Date: Jun 13, 2018 2:54 pm Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Just love the delusions of Mikey & Lindz. Are they not the two stupidest people ever born????? You capture their personality so well. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2018 11:59 am Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Such joy to wake up to another chapter. Mikey and Lindsay actually think they can come out smelling like roses once everything is said and done? I don't think so.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 11:30 am Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Lindsay and Michael share the same affliction. Delusions of grandeur.
Lance will eventually screw up. His feelings for Brian will make him careless. Deb is going to screw her son over to save her own ass, and Sam isn't going to want Lindsay for longer than it takes to screw her.
As least I hope that happens and I can't wait if it does.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 9:23 am Title: PAPERWORK
I love this story. Thanks for updating.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 6:24 am Title: PLAN AND REGROUP
Michael is a total scumbag! He and Lance are perfect for each other; maybe they can share a jail cell!
Lindsay sure did screw up, didn't she! And she never could have imagined that Brian and Mel would become friends and join forces against her to protect Gus. I hope they give Sam's wife her name, she deserves it!
Looking forward to more!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 13, 2018 6:20 am Title: PAPERWORK
Mel is so lucky that Lindsay isn't speaking to her! Hahaha! Unfortunately Deb is talking to her or maybe that should be at her. Deb just expects everyone to drop whatever is going on in their lives and rush to help her and Michael. Love that Deb had to be escorted out by security! And so happy that Mel told her off, especially after the comments Deb made about Hunter.
“Because I’ll sue the thong off him if he doesn’t. Now leave!” - I needed brain bleach after that image! Ewwww!
*Gasp* Lindsay bought dresses in a size 6? Wishful thinking isn't it? And she thought she would get away with it by putting them in Gus' closet? Wow! She is not very clever. Loved Mel's comment about him being too young to dress in drag. LOL! But Lindsay was smart enough to leave without an escort from security.
Mel had all sorts of good news. And Ted's back and all the right friend's are happy that he is; Cynthia is extremely excited about Brian and Justin's LDP; Jennifer is a kick-ass realtor getting locations for Kinnetik and Mel and Janean's office; and this is all making me very happy.
Love how they are all looking out for each other.
Another wonderful chapter, Nichelle!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 13, 2018 6:01 am Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Loving Jennifer's relationship with Brian. I always felt once she got to know him she would see the real Brian much like Justin did and then she would understand their relationship. And I love how he's rubbing off on her - "Language!" Hahaha!
Okay, I did not see that one coming! Rodney! Rodney was at Deb's door! Really enjoyed how he handled her - don't give me attitude and I won't give you attitude. Perfect! She is really unbelieveable when it comes to her man-child! Wow! It will probably bite her in the ass eventually.
Finally Mel isn't taking any shit from Lindsay. Can't wait to see how Lindsay handles that little bit of life.
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 13, 2018 4:22 am Title: PAPERWORK
After being away for a long weekend I get back to more Novotny drama and welcome back Hunter, he's finally away from the Madness!!!
I knew Debbie was up to no good, it's got to hurt like hell to Brian what she did but he's got to rip the band-aid off in one swoop. Her and her parasite have to pay.
Still on the edge of my seat, can't wait for more, no pressure, just you know, a couple of thousand words if you can, lol Thanks for sharing all these wonderful words with us.
bec
Date: Jun 13, 2018 2:25 am Title: PAPERWORK
Michael and Deb, it's all going to come crashing in on the and crush them. No pity.
Does Mel know that Brian's new business is in the old bath house? Can't wait for her reaction.
Date: Jun 12, 2018 11:30 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Awwwwww Brian called Ted....Teddy! So sweet! This whole chapter was fabulous! They always are but this one was especially so. It just flowed perfectly.
Date: Jun 12, 2018 5:59 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Yes, Welcome back Teddy!!! It really must be a shock for Ted to see Brian as he is now. Not totally different, yet so changed.
Mel starting her own practice could only mean more autonomy and workload as well: I hope she will be able to keep up with Lindsay so she could prevent any problem with Gus.
Author's Response:
WOW! 100th review! AMAZING! Thank you so much!
Ted's who journey during the series struck deep chords with me. It gives me such joy to be able to write him this way! I'm also going to have a good time developing Ted and Brian's relationship growing and changing in ways neither of them anticipated.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2018 5:30 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Looks Ted is back and he sharpening his knives for the slaughter, thank goodness he kept such detailed records because Michael and Deb will try everything they can to get Brian to stop, but when Brian needed that money none of them cared to give him a dime.
