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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 5:51 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED

Wow!  Just wow.  We learn so much yet there is more to know.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 4:43 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED

That's a new development which could change Lindsay's trial. What a life Brian had and still has due to his "best friends".

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 11:54 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED

I really don't see how you keep up with all of this.  My head is spinning.  

I'm glad Lance' uncle clocked him with his briefcase.  Lance was trickier than I previously thought.

 

It made me so happy to see this post.  It's always good to see a post.  Thank you

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 11:02 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED

Boy, oh boy.  How does your mind come up with all these plot lines? I'm not sure if you're devious, or a genius.  Whatever it is, I can honestly say, best story of the century! So looking forward to your next update, which I hope will include B/J and Mel visiting Lindsay, or at least B/J being made aware of it, along with their reactions.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 2:33 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED

Woah!!! Now that's a twist I never would have seen coming at all! Wonder what Michael is going to think about that! LOL! You are a genius, Nichelle! *Bows down repeatedly*

I certainly hope that Harry only gets a fine. Lance definitely deserved getting knocked on his ass as well as knocked out!

Looking forward to more!

*HUGS*

Deb

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 2:32 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED

Holy shit! Sweet Jesus! Wow, wow, wow....I am shocked. So Lance had a fake ID stating he was Michael, so he'd inherit Brian's money?? Wow! 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 2:18 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED

Holy Craptastic Hell!!!

Lance Freeman is an Evil Moron who by the end of this is going to wish he had never heard of Brian Kinney or Michael Novotny.

Was he ever even obsessed with Brian or was it all just an act?

I feel bad for Harry but I understand why he risked his career to attack Lance, using his Aunts illness to save himself is just Despicable and Vile.

The Family should be notified about what Lance tried to do and he should be disowned and left to fend for himself.

Lance is very much Lindsay's twin and that means the next three days should be interesting as they gather all the information they need to send them all away Forever!!

Claire doesn't deserve sympathy cause soon she will be getting what she deserves, wonder what she is afraid of them finding out?

What other damaging secrets are about to come out and is anyone else involved?

Thanks for the Update, Yet Again So Worth The Wait:)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 2:13 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES Part 3: EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED

Great chapter.  This story is just so fantastic.  I love it.  Hope you are doing well.

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