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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 2:58 pm Title: Well That's Your Boat Sunk!

Straighten me out.  Michael did a comic on his own?  Doesn't sound good.  Barney must be the key to who shot Brian.



Author's Response:

Yep, he did indeed and no it was not good at all! And that will be revisited as well - as you have just given me an idea - again!

Thanks!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2018 8:29 pm Title: Deliverance

Great two chapters. Of course, my favorite stories usually have Mikey being an idiot or worse. Great writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Deliverance

Ben is not allowing Michael to hide his indiscretions with Barny and he is not holding back. (Good Food Him)

Mercy is Wicked and Michael is an Amateur at this game.

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 8:17 pm Title: The Look of Revelations

Barndoor you better have a receipt for that watch and since they are so exclusive then there should be a number and purchased order for that watch in case it needs repairs or is lost?

Mich and Barndoor Ewwwwwwww Ewww Ewww Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!

Brain Bleach Ain't Strong Enough!!!

Michael is button pushing or at least trying to and if he isn't careful (Please Don't Be Careful!!) the next button pushed will be his when someone lays him flat with a one two punch.

If that truly is Brian's watch then Barnaby is an Idiot to  wear it in public.... Thanks Dumbass!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 5:20 pm Title: Deliverance

Darn I love this story but I'm having trouble keeping up with what's going on. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 5:14 pm Title: The Look of Revelations

oh my!  What does it mean?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2018 4:28 pm Title: Slaking a Thirst

Hot beginning! This pair is slowly building, but they generate fireworks!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2018 4:07 am Title: Slaking a Thirst

Sounds like Brian and Justin are making the most out of their time together. And seriously, they are going to open their window again! So if a cop shows up at their door... just saying...

I just love George and Emmett together. They were always such a power couple.

Once again Mikey is sticking his nose in something that is none of his business, and inviting himself and that other weasel, Barnabus in. And thank you Kiki! I hope it was a nasty, dirty cloth, too.

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to your next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2018 11:38 pm Title: Slaking a Thirst

Great chapter. Oh that Mikey is just so annoying.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2018 5:23 pm Title: Slaking a Thirst

Michael and his Friend should be allowed in but they have to sit at a table far away from everyone with a bug underneath, and the first time he is rude to the staff and complains he and his friend are thrown out and banned for life...After they run up a hefty bill first ;)

Michael enjoys the sound of his own voice might aswell get something useful to use against them both later.

Brian should think about getting in some exercise cause if he isn't limber enough Justin could put him traction lol

7xs!!! WOW!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2018 4:10 pm Title: Slaking a Thirst

Michael has nerve.  You will straighten him out won't you?

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2018 10:08 pm Title: The Mouth Holds a Thousand Lies!

Lindsay, Lindsay, Lindsay... You think you can get Justin in your bed? Did you forget what he said in Season 1?  I like dick. I want to be fucked by dick. I want to suck dick. I like to suck dick. I'm good at it too. So I don't believe you have the right equipment. Besides he's had veritable god Brian Kinney, now. There's no way in this universe you would equal up to Brian Kinney. How did Hunter say it? Oh yes,  It did sound like he was being murdered...twice.

Michael and this Barnabas are a bad combination. Somethings foul in the making between those two. Why would Michael want backing if he can afford it? And why would Barnabus pull out of the deal of backing just because Brian pulled out from putting up the collateral? Are they both involved in the shooting, or is it maybe just Barnabus? Or, is it someone you haven't brought into the picture yet, but Barnabus knows who it is? What does Barnabus look like? You are certainly weaving a web of intrigue.

Keep up the good work. Thank you for this update, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter with more clues to help unravel this mystery.

XOXO ~ Cathy

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2018 12:10 am Title: The Mouth Holds a Thousand Lies!

So Michael's side piece may have something to do with Brian getting shot?

Definitely need to keep your enemies closer.

Lindsay has as much chance of sleeping with Justin as Michael has of growing a brain lol

More security on set is good but feeding Michael false information could be better.

The puppy wants to chase so keep him running after his tail while they continue to put the pieces together to find out who wants to hurt Brian and get their projects taken care of.

Fantastic Update :)

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 6:45 pm Title: The Mouth Holds a Thousand Lies!

