Date: Jun 25, 2018 1:48 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
That was all just fucking brilliant!!! Woohoo, go boys!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2018 1:24 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
Vance got the Ass Kicking he so richly deserved so now Brian and Justin can spend Monday along with Ted and Cynthia cleaning out the snakes and weak links to help Kinnectik run like a well oiled machine.
Justin studying law should have everyone running for cover.
So how long after the fumigation can Brian and Justin see their new home?
Ben and Vic showed Brian that they see behind the masks to the wonderful man he really is and that is why they respect him.
Vic and Emmett are on their way to conquering the catering world, while Mel is about to become what Lindsay always wanted her to be, now Ben just needs to write a best seller then he and Hunter will be set once he gets Michael out of his life for good.
Oh please let Ethan show up he can explain why he tried to trick Justin and how much Michael was paying him, plus Justin and Brian can give him the Ass kicking he so deserves.
Ooh I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2018 1:21 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
Love how you took care of Vance. And pulled Ben and Vic into the campaign for Remson. Can't wait to read how they take care of Michael and Ethan. That's going to be so good.
Date: Jun 25, 2018 1:10 am Title: TAKEOVERS AND CLAUSES
Wow, wonderful chapter. Glad you are feeling well enough to continue this fantastic story. Hugs & keep improving.
Date: Jun 22, 2018 4:38 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
OMG! Claire! Did not see that coming!
Michael is so delusional thinking that Brian would ever want to set up house with him. How did he never understand that even though Brian said they would be 2 old queens living in Palm Springs, Brian never intended to grow old at all?
Hahaha! Jennifer owns the building! I love it! There is no way that Michael is ever getting inside now. LOL!
Way to go, Cynthia! LOL! She's the one who gave Lindsay's name to Sam's wife! I love it!
Dale needs to get a hold of Michael and show him a little discipline!
Justin certainly has Lindsay figured out! I think he's spot-on with the idea that she was hoping to get pregnant by Brian in college but it just didn't work out. That wouldn't surprise me in the least.
Another wonderful chapter!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 22, 2018 4:23 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Ohhhh! I love Dale Wexler! He could be very good for Ted whether as a friend or more.
How strange! Lindsay doesn't seem to like being the center of attention. Wonder why? Hmmmm...
Love how Brian and Justin are communicating with more than sex (even if they did nearly wear each other out LOL!) and are talking more about how everything is affecting them.
Yay! Mel hung up on Lindsay! LOL!
Oh, it's another cliffhanger! Wonder what he found out.
Off to read more.
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 22, 2018 1:07 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
GREAT chapter. Your mojo is in high gear and making us happy. Oh that Michael is so delusional. Can't wait for his fall. Hope each day you are feeling better. Prayers are with you.
Date: Jun 22, 2018 12:09 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Never suspected Claire. I hope they get her too.
Would love to see Mikey the fucker go up against Jennifer. The smackdown would be beautiful. Even better if Lindsay and Deb were included.
Michael and his daydreams. Poof!
Rubbing my hands with mischievous glee in anticipation.
Date: Jun 21, 2018 9:51 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Can't wait for splatterday!!! Smackdown Splatterday should be loads of FUN!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2018 8:59 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Michael actually thinks he'll come out of this without loosing Brian? It's nice that Ted has Dale as a friend. Cynthia sees the worth of Justin and is happy for Brian. Not sure how you going to put the kabash on Michael, Lindsay and Deb, but I can't wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2018 8:18 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Oh How I Wish It Was Saturday Splatter Day Already.
I so want to see them scrambling to come up with plausible lies that No One Will Buy.
Deb can't say she was clueless about everything because she was hurting and deceiving Brian to help her baby and now she is going to find out what it feels like to be in the middle of feeding frenzy with no escape.
By the time they all get through (Emmett will be there to right?) with them theywon tt have a crumb to savour or pot to puss in.
Cynthia is a Way Better Friend to Brian than Lindsay could ever be and Justin is right Lindsay was trying to get pregnant when she slept with Brian only it didn't So she waited and for another opportunity, only know she doesn' t have Brian, Gus or even Melanie now.
And as for Claire she is going to wish she had left Brian alone, how are John and Peter?
I am going to be biting my nails to stumps waiting for the next update lol ;)
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2018 7:58 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
Thanks for the earworm Nichelle. I'll have that going thru my head the rest of the day.
So ass kicking commences on Sat?
Date: Jun 21, 2018 7:58 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 2
I can't wait for the next chapter; this is a great teasing: "Saturday is ‘splatterday’!"! Maybe Ted will meet Dale for some more fun!
So, Lindsey, Claire and Michael with a little help / blindness from Debbie: poor Brian; what a life he had!
