Date: Oct 31, 2018 10:10 am Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
OMG Lindsay is getting sucker punched big time yay yay yay 🤣🤣 I am not so silently cheering with this court case as I reading it 👌👌 Good job I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter
Date: Oct 30, 2018 9:40 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
that's one hell of a cruel VERY CRUEL CLIFFHANGER!!
Date: Oct 30, 2018 8:56 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
that's one hell of a cruel VERY CRUEL CLIFFHANGER!!
Date: Oct 30, 2018 2:56 am Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
Wow- Lindsay just spreads her legs for anyone, anytime as this is the only currency she has worth anything. But now, she is realizing that the currency is not really valuable and she will lose all the things that she thought she had sewed up. Great chapter- can't wait to catch up on your other stories. How you ever manage to write more than one at a time is amazing. I do good to get a chapter a month out for the one story I'm writing.
Date: Oct 29, 2018 11:08 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
Okay, I just read the reviews, and I have something to say to Blue.
Blue, I hope you are reading this... I know it was evil of Nichelle to leave us with that cliffhanger, but lord lady, NOBODY deserves to be locked in a cell with Michael and Lindsay. They would drive her crazy, and then she'd lose all her creative juices, then we'd be up shit creek without a paddle, because she wouldn't be able to write anymore, thus we'd be left hanging with all her wonderful stories, unfinished. So you owe our dear author an apology ;)
Otherwise, Awesome Review, Blue!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2018 5:03 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
NOOOOOO!!! You Are Evil and Must Be Locked In A Cell With Michael and Lindsay! ;)
Lindsay tried to climb her way to the top tier on her back, knees and now that is coming back to destroy her.
Too bad Ron wasn't in court to hear that tape he would be quite surprised by what Lindsay tried to do to him.
Jennifer laid out all of Lindsay's sins with perfect Wasp precision which leaves her no way to really counter, because unlike Lindsay all of it is true and Craig's taped statement is on the record Forever.
Sam testifying is just another piece of Lindsay's carefully crafted plans falling into the gutter, all those lovely names he called Lindsay should be put on t-shirt lol
Amanda, Melanie and Cynthia talking about Lindsay was funny especially like the comment about the clothes, Melanie is dressing for the life she has now, not the prison sentence she had before, Brian and Emmett will help Melanie become the woman Lindsay never allowed her to be...Well style wise anyone lol
Those names Justin came up with are funny and appropriate.
Michael thinks he has something that will finally get Brian to dump Justin and choose him, can't think what that is yet, but he believes it is his Trump Card.
Brian and Justin getting out of Pittsburgh is good they need to regroup and strengthen their bond so when they come back their shield is impenetrable.
Plus leaving the others to chase their tails fretting about them is wonderful.
Melanie and Gus in California will help recharge her too and all of the spending time together helps the family dynamic become stronger too.
Too bad Ted, Blake, Emmett, Ben and Hunter can't come too but someone had to help hold down the home front with Jennifer.
Well Worth The Wait!! :)
Date: Oct 29, 2018 4:48 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
Oh this is delightful! Lindsay must be boiling to have her life made "public".
This is genius: "personal trampy trampoline, cum receptacle, cock hoover, or penis massager". What an imagination you have!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2018 2:06 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
I admit to having trouble keeping up with who's who but it doesn't take away from the enjoyment of this and every chapter.
Date: Oct 29, 2018 1:40 pm Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
Wow, great chapter. Love the names you came up with. Just perfect. Fantastic writing.
Date: Oct 29, 2018 8:54 am Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
I went back and read the interview between Jennifer, Justin and Craig, so I could see if that would tell me what everyone had planned for Brian, but didn't find anything. But reading that conversation between the three of them, I had my mouth dropped open, realizing this is what everyone in the courtroom was hearing during Lindsay's 'Alienation of Affection' trial. I remembered it being informative, but OMG! That painted Lindsay in a whole other light to the judge and her attorney. Just Wow!
Date: Oct 29, 2018 8:22 am Title: PARADISE and A WARZONE
You really couldn't help yourself, and just had to leave us with that cliffhanger, didn't you? Why do I get the impression Sam really doesn't like Lindsay? You couldn't even tell us her reaction being called, personal trampy trampoline, cum receptacle.cock hoover, penis massager, and OMG... PAID companion! And Lord have Mercy, how ever did you come up with those names??? I really have to wonder how Lindsay is fairing with all her dirty laundry being aired. I just wish the courtroom was filled, repoters and all. I almost wish Brian and Justin were front and center, if only because it would be another slap in the face for Lindsay, knowing they were witnessing her humiliation and takedown. But Mel being there helps, though. I'm right there with Mel though... large vat of buttered popcorn and a two-liter of persi. I remembered saying something similar in one of my reviews, and couldn't resist looking back, and I found it... I think we better get out the popcorn when the court cases start, as it's gonna be a helluva movie to watch.
As far as Brian and Justin's talk, I hope I have this right. Aside from the obvious three, Pissy Face is Claire, and Wanna Be, Chi Chi LaRue is Lance. As far as everyone trying to implicate Brian in something, was that that they were going to try and frame Brian for the bashing? If that's the case, sick, sick, sick. But Brian is right to feel like he's missing something with Michael, because Michael is definitely up to something, as he plans to bring something into light about Justin and truth. But, I can't for the life of me figure out what that is.
I just HAD to see what Ron Jeremy looked like. Apparently, I'm naive and don't know porn stars. God help me, but I wish I hadn't looked. Googling him, had me looking at images of him, and low and behold, there's a full-frontal nude picture of him among them. EEEEWWWW! (Enough said!)
I'm so looking forward to the next chapter, and hopefully continuing where Sam left off. I really want to see Lindsay's reaction to his testimony.
Loved this chapter, and I am so looking forward to the next one.
XOXO ~ Cathy