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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 5:52 pm Title: REVELATIONS OF THE PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

Jennifer is scary when she is in Protective Mode and Joan would do well to remember that from now on <shivers>

Brian being all protective of Joan is interesting and shows that being friends could be a real possibility for both of them.

Daphne is a good influence on Jennifer and it goes to show what Deb had faced if she hadn't woken up, of course she could still slip so keep Vaseline handy lol

Justin handling Lindsay is good she always thought she was a better Wasp the Justin, but she never had Jennifer as a teacher or example to follow, she is about to learn how a True Wasp Gets Stuff Done :)

Ted is really coming into his confidence more and is more ready for the responsibility Brian and Justin are now requesting of him.

Fantastic Update :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 4:38 pm Title: REVELATIONS OF THE PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

Ha ha ha, Jennifer in Rocky's mode! Hilarious and Daphe to the rescue is also very funny. The vaseline tip is pretty interesting!

The interaction between Brian, Joan and then Brian and the officer was delightful!

Thank you for the quick update!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 4:24 pm Title: REVELATIONS OF THE PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

All this Wasp speak kind of confuses me.

Claire thought she was in control all this time but it was all Lindsay pulling the strings? Can't be because Claire has been a snivling bitch long before Brian left for college and met Lindsay.

I'm glad Joan showed up to help all the pieces fall into place. Jenn is as protective as her son when it comes to Brian. Good he needs that. Officer Pettigrew does not know what kind of family he's becoming involved. I liked that Brian asked about his intentions. A good son, a good friend would ask.

Ted finally feels that backbone stiffening. Bravo my man.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Sherry.

Your POV is somewhat true, but let's not forget that Claire's 'lover' had ties to Lindsay long before Brian met Justin. Cryptic much? Absolutely, but you would be amazed at just how much each of them, including Brian and Justin, play a role in this... even if they are not exactly aware of it yet. LOL

Stay Tuned, Darling. Things are about to get VERY interesting!

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 2:29 pm Title: REVELATIONS OF THE PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

This was fabulous! I would have loved to see Jennifer Taylor go after Joan Kinney like that on the show! Wow! So fun! 

Protective Brian....of his mother? That's different yet very interesting. lol

Love Ted's POV

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 1:34 pm Title: REVELATIONS OF THE PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

Good for you, Ted. You're a smart man, and one I dearly loved in the show. You showed the most growth in QAF, so it's befitting having you do the same here.  Why is Brian still not wanting to have Gus around Joan? That remark must have been cutting to Joan.  Lindsay... I can't believe she was involved with Stockwell, and what she was planning to do to Mel regarding the Gui situation. It's so great to see how you have taken all these situations from the show, and twisted them around, to make them your own story. So who is truly the mastermind behind all this? It sounded like Lindsay in the beginning, but with Claire blackmailing her... then maybe as it was pointed out, Lindsay planned returned blackmail. And let's be honest, Claire doesn't hold the WASP upbringing like Lindsay. What will happen to all of Claire's extortion money? Does that go into evidence?  So, what piece of the puzzle has Justin not figured out yet? It's bound to be very interesting having Justin's and Lindsay's conversations. I, for one, can hardly wait. I check daily, a few times a day, to see if there is an update on this story... I love it that much. Even though your updates take place very frequently, I still look forward to each and every one of them, and don't want to possibly miss one.  Thank you for writing this AWESOME story.

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 10:34 am Title: REVELATIONS OF THE PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

Terrific chapter.  The web just gets bigger, but that makes it easier to catch the spiders.  Your writing continues to amaze me.  Now I can dislike Lindsay as much as I truly dislike Mikey. Never liked Claire so not much to say about her. Fantastic update.  Glad to see you are feeling better. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 9:30 am Title: REVELATIONS OF THE PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

Agh I wanted the showdown but I can see the need to build the characters and the story 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 5:20 am Title: REVELATIONS OF THE PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

Oh what a tangled web.  I'll be looking forward to Justin's meeting with Lindsay.  She'll think she's got the upper hand but she doesn't.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 5:00 am Title: REVELATIONS OF THE PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

Wonderful, wonderful update! Gotta love Ted's observations from his confusion of WASP-speak to the flirtatous actions between Joan and Pettigrew.

Jennifer's protection of Brian is nothing short of amazing and truly loved Daphne reasoning on the offer of vaseline! LOL!

Looking forward to more!!!

*Hugs*

Deb

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