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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:12 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

So Mercy has been in the Pitts for 5 years and Michael didn't know?  Very interesting.  What does she have planned.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 11:38 pm Title: Him Being Him Doesn't Make It Okay! And A Little More About Brian

Great story... Wonderful chapter...  Is Michael gonna sign his comic shop over?  If so, they should just use him as a gofer if he comes along... I presume nothing says what each person's job is.  Just how delusional is dear Mikey? Telling Deb and Vic to sign over their house to him???  OMG!   Now what is she talking about... Okay, so she's not being completely honest... hmm... what, pray tell, is she hiding?

Loving the Story, Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 4:25 pm Title: Him Being Him Doesn't Make It Okay! And A Little More About Brian

What else is Mercy hiding?

 Michael is all cans of creepy and that creepiness should work well in everyone else's favor, all they have to do give the little fool enough info to go chase his own tail while they all laugh and get to work.

The arrogance of a fool to think Deb and Vic should just sign the house over to him, I wouldn't  give that little A-Hole Barbie's dream house on loan <eye roll>

And his chance of landing amother hot guy like Ben is using the game Mystery Date lol

So who wanted Brian dead and will they try again??

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 3:47 pm Title: Him Being Him Doesn't Make It Okay! And A Little More About Brian

Very interesting facts about Brian and Mercy's pasts.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 2:03 pm Title: Him Being Him Doesn't Make It Okay! And A Little More About Brian

How did she know his stuff was taken at the hospital.  We are talking Mercy?  I thought she was in England.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 5:27 pm Title: Feasting on the Food of Love and Drinking a Glass of Hate

Deb and Drew are too funny! I wouldn't mind using him as a pillow too.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 4:42 pm Title: Feasting on the Food of Love and Drinking a Glass of Hate

If Michael was involved with Mercy's parents death then he better run and everyone better stand back become she will kill him and smile while she is being arrested.

Esmeralda Skye is a Perfect Name For The Company.

If Michael signs over his store then he should only be allowed to fetch but no say lol

Bet the stuff in his store is worth more than 100k?

Perhaps Mercy can actually make the store successful instead of Michael's personal playground ;)

Fantastic Update :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 3:28 pm Title: Feasting on the Food of Love and Drinking a Glass of Hate

Great chapter.  Love when Mikey isn't a part of the group or as important as he thinks he is.  Love this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 1:27 pm Title: Feasting on the Food of Love and Drinking a Glass of Hate

Are you saying Michael was involved in Mercy's parents ... how and why?  You brain works in marvelous fashion.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 6:37 pm Title: All Players Are Now Present...Let The Games Begin

Should I be liking James?  Mikey and Lindsay's plans aren't going to come together.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 3:26 pm Title: All Players Are Now Present...Let The Games Begin

Ha ha ha, Lindsay's attempt to get to know Mercedes! Flat on her back!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 12:14 pm Title: All Players Are Now Present...Let The Games Begin

Great update.  Glad the Mel is finally happy and away from Lindsay.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:29 pm Title: Crowing, Lurking and Furkling

Brian and the watch: could Michael be more stupid?

It seems that Justin's week-end is going to be very entertaining!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:39 am Title: Crowing, Lurking and Furkling

Tut tut.  Like Mercy is going to believe anything that Michael says. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:33 am Title: Not Getting It But At Least He Agrees to Try

I love the tree decoration remark from Daphne and the meeting with Vic and Rodney.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:26 am Title: Not Getting It But At Least He Agrees to Try

Michael doesn't know which end is up.  Ben is well out of it.  Love how Justin, Chris, and Daphne find Merci and manage to work their way into her graces.  Vic and Rodney will make a wonderful couple.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 11:21 pm Title: Crowing, Lurking and Furkling

Got all caught up on the chapters and they are great.  Love when Mikey is odd man out.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 4:33 pm Title: Two New Sides, One Very Old One and The End

It's not Michael's happy day!  Ben finally got his balls back!

Brian wasn't nice with Justin, even if he should have been awake; he had a good reason to fall asleep.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2018 10:03 pm Title: Two New Sides, One Very Old One and The End

Ben is finally smartening up. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2018 9:49 pm Title: The Point is to Get Self Out of a Hole...Not be an Asshole

Poor Mikey.  Left out in the cold or is that inside.  Love how Ben and Brian are best friends and Mikey is the pain in the butt.  Not much different from what he was in the series.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2018 9:49 pm Title: The Point is to Get Self Out of a Hole...Not be an Asshole

This story is getting better with each new chapter. The dynamic of Brian/Ben is amazing and the one with Michael is as interesting as awful; the flashbacks are intriguing.

Great job!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2018 8:23 pm Title: Two New Sides, One Very Old One and The End

Great chapter.  Finally Ben has the sense to dump the idiot.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2018 6:49 pm Title: The Point is to Get Self Out of a Hole...Not be an Asshole

Thanks for the great update.  Love how this story is moving along. Haven't been many story updates on KD lately so I really appreciate when one is done and this one is so good.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2018 6:38 pm Title: Growing and Groaning

The teasing between Brian and Justin is delightful! I can't wait to see how they will get to the next step.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2018 1:18 am Title: Growing and Groaning

Great update.  Love how this story moves along.  Fantastic writing.

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