Date: Jun 21, 2018 2:03 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Omg Lindsay as well by the sound of it. I am loving all this anti Michael/Lindsay/Debbie and they are evil buggers. I look forward to the next chapter
Date: Jun 21, 2018 2:03 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Omg Lindsay as well by the sound of it. I am loving all this anti Michael/Lindsay/Debbie and they are evil buggers. I look forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:43 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
I was pretty sure I had already left a review on this. It is an amazing chapter where Ted stands out and Dale comes up with even more evidence against M&L. I couldn't believe that Lindsay thought that she could just waltz in and everything with Mel would be okay. Looking forward to finding out what Dale found out.
Date: Jun 20, 2018 4:50 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Did Dale find out that Lindsey is involved in Michael's machinations? If not, who is SHE?
Evil cliffhanger!
I hope you are doing better every day. Happy writing!
Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:24 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Great chapter!! Great cliff hanger can't wait for the next chapter. Well wishes and prayers sent your way hope you feel better!
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:23 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Lindsay should've realized remembered that as the mistress her only power is being on her back and knees, and that a scorned wife will use everything in her arsenal to make her husband and the other woman pay.
Plus he adultery being splashed all over the tabloids will help Mel get her marriage cancelled, save Sydney from the harsh fallout by terminating her Ass, plus with everything Mrs. Amanda Auerbach has on them both Sam will be too busy saving his fortune by calling Lindsay the temptress who tried to ruin his marriage in the press. (I hope Amanda takes it all!!!)
Plus Lindsay will be scrambling to save any money she stole from Gus, by crying to Mommy and Daddy who might just want to extend their stay in Europe when they find out about this, besides Lynnette's husband won't enjoy the press camped out on his lawn, Lynnette might enjoy anonymously giving the press some tidbits about her sister.
Brian and Justin might end up in the sooner than think;)
So how much did Deb bully out of Brian and did she also get some of the Rage money too?
How deeply is Lindsay involved?
If Dale found even more evidence than Michael, Deb and the other conspirators have a lot of trouble heading there way.
Thanks for the Update, you take care of yourself We'll wait patiently and be more happier for it cause you're on the mend :)
Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:19 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Well Ted's going to have an interesting dinner to say the least. Can't wait for Dale to drop the bombshell he found out.
I knew Lindsay was behind what Deb and Michael were doing. Screwed herself royally. And now to be named in the lawsuit filed by Sam's wife. Can't get much better than that. Even her parents want nothing to do with her.
Poor Mel, already paid to have the locks changed and now because of that bitch she has to do it again.
Brian and Justin better heal quickly because after Dale is done they're going to want the intimacy they share just to forget the pain from being betrayed.
Date: Jun 20, 2018 12:32 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1
Wow, another fantastic chapter. But more importantly is that you are healing. It may take time, but just hang in there and know that all your followers are praying for you to be completely healthy. Hugs, Marilynne
Date: Jun 14, 2018 4:28 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS
LOVE this!!! Terrific plot lines.
Just wanted to tell you that my reviews will be spotty, so I wanted to apologize ahead of time. I'm just starting a new job (full time) I also have a psrt time job, adn in between, I'm helping my previous boss shut down her business. Needless to say, time is at a minimun these days. Just know that I will be reading adn loving all you write. Know that I'm sending you positive vibes with every word you write and will be loving everything I read. Most of my reviews will be send via osmosis.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2018 7:23 pm Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
I love the fic! It’s just what I needed after my long absence from the fandom and reading fanfics... I can’t wait for more! Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2018 5:49 pm Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
So Michael does have a brain which goes to show he used Brian so he could slack and read his stupid comics!!
Deb might want to get use to be frozen out when it comes to Brian, Justin and everyone else, now that they now she can't be trusted they won't say anything in front of her anymore...Well at least not something that can be used against them but against her, Michael and Lindsay should be fun.
Lindsay is such an amateur and southern being sneaky it is actually good to be sneaky <eye roll> Mel already suspected she was cheating and now that Sam's wife is an inch away from finding out her name she might want to watch her back.
If Mrs. Auerbach sues for divorce and puts Lindsay's full name on the record than there will be nowhere Lindsay can hide from the press, not even Mommy and Daddy can pay to cover this up lol
Lance can be arrested as an accomplice be not only is he hiding the stuff Michael had stolen from the loft, but he also purchased some items aswell.
Hope Deb has room for Michael cause he will soon be moving in, Ben and Hunter are getting ready to clean house and the first thing to go is Michael Novotny <giggles>
Ooo I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: Jun 13, 2018 4:02 pm Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Take that Lindsay and go hide somewhere only you know. Nobody will try to find you. It must hurt to see Brian with Justin, but Brian being friend with Mel is the worse. She can't play one against the other anymore.