Might also want to check what money Brian gave to Deb that she promised to payback but never did?
Melanie standing up for herself and not taking anymore of Lindsay's Crap is good, she is right that if Lindsay ain't getting o loving at home then she is spreading her legs for someone else, Ted should also look into the support payments for Gus, Lindsay is only working part time at the gallery and that doesn't pay much, plus she spends money like it will never run out??
Deb is really showing her true colors now.
Ted is about to become the man he should've been years ago and he has his True Friends to help him.
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Jun 12, 2018 4:59 pm Title: PAPERWORK
You do give good chapter. This fic is so unique, I’m on the edge of my seat reading it.
Plus I always love a good anti Mikey story.
Date: Jun 12, 2018 4:51 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Fantastic chapter. Your mojo is working overtime. This story would have made amazing episodes for the series. Great job. Hope you are feeling better.
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2018 4:51 pm Title: PAPERWORK
It's so good to see Teddy back and to have him working for not only Brian and Justin, but Melanie as well. Lindsay is going to be in for a big surprise.
Date: Jun 11, 2018 8:43 pm Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Wow wow wow! That's all I got to say about that lol
Date: Jun 11, 2018 8:02 pm Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
So many things are happening, good and very bad.
I love how Jennifer is with Brian: she is such a great person. Debbie is going to have to explain herself very soon.
Rodney isn't afraid of Deb and she doesn't like that one bit. Vic is so lucky to have found him. As a psych, he must have register many wrong things/doings in the family.
Mel is getting fed up by Lindsay's spoiled child behaviour: I don't give them long before they implode. Mel really doesn't deserve that. Yes, she is blunt, but she's honest, even with Brian in this story.
Date: Jun 11, 2018 7:32 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
What an amazing chapter: so many hot topics finally in the open. It was long due and they exchanged so much.
I also love how you are filling the blanks that were in the series.
Great job! Happy writing!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2018 2:25 am Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Sadly Deb is in on Mikey's manipulation. I'm sure you have devised a wonderful way for her to pay.
Date: Jun 11, 2018 2:06 am Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Do much going on.
The boys can breathe now and get on with Kinnetik. Of course Cynthia is going to work for them. Now I know Ted's in rehab but I get the strange feeling that someone was feeding them info as to how and where to invest the money. Please let it be Lindsay and not Ted who was feeding them.
And now we know that Deb knows exactly what Michael has been up and probably encouraged him. Brian owes them nothing!
Rodney is the perfect one to take her on.
Shame it took so long for Mel to wise up like Ben did. She's going to have a hell of morning when she wakes up. I don't want her to pity Brian but rather her envy him for what he's about to lose.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2018 1:25 am Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Oh Deb you have hung the noose around your own neck yet again helping Michael and this time there really won't be anyone is going to save you.
With Deb buying the house for Michael she has severed the last ties she has to Brian and the hope he had that she was an innocent victim of Michael's fantasies.
Rodney was right about Deb and she is going to see first hand that everything he said is going to come into fruition.
Jennifer is the mother Brian will need when he pulls away from Deb, she will show him love without conditions and another safe haven when Deb turns against him.
Brian and Justin are doing a Domestic Partnership? Hell Yeah!!
Mel should talk to someone about protecting Gus from Lindsay's schemes and to make sure that when she walks away Lindsay can't take Gus away from her, Brian and Justin.
Besides Lindsay might be too busy scrambling when she finds out Justin is suing Michael for back pay to come protect herself first, curious did she get any of the money Michael was stealing from Justin??? Hmmmm <scratches chin>
Brian should call to have the locks changed along with the security code cause after Michael gets off the phone with Deb he might be coming back and his first stop will be the loft <eye roll>
Three Fantastic Updates to Three Fantastic Stories, Thanks So Much! :)
Date: Jun 11, 2018 1:04 am Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Shocked (not) that Michael has put Deb in debt for a house, maybe she will just have to learn the hard way. Love the part Brian and Justin are going to do with the portion of the money from Jason Kemp and future money from their business together. Can't wait for more!!
Date: Jun 11, 2018 12:58 am Title: THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND DOLLARS AND THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION
Great two chapters. Terrific writing.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 3:56 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Wow! Questions that definitely needed answering...good for them! Feeling the love...all over the place! Obviously, that wasn't Jennifer at Deb's door. Hmmmm who was it?
Date: Jun 10, 2018 12:05 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
A conversation so long over due.
A check will so welcomed and humbling.