Date: Jul 18, 2019 10:28 pm Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Ah!!! When I started reading this today, I had no idea it was the end!! Oh well, I got there! I had found it strange that you posted just one story yesterday, as you usually post them all on the same day....
Anyways! WONDERFUL STORY! Congrats on another finished project!
This was perfect! And can I just take a moment to pat myself on the back for guessing Michael actually was one of the shooters? hehe! I've been a long time reader (47 yrs) of Dean Koontz and Mary Higgins Clark, and have gotten pretty adept at figuring out mysteries. And believe me, yours didn't disappoint! Hear-Hear!!!
The classic... if I can't have him, nobody can... is so classic Michael. And the fact the they made the movie with everything Michael didn't want to see, but had no choice BUT to see, prior to the director's cut... was enough the send the sicko really over the edge!! You Go Justin!!!
So, when is Michael's execution planned for? Can we have a popcorn party?
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
Hi Cathy,
Thank you so much for your reviews. As mnention to Deb L, below, I found this a bit of a bind to write especially when I was having RLP [real life probs] so I thought it best to just focus on getting this one finished as things began getting better and mojo starting to return!
Thanks also for your advice and continued support, I value it immensely.
Best hugs and squeezes
Nicole xx
Date: Jul 17, 2019 9:02 pm Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
good one
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 5:30 pm Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
I couldn't get as into this as much as the others, but it was by you guys so was good anyway.
It was a difficult story to follow and even at the end here, I'm still not sure where everything fits in the story or the reasons why. Especially in regards to Brians attack and how they worked out who did what to him.
Oh, well onto the next!
Luv & hugs
Deb L
Author's Response:
Hi Deb, I have to agree with all points and I was writing it! Unfortunately, coinciding with me doing this one was a dificult time in my life and this was a bit harder to write than the others. I kind of lost my mojo where this one as concerned, it is slowly coming back and hope you continue to enjoy my other stories.
Thanks,
Nicole xx
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 5:43 am Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Wonderful!! Micheal so deserves it. Glad his fantasy got shattered. Well, Brian & Justin doing it Raw & for Real. So, No ending of Micheal's sufferings. Hope they keep sending him tapes.
I enjoyed it. Kudos to your writing. Great. â
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2019 1:09 am Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Wow, great ending to a terrific story. Wonderful writing as always.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2019 4:52 pm Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Yes Michael is getting exactly what he deserves which is nothing but pain it won't equal what he caused others but it is enough that he will never get out to inflict more pain in others Ever Again.
The director's cut of the movie Michael should make a nice loop for Michael to suffer through for the rest of his miserable, pathetic life.
Fantastic Ending!
Thank You So Much!!😀
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2019 4:25 pm Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Wow, you gave us the ending we all hoped for. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2019 4:01 pm Title: His Mysterious Capture, The State and The Doctor
Ah ah ah, great idea to record some hot action that he, who shouldn't be named, could replay in his head.
Great story! Thank you for the ride!