Great update.  Mikey just never gives up, guess that is what idiots do !!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 6:13 pm Title: The Mouth Holds a Thousand Lies!

Who was the second meal for? More information is needed before things get clear.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 5:34 pm Title: The Mouth Holds a Thousand Lies!

Do they think that Barnabus is the shooter?



Author's Response:

Or the thief...

Happy reading

S&M Babes



Author's Response:

Or the thief...

Happy reading

S&M Babes

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2018 10:06 am Title: Going And Talking That Extra Mile?

Thank you so very much for this wonderful update. I've been repeatedly looking for the updates of your four stories for a few days now.  I don't know how you manage four stories with your continued frequent updates, but I am definitely not complaining.

As always, a pleasure to hear Michael's rambling thoughts. so I am puckering up to air.  love your witty sarcasm. He no more than got Mercy's accepted response and warning to not do it again, then screws up again in the diner.

Lindsay's, Like I said, I love getting people in trouble! Is going to come back and bite her in the ass. As Marilyn says, but for what someone has planned for her. Looking forward to that, for that conniving bitch! Just knowing she is planning to try to get closer to Justin, is me, becoming concerned. She'd do well to recognize the people he's associated with. I don't think she wants to tangle with Mercy, as we know there is no love-lost between them.

Who was Vic with, and what was Deb's present? Love Vic and Deb in this story.

Brian and Justin... Loved their evening together as they were getting more acquainted.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 6:55 pm Title: Going And Talking That Extra Mile?

Marilyn is here: what is she up to? Is the universe going to implode and the roles will be reassigned?

Lindsay is a troublemaker, but she might get something back and it might get ugly, payback is a bitch!

Vic's quote "stop running your mouth down the path of none-of-your-business?!" is witty.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 6:28 pm Title: Going And Talking That Extra Mile?

Great chapter.  Love how interesting this story is and continues to be.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 2:34 am Title: Going And Talking That Extra Mile?

Just what was it that Mikey did or didn't do?  What is Lindsay up to.  No need to ask what Brian and Justin are up to.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 1:32 am Title: Going And Talking That Extra Mile?

Michael is proving every second how he is going to get quite serious beat down from Mercy and others that question is long and they are all itching to shut his mouth up.

Lindsay is gunning for Justin and it seems someone or someones will be gunning for her, hope she has experience running in heels because a mob could be coming for her too??

Justin and Brian are both going to remember this and every time they Come together ;)

When button pushing better hope they don't snap your arm  when they break your finger! lol

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

Drew hitting on Ben is quite interesting: it's a pair I didn't imagine, but now it seems like a great combination; another powerful couple.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 11:00 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

So sorry Michael. Mercy is about to once again, with the help of the others, destory a little of you.  So he is not going to sign his store over, so he won't be going to Europe with the rest of them. To bad, so sad.  They are not going to miss you Michael. And if you think Mercy will change her mind and give you a free pass, you are sadly mistaken. So, no RAGE for you! Ah ha! Mercy living in the Pitts for 5 yrs. Get a clue Michael! Do you need a vowel? Still insisting they sign the house over to him? He must be a lot richer in this story... if his shop is possibly worth over a $100K...

Yay! Brian and Justin!  Yay! Ben and Drew! (new twist!)  And what's this about Justin not being questioned from the police?  Just who shot Brian???

It's so refreshing reading a story where Brian and Michael aren't best buds... Never Have, Never Will...

Thanks for writing this story and sharing with all of us. Thanks for the update...

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:49 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

Good chapter.  Love this story and can't wait to see where you take it next.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:37 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

Michael thinks he still knows Mercy and that will be his downfall cause she is to Destroy Him.

Not surprised she came back to Pittsburgh five years ago she had no reason to tell Michael anything.

He is just trying to ride her coattails because unless it's selfish he doesn't have original thoughts, and Mercy is not going to play his stupid high school games...at least not without an audience ;)

Drew and Ben???

Hmmmm Interesting, Very Interesting! :)

Well at least this time Ben might actually have a Mind-Blowing, Toe-Curling, Sweaty, All Night Screaming, Pass Out In Ecstasy Orgasms, instead of a Ker Plunk and yawn barely a minute later snore fest??

Thanks for the Update:)

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