything?

I am so into The Royals of Liberty Avenue and The Morons of Avarice ;)

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 2:35 pm Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

Well surprise surprise. Let's see how things go. Can't blame Brian for being leery. Question is, does he want to forgive her and have her in his life.

Dix Ted get a glimpse of Blake? Really like those two together.

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 2:03 pm Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

Wow!!!!! Who knew I could start to forgive Joan as well.  

I loved the way you wrote this.  It was just right.  I'm glad Father Tom and (I loved, loved loved you inserting Blake)  

Of course it will take time. Perhaps much time to fully forgive Joan.  This is a definite start.  She could actually find some joy in her life.  So could Brian.  A kind he's never known.  Perhaps.  But, at the very least finding some peace could be enough.  You made me feel that.  Thanks 

Great chapter

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 1:42 pm Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

Omg tears...that was awesome! And 'Uncle Tom' & Blake are related! Perfect.

Ya know my friend, that explanation of Justin's mannerisms and character: this is YOUR story and you seem to be worried about your readers feelings on any variation of said character(s). I say, there's no reason to explain your writings or the way YOU see the characters. I don't want or mean to sound bitchy in any way honey, I've just had it with people criticizing writers works of art. In my humble opinion, it's better to not say anything at all than to be rude or cruel to others in regards to the way they want a story or characters to move ahead or be different in their fanfics. 

Sorry for my little rant babe, I love you & all you write! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 10:13 am Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

Great chapter.  Always wondered why no storyline of Joan was continued in the series.  This is perfect.  Nothing in their lives is easy, but you have shown with your wonderful writing that anything is possible.  Love this story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 9:53 am Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

It wasn't a cold shower after all! Interesting visit/chapter. How is Brian going to answer that? Justin's already showing the way.

I always wondered why Justin and Blake weren't close in the show. In some fanfics, they develop a great friendship.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 9:25 am Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

Wow go Justin he is such a protective factor for Brian and he is a like conduit link that helps Brian find that softer side hidden behind the walls he’s built

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 8:56 am Title: CHANGING FACES Part 2

I do not read chapter by chapter and My God I am overwhelmed by everything that happens. Characters I did not even know the name (Troy) and the fucking twin Hobbs, Craig and Claire and then Mrs. Kinney wow that's a lot but I like !! Thank you for this story

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